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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

ood luck for your test!
Wow, that was a really long update, but every word was captivating. I just loved this os. It's the start of arhi's love story. I liked how you ended this os with the whole bit about the hurdles.

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Holy cow that was awesome!!!! Paneer ki kasam

thanks for the pm please continue soon!!!! After ur exam of course

Good luck on them... And I hope you do well

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Hey Bristy...If u think lame n long are perfect adjective for this then u will get tamatars for calling this as lame u know...

It was long but lovely😛 😛

Awesum dear! Best wishes for ur exams...

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

tht was the best os i've read so far!!!

awesome job!!!!

i loved it soo much!!!!

thank you so much for the pm!

mind blowing os!!

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

loved it so much. thanks for the PM. so funny how Arnav told Khushi not to shake her head when she was on the phone 😃

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Zehra

@senorzorro12

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

loved it loved it loved it

laxmi hahaha interrupted the scene 😆

hope u do good in ur exams and continue this OS😊

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dyhardfan

@dyhardfan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

omg this was awesome... magical

thanks so much 👏😃

god bless

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Kamalika Debnath

@SK_Love

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

khub bhalo hoyeche. bhalo kore exam dio

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veryberry01

@veryberry01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

What the... i felt like saying this when the story stopped.. it was beautiful... awesome... just splendid... i dont have naymore words to say this... but girl u rock... plz write more...

I love the paneer ki kasam scene...

Just continue it...

Love

Veryberry

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monsi08

@monsi08

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Kahan thi yaar... aur aayi to ye kya kar diya..!!!..
Extra long... nah... it was too short... aur likho dear...😃 Dil maange more ... 😉

I told u .. you create magic with ur words... your "dhak dhak OS" impressed me so much... and this one's ... ah... BRILLIANT !!!

Cheers,
Monsi

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