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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heeyy everyone,
i havent written a fanfic in a while, and just thought since i have nothing to do duirng my summer vacation, might as well start one. i REALLY ador Arnav and Khushi's jodi. And i just wanted to know iff anyone has their fanfic called "Taqdeer" for this couple. If soo doo let me know, so i can change it.
I cant really recall the names from the show, soo ill just stick to the ones i know and maybe add a few names, and will give descriptions of who it is in the concept.😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi dear- welcome to the forum:)
I also adore Khusi & Arnav! I'm not really sure if anyone has got a fan fiction called "taqdeer". Just double check in case I am wrong but yeah I can't wait for your fan fiction- do PM me when you have updated your introduction, thanks xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey sweetrozie, thank you soo much for your encouragement. Here is my first part, and sorry if my hindi is not so well, lol. ive learnt hindi by watching series and movies. Do let me know about your thoughts!
ps : i wasnt to sure of the names, so i will include everything else as soon as i can.

Taqdeer

PART ONE

It was loud and a busy place at the Gupta's residence. Servants rushing here and there with food , flowers and what not. Seemed as if there was going to be a wedding held.Gayatri was roaming around giving the flower men instructions.

Gayatri: "Oo ji ! Suniye, aap please vahan paar aur bhi lagaye na? bohut zyaada simple lagraha hai." ( she walked near another worker who was decorating the staircase) "Ouuf, aur aap? Kya karahe hai? Yahan pe gulaab.."

Pankaj walked in the room when he heard his wife complaining while he was on the phone .Gayatri turned as she felt someone's presence.

Gayatri : "Dekhiye na. Pehle toh paise bohut mangte hai aur upar se yeh..(picking up garlands) saare galat tarike se lagaraha hai."

Pankaj : "Gaaa..yaa"

Gayatri: "Aap kuch kehte kyun nahii?"

Pankaj : " Gayatri..*chuckles* tum kuch zyaada hi tension lehrahi ho. Tumhari BP high hojayegi. Phir?..mera kya hoga saibaa..?

She blushed when he placed his firm hands on her shoulders after cupping her face.

Gayatri: "Chaliye, choriye aap" Turning all red like a tomato.

Pankaj laughed , so did Gayatri. Gayatri was still wearing a stress look on her sweet face.

Pankaj : " Abb kya hua ji?" he wondered.

She walked ahead of him . He came behind her reading the worried look on her face. His hand rested on her left shoulder. She slightly looked on her left and then looked back straight.

Gayatri : "Khushi ko shayad kuch bhi yaad nahi hai. Uski saath jo kuch bhi hua. Hamein batade na chahiye..aapke kya rai hai jee?"

She turned to face him with a sad face. Her smile was gone as she broke down feeling terrible hiding the truth away from her.

Pankaj : "Gayatri . Khushi humari 'Jhansi ki Rani ' hai.Usse koi farak nahi paregi. Fikar mat karo."

To change the atmosphere he got into his joking mood.

Pankaj: "Oo jee tum na, koi tension mat karo. Main yahan ki baatein sabhal ta hoon! Tum rasoi main jao. Shayad vahan rasoi main kuch zaroorat ho?"

Gayatri came back to the world where she had to stress for her daughter like's marriage , and agreed with her beloved. She smiled, and walked away recalling all the work that had to be done.

Pooja was giving instructions because the chefs were all very much upset with her bua ji. She tried to get the situation under controlled, but failed. Out of anger Pooja raised her voice because she had enough of the argument.She started to give instructions in the kitchen. She was furious, muttering words as she walked out of the kitchen towards the hallway. Gayatri saw Pooja fuming and rushed towards her.

Gayatri : " Areeyy, kyaa huaa? Itna shor kyun?"

She tried listening to Pooja, but there was so much chaos she had to block her ears with both hands closing her eyes, hoping it would stop anytime soon.

Pooja :" Mama, abb dekho na. Bua ji unn sab paar chilarahi hai.Saare tang achuke hai. Kab se samjhane ki koshish karahi hoon ki unn logo ko unnke kaam karne do. Lekin nahii !.."

