Os laxmi jee ( my take was close)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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La: oh my hands i need a manicure ... she just walkout of the kitchen

Nani : enter kitchen found everything ready" hmmm lagta ha koi jadu ki chari mil miss Khashap ko"( i guess she found a magic stick ) she just walk back to her room

Laxmi : like always move around nani

Nani: jee laxmi jee kya baat ha aap kuch naraz ha ...patted her

Anjali :walk in with Arnav and Shyam "Nani kya woh raha ha"

Nani: kuch nahi yeh Laxmi kuch perechan ha aaj.

Shyam: patted it

Laxmi walk out

Arnav: i am going to my room

Anjali: chota you will not have dinner.

Arnav: khaloga baad mein just want to be alone

Mani jee: uff aagai aap Anjali

Anjali: mami jee kya huwa

Mani jee :pacho kya nahi huwa .. bus aap humara funereal mein aata aata ragai

Anjali: why what happen?

Mami jee : uff yeh miss teep taap Kashap na to hum ko bara upsettia kya

Anjali: per huwa kya

Mami jee: humrwa murder karna wali thi woh.

Anjali: where is she ?

Mami jee : apni make up kitwa la ker beta ha ... arnav betva ka pthuher is in danger

Anjali hum dekhta ha

Nani: aap beta Arnav dekhe laga...


La :looking her self in mirror" uff the heat has spoil all my skin.i should apply mask before changing . it will be no use to wear a new dress .she placed her dress on bed and she apply mask on her face , placed cucumber at her eyes and lay down.with her head phone on

Arnav: knocked at her door but didnot find any reply he walk to his room. as he knock the door open

Laxmi walk in it move here and there . it sit on her bed on her dress .. chew it a bit..

LA: i know ASR will love to see me in this color

Laxmi: saw cucumber it add from the plate placed next to La .. .laxmi finish it look around saw one on La eyes it clime on sofa back and try to eat... its tongue lick La fore head .

LA: ASR is that you honey ... she felt some one touch her softly

Laxmi : could not reach it jump on the arm where LA arms were walk on it

LA: it is tickling ASR , why you are in such a romantic mood.

Laxmi: reached to her eyes and with picked up one cucumber and chew it ...

LA:Arnav kya ha give me back i just need to relax after so much cooking.

Laxmi: placed its feet on her shoulder and picked the other cucumber...

LA: i am having goosebumps ASR...

Laxmi: lick her nose.

LA: oh ASR..

Laxmi: sneeze maa maa

LA open her eyes and just shocked she could not speak for some time

Laxmi: lick her face

LA: shouted you i will kill you

Laxmi: got scared and pee on her... and jump on bed

LA : what the hell is this ASR.. she just could not believe.

Laxmi: legs were tangle with her shirts and it ran out.

LA: on top of her voice ASR i will kill her she just ran out behind her.

Arnav who was watering his plants thinking about Khushi her house door was coming in front of his eyes again and again... he heard La voice ran towards her room

Laxmi: reach the main hall with LA shirt sat next to Nani

LA: reached behind her " i will not leave this goat"

Arnav: kya huwa

LA: she had my cucumber and .paused

NAni: tou aap aur lala miss khashap kitchen mein ha

Mami jee : hello hi bye bye : waitwa i will bring

LA: she pee on me and see ..my designer clothes she pointed at her dress on which LAxmi was sitting..

Anjali: just could not hide her smile...

Arnav: i will buy you more

LA: throw it out or i am going .

Arnav:looked at nani 'LAvanya you come with me "

LA:no you decide right now if it will stay in this home i will not.

Nani: thek ha aap ja sakthi ha miss Khashap kyun ka Laxmi ka tou yeh ghar ha

Arnav: just could not say any thing :Lavanya baat tou suno "as he saw her walking out

LA: please dont follow me i cant stay in this home..

Mami jee : saauo maam aap ki gootawa tou bari taaz ha

Nani: ha Laxmi ko insan ki pechan ha Arnav ko nahi...(laxmi can recognized people not Arnav)

i hope you guys enjoyed it ...dont forget to comment


Happy Independence day to all

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Posted: 14 years ago
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guess talented brains lyk u will become authors!! keep up the good work!lol and u did very good by including laxmi!
so sweet!!
very nyc!!
pls pm me if u hv more of urs!
and keep it up!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i was reading this one only and you pmed me😆
it was very amazing..😆..good one👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good One Sweetz 😆!! interesting <3 Well done 👏
thaanks for the pm Nadiyya

and happy Independance Daay to uu too 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lol. i did smile. really good :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lots of hugs for opening this 🤗

Great topic. Laxmi is one of my favorites (if you haven't guessed already). I just hope my other two favs ASR, mamiji get more screen together.

ASR and Laxmi seem to be in mutual ignore mood though I don't think there is any ill will from either side. Mamiji needs to focus on being loved by Laxmi. Laxmi loves everyone. She doesn't discriminate 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Naddiya ji!!!!!!!
aap ne toh ahme Independence dila diya Lavanya se
LOL not me...ASR😆

It was damn funny!!!!!
Laxmi licking lavanya
i couldn't stop laughing😆
You are totally a born writer👏

HAPPY INDEPENDENCEDAY
To you too!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣 Laxmi licking La... OMG!! I really hope CVS do something
like that...it would be epic!
Lovely OS...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Vishwa-

🤣 Laxmi licking La... OMG!! I really hope CVS do something
like that...it would be epic!
Lovely OS...

it was hungry na ... 😆 i smile i can only give you all
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: asr4ever

Lots of hugs for opening this 🤗

Great topic. Laxmi is one of my favorites (if you haven't guessed already). I just hope my other two favs ASR, mamiji get more screen together.

ASR and Laxmi seem to be in mutual ignore mood though I don't think there is any ill will from either side. Mamiji needs to focus on being loved by Laxmi. Laxmi loves everyone. She doesn't discriminate 🤗

i was not able to find it's pic ..
i hope soarnav and mami ji come on screen .
Asr was lost as his princess has left him 😆

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