OS: Based on ASR's Character dheela promo!!

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: zee10
WOW...superb...
very well written

Thanks a ton Zee!!😊

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meepha

@Meeph

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

oh even u worte oneeE!!

Lemme read

*after reading*

Ouch man!!!!U took it to the next level of hatred😛

nice😉

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.Jazz.

@.Jazz.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

That was awesome👍🏼, haye..show main bhi aise dikhao please😛

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

A fab OS Mahi!!

Every single emotion was really well written.

The setting and the mood were perfect.

👏👏

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Izza

@memories_im

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Wow..Beautifully written..Awesome choice of words.. 😳

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pinguunique

@pinguunique

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Woww!!! really good os - u write very well, u should write more :):):):)

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Brilliant writing Mahi!

U wrote his emotions so well @ the end when he realized what he had done.

-Sona

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

OMGG This was brilliant 👏

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incandescent

@incandescent

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

good jod mahi0809. i also think sth similar will happen.

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Hiya Mahi 🤗

Jus now got 2 read it...It was amazing dearie!

Arnav babua show main kya karenge yeh toh pataa nahin...but I wud love if he does this...or even mre 😆

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