OS - Unchained Melody & Take my Breath AWay pg 7

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Bristy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

That was brilliant...👏

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Sejal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-
Thanks sejal

i guess the best we can do is give them ideas for what we want to see...considering what we were discussing on the other thread..

some sizzling moments?? within the parameters of a family channel and yet.. driving her wild with imagination...??

doable isnt it??

Yes...if only they read it.😆...though I will never understand this family channel thing.🤔...they have shows that deal with mature content and yet are averse to showing it.

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Chinu5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Beautiful...Loved it...plz add me in your pm list ...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

*sigh * 😍 😍 😍 is all i can manage to do ...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Res

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First of all Vrush thank you so much for writing it!

I only told you yesterday that if you could write one

And your wrote it so quickly!

The one shot was so beautiful!

haha i like how he hugged Khushi instead of Lavanya but still kept hold on her when he found out it was Khushi and Khushi even leaned back into him.

I loved how he removed the smudge of flower himself after him telling her but her not listening.

Sparks must have flied by the touch of them two together 😆

Aww Arnav wants to torture his Khushi, that's why he found every reason to be around her, so that he can tease her with his presence, knowing she doesnt like it

Oooh they taking help from each other

Arnav asked Khushi to help him with his plants? 😲

Is that even possible lol

He should have told her your payal is with me?..Want it come take it 😛

Lol haha aww when she put some water on him she probably got scared thinking he's going to erupt, but all he erupted was with a smile 😆

They fell in the pool and what happened in the pool hopefully won't stay in the pool 😛

Finally he realises he needs Khushi and Khushi is a unique piece and won't leave him alone ever

Lovely OS

Do write more

Edited by sweet_girl234 - 14 years ago

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nahtani88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Fantastic OS
Thanks 4 The PM

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mechantefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Oh My Vru that was charmingly beautiful. And I love the song...the righteous brothers had that thing in their voice - you couldn't help but believe them!!

I only wish they show such stuff in IPK...na...Geet main maang maang ke thak gaye!

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nabeela.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Hey! Wow... another fab OS! The pool scene was sooo romantic. You're a fantastic writer! Keep up the great work... I will be looking out for more of your one-shots. 😉