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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Vistaa, yeah... i tend to be a bit poetic

they say prose needs to be complete..

with poetry one can find short cuts to say a lot without actually saying it

i try to say much with verse...

where prose would mean baring a lot more!!
ambiguity sometimes is good for individual interpretation's facilitation.

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Radhe1085

@Radhe1085

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Vrushali, that is simply amazing. Oh man that was so touching scene, I don't know if CT's will come up with something like this but I am all ok to read and visualize it. Thank you.When the deed is done it's just so simple isn't it? a simple I am Sorry, WOW

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

@thanks Janet - when it comes to the show i try to be within its bound..only side stepping a bit. He would not be the kind to actually apologise publicly but i felt a gesture in song...would be fitting that can be understood by only two even in a crowd.

again some liberty as a writer i suppose.

@thanks sruthi, i was not in the mood but then something struck and i just wrote it...

@smarty - Ah too many things i try to do!! but yeah... no fanfare just plain..talking sometimes though i am sure Arnav kabhi aise publicly maafi nahi maangega!!

@zuzana - thanks so much

@pranatim - thank you!

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Radhe1085
Vrushali, that is simply amazing. Oh man that was so touching scene, I don't know if CT's will come up with something like this but I am all ok to read and visualize it. Thank you.When the deed is done it's just so simple isn't it? a simple I am Sorry, WOW

yeah it should be so simple, yet we make things so difficult

Tujhpe yoon chilaana hak na tha mera
par kiya har baar tujhe ruswa yoon

jab nahak tujhpe chilaaya hoon mein
toh maafi mangna toh phir bhi haq hai mera

Edited by -RushTrip- - 14 years ago

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rechus

@rechus

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Superb... Change of arnav unbelievable...

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

@ rechus thanks so much yep he has changed has he not

today even in his Get out to banwari was not that harsh!!

the woman has done her jalebi trick on him

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Radhe1085

@Radhe1085

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

yeah it should be so simple, yet we make things so difficult

Tujhpe yoon chilaana hak na tha mera
par kiya har baar tujhe ruswa yoon

jab nahak tujhpe chilaaya hoon mein
toh maafi mangna toh phir bhi haq hai mera

It's true we make things difficult, you said it "be a man and apologize"

Lets see if its mighty ASR who asks for apology as if ordering her to accept or will it be the cutiepie Arnav who will ask for forgiveness.

hey I love the way you use poetry and shayari.

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Suddenly the song played "Humse Rahoge kya hamesha khafa, Maaf bhi kar do jaana…" and La jumped up and down saying, "Ye toh Bobby Deol ka gaana hai…." and pulled Khushi to the enactment of the song the way Bobby had done in the movie. Khushi's eyes were still riveted and she gaped when as the lyrics came to maaf kar do jaana, he held the lobes of his ear and mouthed, "maaf kar do"

When I read that part I swear I almost jumped out of my seat! It was too good!! I loved it !! I read many predictions on how Arnav was gonna apologize to Khushi and found this to be the best! This is just Fabulous and it would be soo awesome to see this happening in the show!!

Fantastic job !!

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Radhe thanks...

and i have replied on the FF too..a long drawn one at that

and yeah..before i started writing for many years i wrote poems...must be my laziness!

and i am still lazy sometimes and dont complete what i start!

@ Petit Tu

thanks yaar your comment made me smile..you jumped huh! well the song is courtesy...Nagz...i was more of the amitabh bachchan

era

ram balram - achcha kaho chahe bura kaho
jhoota kaho chahe sachcha kaho
humko sab kubool humse bhool ho gayee
humka maafi dai do

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

yeah it should be so simple, yet we make things so difficult

Tujhpe yoon chilaana hak na tha mera
par kiya har baar tujhe ruswa yoon

jab nahak tujhpe chilaaya hoon mein
toh maafi mangna toh phir bhi haq hai mera

Har nazar ko ek nigah ka haq hai..
Har rooh ko ek aah ka haq hai..
Hum bhi dil lekar aaye hai is duniya main..
Hume bhi ek gunah ka haq hai...