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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

aww fanx 4 writin arnavs pov

luvd it relii sad

fanx 4 da pm x

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

gosh! that was fab! poor khushi, she's so broken!!

thanks for the PM! please do write one from Arnav's POV!

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luckybin

@luckybin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

all your OS's are outstanding! I love them all, and thank you for his POV.

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: areeba123hina
gosh! that was fab! poor khushi, she's so broken!!
thanks for the PM! please do write one from Arnav's POV!

Thanks!
Arnav's POV is on Page 4 :D

Originally posted by: soni4eva
aww fanx 4 writin arnavs pov
luvd it relii sad
fanx 4 da pm x

Thank you for reading and commenting :) Glad you liked it!

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Hanieya Rehman

@Haniibee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Fabulous!!!

AWWW...Khushi's haalat is making me sad!

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Awww! That was so sad but very heart warming! :)

I really feel for Khushi, I can feel her pain. The way you described it was so correct..I almost had tears in my eyes! :) But totally loved the way you ended it. It was beautiful Nayika. =)

--Garima

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Nayika!

Loved both POV's!!!

Khushi's seemed to have over powering sorrow and pain, whereas Arnav's was frustration and anguish, laced with pain!!!

Two brilliantly written pieces hun!!!

Simply fab!

Thanks for the PM!!

😊

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

This comment is for Arnav's POV:

He's in such a dilemma! Poor guy! :( And while I was reading this part "tujhe bhula diya" started playing on my iTunes. It's such an apt song for his situation. I really feel bad for both Arnav and Khushi, I hope all this is over soon so they can finally confess!

Great job though! It's like you live in each characters' mind haha awesome job Nayika! (:

--Garima