OS: Kya yehi pyaar Hai? Updated pg 3

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Note: I want to make one thing clear to everyone on this forum especially addressing the moderators- I am very much aware of all the bashing & what not that has occurred in recent times - there are those out there who cannot tolerate romance nor Arhi - so if you do belong to one of these categories i would request you to refrain from reading my OS and not posting any bashing comments about my story. This is my work of fiction and it is for those of you who are fans of ipkd & Arhi - the content which I am writing is for individuals who are 16+. If you are younger than 16 and not a fan of arhi please refrain from reading my story. Thank you.



Ok everyone this is the story I have in mind of Arhi & their relationship... I am starting this OS from the scene which has stolen our hearts - the scene where ASR is about to kiss KKG...*thuddd* someone pinch me already...!!


I do Hope people on this forum do enjoy my writing & I would very much appreciate feedback from you all... Hopefully the CV's will see my story and maybe use my ideas in the story...!! :))


Ok here I go...



BG music: jaadu hai nasha hai...madhoshiyaan.. tujhko bhula ke ab jau kahan...

ASR is slowly walking towards KKG and KKG is walking backwards feeling scared as to why ASR is walking towards her like this...
Khushi then reaches the wall as there is no where to hide from her prince charming who was totally mesmerized by her beauty...
He gazes upon this beautiful girl in front of him and slowly he puts his hands on her cheeks as khushi closes her eyes and is savoring the moment...the passion...sparks were now flying between both the prince and his princess...
ASR slowly brought his lips towards his lady's lips and slowly bit her lower lip...khushi was in heaven...she felt the passion...the ecstasy... The excitement...
She closed her eyes as ASR planted a kiss on her lips...
Both ASR & KKG were on cloud 9... No words could describe what they were feeling...all this time they were beating around the bush about their relationship & finally ASR could not control himself anymore...he had to listen to his heart now. Enough was enough... He finally got his princess with him... There was no turning back..
ASR then looked into KKG's light brown eyes...she looked beyond beautiful...
He wanted to tell her how he felt about her..how she was always on his mind... How she touched his heart.
Khushi...main tumse kuch kehna chahta hu...
KKG looked a bit frightened but still nodded as she wanted to know what was going on in arnav's mind. She desperately wanted to know what he thought about her and wanted to know if he also felt the same way as she felt about him. After all, it was Diwali and what a better time to confess one's feelings than right now...right this moment...
ASR: khushi yeh sab mere liye bohut mushkil hai kehne ke liye magar main tumse yeh kehna chahta hu ki main tumse...he stopped...he didn't know if he should say it or not...was it wrong if he had feelings for her ? After all, he had grown very fond of her as of late, so why is he hesitating now ?
Khushi: bolo na Arnav ji...aap kya kehna chahte ho ?
ASR then backed off...he was afraid that if he confessed his feelings to the girl of his dreams that she would run away from him forever and never come back.
For all these years he was running away from love. He didn't want to have anything to do with love because he didn't believe in all of that nonsense.
He didn't believe in marriage, he didn't believe in love...this is not something that belongs in his dictionary.
Arnav closed his eyes...while khushi was still looking confused. She didnt know what just happened. Why did asr plant that kiss on her lips and what is he trying to say...?

ASR then turned his back towards khushi looking towards his pool...


Khushi didn't know what to say or think but it was clear to her that ASR was trying to say something to her which he didn't know how to say and if he should say it or not.


She then decided to leave it at that as she didn't want to anger him a bit. She knew inside her heart that ASR loved her. He just couldn't express his feelings.

