OS: Letting Go (Note pg 5) - Page 7

Originally posted by: KaushalyaFan

Very poignantly written. You write so well.

KF

Originally posted by: Smileyface

thank u so much hun! im so glad u liked it!

yeah i thought of the name after i wrote it lol...and i was shocked it fit lmao!

thank u once again!

Originally posted by: pooh_91

for some bizarre reason im unable to like ur os :o

awww hershi

brilliant os

did u just make me cry or what...end was soo intense...

a warning would hav been good :p

love the song...been a long time since i heard a nickelback song :D thanx for that

do write more often..

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Hi Hershi!! I'm first time reading your works!! You write amazing! Seriously yaar, you gave reason you wrote this everything but you didn't say this is gonna be a sad one..!😭

When I was reading, I was like, Ok they will end together at the end.. But when I read it actually, i felt depressed!! Saying 'I love you' separately..! Bad yaar!!😡

Now, I'm gonna read your SS. And hope it's happy happy.. (Else alos I'll read)..!😉

Continue your work dear! And Please PM me whenever you do!😊

Originally posted by: --sunshine--

Okay from where to start😛 wherever u want haha

From starting u explained the turmoil running in ASR;s head so week it ws just truly ASR.

awww thank you <3 i tried my best to portray his turmoil the right way

Than that flashbacks and that feeling linking up was like the OS was running with flow which made my readin a fun.

awww heheheheh thanks <3

Am I talking to walls🤣

lol i had to add humor to it! it got tooo serious haha

U knw even in the show and in ur OS hwtas amazing part the bonding between Anjali ASR and Khushi they have something common between them.

aww thanks...that means so much <333 i tried to show that they both felt comfortable with her jus tlike how she did with them

Khushi and ASR;s emotional connection was epic and amazing

Okay here I loved the money V/s emotional talk

Khushi really knws how to Pull ASR emotional string

ASR's emotional blast was just amazing
hehehe thank u for all of that!!! while she is more emotional he is more money minded...too much of both is not good...and thats what i was showing lol =D

That frama queen thing ws so arnavish I mean u throughout remained in his charcter cz I have seen many people playing with ASR character and they totally turned him opposite which was not with u

hahahahah!!! i love the drama queen line too!!

and after that ring thiny and ASR's feeling were expressed beautifully and again I alws love old connection and linking as it shows deatailing given to ur thinking and OS so loved when he connects to Anjali's words
thank youuu <3

and ending was tooo way SAD but if they would have told there feeling than they must have gone out of there characters. So this was just awesome and never dare to call something bad I totally loved it

i knowww...i started off writing a happy OS...and i dunno how it went this way LOL...so sorry about that!!! though im so glad everyone appreciated it so much =D thank u <333

Amazing🤗

thank u sanju love <333333 im so glad u read it and u enjoyed it! =D

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

that was beautiful!!