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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

loved ASR's part too girl! it wuz just WOW!😲

you are too good!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: _mahi_
There were too many of them and only one of her.
😭

you made me cry nayika😭😭 this was so emotional

didnt we have enough coz of the episode😭😭

Oh no! I always seem to be making you cry! Sorrry!

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Nayika!
Loved both POV's!!!

Khushi's seemed to have over powering sorrow and pain, whereas Arnav's was frustration and anguish, laced with pain!!!

Two brilliantly written pieces hun!!!

Simply fab!

Thanks for the PM!!

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Thanks so much! You're always so nice :D I'm so glad that the emotions managed to come through :)

Originally posted by: -Garima-
Awww! That was so sad but very heart warming! :)

I really feel for Khushi, I can feel her pain. The way you described it was so correct..I almost had tears in my eyes! :) But totally loved the way you ended it. It was beautiful Nayika. =)

--Garima

Originally posted by: -Garima-
This comment is for Arnav's POV:

He's in such a dilemma! Poor guy! :( And while I was reading this part "tujhe bhula diya" started playing on my iTunes. It's such an apt song for his situation. I really feel bad for both Arnav and Khushi, I hope all this is over soon so they can finally confess!

Great job though! It's like you live in each characters' mind haha awesome job Nayika! (:

--Garima

Thank you so much :D Always look forward to your wonderful comments. Haha well I might not live in their minds but they certainly do seem to live in mine! :P