OS: The Beginning

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Bristy

@the_rain

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Sanchari

@.hea.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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KILLER!!!!!!

you are damn good!!

I imagined Khusi and Arnav in the car at late night, with he tilting his face towards her and then the result was that, I was dancing in the dreamland the next moment!!😍

Perfect beginning for the new life!! Loved it, what else, I am IN LOVE WITH THIS!!❤️

just got me so engrossed!!

last scenes, uff Laxmi!😆

and that Khusi spoiling romantic mood, from when did Arnav started taking interest in these

Mind blowing!!⭐️

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Naina

@ns2095

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

Paneer ki kasam that was amazing !!!!

I love that your stories always have the full package romance, humor and a little bit of brother-sisterly love. Keep up the good work.

Ps: thanx for the pm ..and please please find time to continue your FF. I'm waiting impatiently and also good luck with your exams :)

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it. all the best for ur exams. pls update when u are free. pls pm me too if u can.😊

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

it was pretty goood..it was long,but loved it as stuff was fab..i was bored..but it helped me...thnx for pm hun...and i really really liked it so..the os was pretty goood.

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limitless

@limitless

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

All the best for your Exams :) and i hope Anjali would get some senses as you have mentioned here :)

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

awww a lovely os 😍 lub it lub it darlin...

they should'v fallen into da pool instead of da floor 🤪

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

I went crazy over the story 😳

All the best for your exams and Pls update more like this

Pls add me to ur PM List for FF & OS

Thanks yaar

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

She knew if they ended up married, he would continue being a Lard Governor, grouchy, bad tempered, ill-mannered. And she would continue being annoying, loud, impulsive. But it wouldn't matter because that's who they are. They would bicker, they would fight, they would accuse each other. But in the end of the day, they'd know that they have each other, in love and in pain. Life would be like having a new adventure every day.

But when she tried to think of a life with Shyamji, she imagined her to be in the kitchen, cooking. There would be nothing personal. She'd cook and clean and take care of the family. He'd work and earn and take care of the family. He'd keep saying sweetest of words to assure her that he loved her and she'd keep giving him false big smiles so that he can assume that she loved him back. That would be all of the life, dull and boring, where there would be no anticipation for tomorrow as it would be all perfect and planned. And when she'd die, she wouldn't even know that she's dead.

These lines were superb in comparision to the kinds marriage with love and marriage without love is shown...

The whole story is so positive so cute and so funny that i just grinning like stupid!!!!!