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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: meepha
Awww!!!!

That was nice of khushi!!!

Muft ka kiss:D

sorry,i am a lill hyper:D

Nice OS

Haila meepha...

you talk Arnav's language...

Kiss ko bhi...paiso mein tol rahi ho?

Muft ka??

arre

Zakhm diya muft mein
Toh marham bhi tooh dein

Pyar kiya muft mein
toh dard bhi toh dein

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meepha

@Meeph

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

@rushtrip

Yo!!thats what happens when u get an over dosage of "money" "auqaat" etc(u know the rest😉) hence i'll blame the CV's for making me use his language:D

Wah wah!!!

Kya baat hai rushtrip aap ki!!!

Wah wah

*muqarar muqarar*

U say that when a shair ends..So i used it😃

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Hey Vru!!

A fab OS darling.

It was so lovely to read.

I loved the way its from Arnav's point of view. The description of his feelings and the changes in them were great. She soothes him in ways he can't even begin to realise and accept, but understands in the same breath, that it can only be her.

Arnav Singh Raizada, forever the conundrum!

It was so natural for her to kiss his burn when he held her. Credit to your beautiful writing Vru!!!

I loved the way you swiftly changed the scene without making it seem awkward or odd in any way!! In fact the way he asked her to sit on the bike was quite funny...idiot guide types!

Loved Laxmi...she's such a star!

The bike was a very sexy touch Vru...Lagta hai besharmi hum sab mein koot koot kar bhari hui hai. Uske baghair guzara hi nahin!

Thanks for the PM and apologies for this essay...😉

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tvmylove

@tvmylove

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

WOW awesome... I like it. U have dme a great job

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

My Phool i shall take this essay anyday...😳

thanks zee10

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bikerider

@bikerider

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

rush hehe you completed what CVs started.
women in his life 😆 , thank god lakshmi did not get miss when they had eye lock session 😉

bike aww 😍 one more addition to the list which can be added as a scene by CVs 👍🏼 my list is growing 😆

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Thanks Sharu..

yeah...i would love to see a glimpse of the daredevil Arnav

who before donning the suave and debonair look

was wild with the first taste of success for a passion he had cultivated since childhood..a young boy...who was waiting to turn 18 before he could get a bike and wear his leathers...and helmet

only to have that dashed at 15...when life changed for him...

but Arnav never forgot that dream and it is but one indulgence...he has though kept undercover most of the time... it is something he does when he feels wild and carefree...just once in a while!!

riding in the dark night..
a dark knight

with no star shinning bright
rides a dark knight

oh he looks a sight
rides a dark knight

dont mistake him for a light
for he is a dark knight

a girl's dreams? not quite right
he is a dark knight

oh but, but he just might
turn into your knight

Edited by -RushTrip- - 14 years ago

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Gabbarwa.
My simple voice is faulting with nothing to sae.

Good job

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Thanks destiny

kya kya armaan is dil mein chuppe hain
ki Arnav ke tevaar jo humko dikkhe hain

un sab se abhi ye dil na bhare hein
ki hunar kuch woh apne mein liye hein

ek biker, ek aashiq jo rukke rukke se hein
bas ek khushi hi na ye sab dekhhein hein..