After all, he is ASR. Arnav Singh Raizada..
Khushi turned to leave when asr said, khushi ruk jao.
Khushi froze...her stomach started to get butterflies ...
Asr turned and walked towards khushi and put his arms around her small waist. Khushi closed her eyes at the feeling of her prince's strong arms around her.
ASR then softly spoke in her ears and whispered, khushi main apne aap ko rok nahi paa raha hoon...I love you dammit...!!!
Khushi couldnt believe her ears...! Was this a dream ? Was this for real ?
ASR's grip on her got tighter...and khushi had her eyes closed as the soft breeze blew against both the dark prince and his princess...Rabba ve playing in the background.
Khushi tried to turn towards ASR but he held her tightly & savored his princess's sweet fragrance..she smelled too sweet...
Since KKG couldnt get lose from her dark prince's grip she then mustered up the courage to say Arnav ji yeh aap ..but asr wouldn't let her talk. Shhh ...dont say anything khushi kumari Gupta.
Just then Anjali was heard calling asr. Chote? Chote tum kahan ho ?
KKG tried to get lose from ASR's grip - Arnav ji Anjali ji aapko bula rahi hai. Bulane do. I want to be with you.
Hai devi maiyya ab main kya karu? Agar Anjali ji ne humko dekh liya Arnav ji ke saath toh musibat ho jaayegi...ab hum kya kare??

Suddenly all the lights went off...the only lights which were on were from the diyas which khushi had turned on by the poolside.

Khushi got a bit scared & asr turned her towards him & looked deeply into her gorgeous light brown eyes...he cupped her innocent face in his strong hands but gently and closed his eyes to kiss her.
Khushi also had her eyes closed as she held for dear life onto asr. There was no way she wanted to risk getting caught red handed by anyone.
Asr then placed a soft kiss into khushi's sweet soft lips...an electric current ran through KKG's spine and her whole body..never in her dreams could she ever imagine that the day would come when arnav Singh Raizada would confess his love to her.
Asr then hugged KKG so tightly and KKG just lost it...she listened to her heart which told her to love this man back with everything which she had. She belonged to him & to no one else. he was the man of her dreams. The one she had been waiting for for so long.
She hugged asr back & would not let go. Bg music: aa bhi jaa sanam yuh na kar sitam Teri baahon mein mar mitenge hum...


End of part 1


Alright people this concludes part 1 of my OS-


Precap:

Asr & KKG slow dance to hulchul hui... Zara shor hua dil chore hua teri ore hua..aisi chale jab hawa...ishq hua yeh hua...


Edited by chammak_challo - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just pulchritudinuous,Amisha.(hope I got it right, coz you have changed your user name)..👏

You have penned it down, so wonderfully..the scenes were splendid..could actually visualize them all...
Waiting for the next,...and thank u for the PM..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it...it was very sweet and passionate..totally Arhilicious !! PM me when you update..if it's not too much trouble.
Edited by incandescent - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing...'sigh' ...if only we could see this on screen. please could u pm me. really looking forward to reading the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue soon plz

add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A fab OS hun!!
Loved it till the end!!!!
The setting was great, and I love the way Arnav confessed his love to Khushi!
Looking forward to reading the next part.
Do PM me when you update please sugar!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2:


Recap: ASR has kissed KKG & has confessed his love to her...

And now for part 2...!!

