OS: Based on ASR's Character dheela promo!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: desigirl_18

OMG Mahi this is oohhh soo very good!! wow brilliant!!! loved it!!! Just WOWOW!!! i just wrote an OS too on the promo lol, but mine seems like nothing after i read urs😆!! too good yaar!!!

Thanks a bunch yaar!!... I haven't read your OS but will do so!... Arey yar...I can say one thing without even reading yours... both of us must be equally good cause we've put in our respective styles in it!! A piece of our mind in our own way... has to be special in our own way!!

Originally posted by: monsi08

Mind blowing .. !!!
👏

Cheers,
Monsi

Thanks a lot Monsi!!

Cheers and Hugs,
Mahi

Originally posted by: Lotsav_phun

well i am honored to read this...loved the way you think...keep enthralling me..take care😎

Chalo... I'm sooo happy you liked the product of my devilish mind!!😈

Originally posted by: rechus

Well said... Excllnt.. Thanks..

Haiii thaaankkk youuu!!!!!!!!!!😆😃

Originally posted by: fallenstar

dis was awesome Mahi..🤗
i really hpe dis happens yaar😍

Though I know this won't happen... the stuff between ArHi is very unpredictable... If I am able to make a prediction.. there is a cent percent chance that it won't come to pass!!

But it will be nice if it happens... but I want more things to happen beside it as well!!..

Originally posted by: -Ammie-

Omg..fantastic peice of writing...its very likely to happen..u have done a faboulous job...captured both the promo and the precap in your short story very nicely...

faboulous job...love it...hoping the Cv's aim for something like this..!!

Thanks for reading!!.. Mine is very ordinary actually... I hope the cvs dazzle us in the sequence and do not make it a huge let down!

Originally posted by: meepha

oh even u worte oneeE!!

Lemme read

*after reading*

Ouch man!!!!U took it to the next level of hatred😛

nice😉

Hatred is the last step that both need to take... before Love comes in... after this limit reaches its boundaries... ArHi will have no choice but to fall in love!! Atleast they're moving away from the unending silliness...

Originally posted by: Jazz_mayur

That was awesome👍🏼, haye..show main bhi aise dikhao please😛

Thanks a million... reading your comments made my day!!

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

A fab OS Mahi!!

Every single emotion was really well written.

The setting and the mood were perfect.

👏👏

Thanks a ton!! I wanted to add more but khair choro!!

Originally posted by: pinguunique

Woww!!! really good os - u write very well, u should write more :):):):)

Thanks sooo much!!.. Actually I do write OS... One of my OS is Khushi's Excursions while I've started a FF too... on the story of Entry of Khushi's best friend!!