Arhi are in an eyelock...both are lost in each others eyes... This moment was perfect.
BG music: hulchul hui... Zara shor hua...dil chor hua...Teri ore hua...aisi chale jab hua...ishq hua yeh hua...
Arhi start to slow dance...asr is holding KKG ever so close..
Asr then says to KKG : tum aaj zarurat se zyaada khubsurat lag rahi ho is red sari mein...this is my favorite color.
Khushi blushes and shys away...
But asr isn't done with her yet...he was reminded of the time when KKG was working for him & when he saw her for the first time wearing that red sari for the photoshoot...
He then remembered a project which he wanted KKG to model for...she had the perfect figure for the saris & pom pom less suits which were to be worn for the fashion show.
Khushi kya tum mere liye phir se kaam karogi mere office mein?
KKG was a bit shocked.. Ji? Matlab?
Matlab yeh ki I have the perfect project for you- tum mere liye modeling karogi Indian clothes mein...tumhaara makeover karunga main...!!
Khushi couldn't believe her ears...!! Asr actually wanted her to go through a make over & do a fashion show ? Would she have to get rid of her pom pom suits & change her hairstyle into something else ??
She was suspecting something was wrong. This was fishy...why would asr want her to model for him ? Didn't he love her for who she is & not just be attracted to her because of what she wore or what she looked like ?
Hey devi maiyya yeh humare saath kya ho raha hai ?
Arnav ji, woh kya hai na humein abhi ghar chalna chahiye...aaj Diwali hai na aur humein amma aur babuji ke saath bhi Diwali manana hai...
But ASR was not about to let her go.
He grabbed khushi by the shoulders and said in a low voice khushi kumari Gupta, tumne mera sawaal ka jawab nahi diya... Maine tumse ek baat puchi thi.. Now give me an answer...!!
Khushi got scared & said aarnav ji chod diye humein...!!
ASR then realized that he indeed was hurting her shoulders and slowly loosened his grip...
KKG looked afraid and said humko office kab aana hai?
Kal.
Kal?
Hey devi maiyya...!! Ab kya hoga humara? Kal toh mujhe lavanya ji ko...
Asr cut her off & said forget about lavanya. You are coming with me tomorrow and that is final.
Khushi nodded and then started to leave the poolside area to go back into the house.
ASR grabbed her by the waist again and said tum mujhse door kahan jaa rahi ho?
Arnav ji chodiye naa..humein jaane di jiye...Anjali ji humein kabse bula rahi hai ...
Toh phir u are coming with me. He takes her hand and walks into the house where all the guests are standing and talking..lavanya sees Arhi & runs up to khushi & says chamkili tum kahan thi itni deer se ? Tujhe kabse dhund rahi thi main...
KKG turned red & said lavanya ji hum idhar hi they...chalo humein ab ghar chalna chahiye... Bohut deer ho gayi hai...!
She looked at asr who didnt want her to leave..he wanted her to stay as long as possible...lavanya then said arre chamkili raat bohut ho gayi hai tum akeli kaise jaayegi? ASR tujhe chod dega ghar pe.
KKG turned red again & said nnnahi lavanya ji hum chalenge..koi problem nahi hai.
Asr then said no I'll take u home. Let's go. He goes outside & KKG hesitantly follows him. She didn't want to make it so obvious that she was in love with asr.
Outside in the car asr was waiting for his lady. He didn't want to leave her for 1 min.
KKG got into the car & asr started to drive. He decided to take the long way to KKG's house as he wanted to know if KKG loved him back.
Both arhi felt a bit awkward but someone had to break the ice. KKG still felt like she was dreaming... This was too good to be true that her prince charming actually did love her.
She then noticed that asr was taking the long way to her house.
Yeh kahan jaa rahe ho aap? You passed my house...!!
Asr pretended like he didnt hear KKG. He just drove on...went faster but then got a flashback where KKG told him that she gets scared when people drive fast. So he slowed down...
And eventually stopped the car.
KKG was too confused. Aap ne gaadi kyu roka ?
Asr didn't say a word. All he did was lean over to KKG & put his finger on her lips. And motioned her to be quiet.
Khushi mujhe tumse kuch puchna hai...it's important for me to know this.
Eyelock between Arhi...
Words needed not to be said here ...because the eyes said it all...!!
KKG: ji puchiye
ASR: khushi woh...uh...
How do I say this to you??
KKG: what say say ? Say na say na...:P
ASR closed his eyes..he didn't know how to say it or rather ask...
Khushi sensed that he was hesitant in asking whether she too loved him or not.
ASR took a deep breath & mustered up the courage to say, mujhe yeh bohut farak padta hai ki agar tum bhi wahi feel karti ho jo main karta hu.
KKG felt like she had indeed a special bond with her ASR.
They truly are meant to be...they shared the same situations...and the same feelings...
kKG smiled & said, Arnav ji, hum bhi aapse pyaar karte hai...hum bhi wahi feel karte hai jo aap karte ho...
ASR leaned over & kissed his sweet princess again...This was too good to be true...

BG music: tum chain ho...karaar ho...mera ishq ho...mera pyaar ho...

Precap: ASR proposes to KKG...😳

StAy tuned...!!


Edited by chammak_challo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oye hoyye !! good update. looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome story..plz pm me whn ya updt next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cool, proposal coming up😍

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