She nodded her head, because of the annoyance her Bua ji has been doing. Gayatri tried to calmly explain to Pooja but yet had no words. Bua ji at that moment stepped out of the kitchen eating ladoos.

Gayatri : " Shanti di, aap mere saath aye"

Bua ji : "Gayatri. Dekho na! Koi aapne kaam nahi karahe hai. Aur maine sirf chai mangete.Saare mujh par bharak gaye.Pata nahi kahan se aye hai yeh log. Yeh Bhola bhi na.. uska toh main khabar lungi! ( Pointing her index finger in a rage of anger due to the cooks behaviour)

She tried pulling her away. Listening to her complain she looked in the opposite direction.She made her sit on the chair she usually sits on.

Gayatri : "Shanti di, aapko diabetes hai. Aapko meethai khaney se maana hai, aap.."

Bua ji : " HAN ! HAN ! tum HAMESHA mujhe tokh te ho. Iss burape main, mujhe aur kitna tarpaogi? LO! Tumhari meethai."

She handed over her sweets to gayatri. Gayatri looked on her both sides, fed up of her always misunderstanding her and putting words in her mouth. She decided to avoid, and left.

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The main characters still havent been mentioned but will be,later on in part 2.

Edited by diva_princess - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey...very interesting...plz add me n pm me whenever u update next...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Niceee...marriage..Khushi ko kya hua?
update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 2 :

Gayatri searched for Khushi. She saw Pooja fixing pillows.

Gayatri : " Arrey, Pooja beti.. woh Khushi tayar hai na? "

Pooja : " uhmm, mama, shayad… patanahi.. main abhi jaa kar dekh kar ati hoon."

Gayatri: " Acha, hann. Han.. jaoo. Ja kar check karlo." ( she slightly pushed Pooja to go in a rush)

There she was , in her pink ghagra. She was facing the window. She saw guests had started to arrive. Her face was glowing. She was talking to herself…

Khushi : " Hail bhagvan, aaj meri sagayi hai..mujhe bohut dar lagrahi hai..! ( she bit her lips out of fear, playing with her hands ,fiddling with her dupatta.) Aur hamare sagayi kab tayar hui.. pata hi nahi chala? " (she smiled, looking down.

Pooja's eyes were in a search of the bride to be. She checked everyroom possible and she finally opened the doors , where she finally was found.

Pooja: "Khushiii… (She looked from left to right. She entered the room and spotted her.) heyyy bhagvan. Khushi. Kya karahi haii tu? Kya dekh rahi hai? Tu tayar hai na? (she noticed how khushi wasn't replying to her questions. She comes closer to her yet had distance)Khushii..?Tu…?

Khushi turned around , and had tears in her eyes. She tried showing that her teardrops, were tears of joy. She began to laugh.Pooja approached to khushi, and held her arms because she saw her baby sister and got all emotional.

Pooja : "Areey Khushi? Tu ro rahi haii? Aaaja meri bachi. (She held her face and sat down with her on the bed.) Kya huaa?"

Khushi lifted her face from her sister's shoulder. She looked in her eyes. And her eyes looked away.

Khushi: " Di, main jisey shaadi karney jarahi hoon, main toh use jaanti bhi nahi hoon. Leken mujhe itna bhi aitraaz nahi hai. Masi aur Masa, jo kuch bhi mere liye socha hai, zarroor bhaley ki liye hai. Leeken di, mujhe pata nahi agar main uske saath manage karpaongi bhi ya nahi. Woh America se aya hai.. aur sirf Tina ki shaadi main mulakat huyi thi. Tujhe yaad hai na di?"

Pooja : " hann Khushi. Ladka mere khayal se acha lagraha hai. Berey khandan ke ladkey hai.Tu na, fikar hi mat kar. Main hoon na?"

Khushi smiled and hugged her loving sister.

Khushi: " Tu na ! Duniya ki saab se achi behen hai. Thanks yaar."

Pooja smiled.

Pooja : "Oye, tu na, pehle achi nahi lagrahi thi.."

Khushi stopped smiling. Looking all confused.

Khushi : " Saachi meinn ? KYUN?! Abb kya karoon main? Zara madat kardena meri.. please???!! "

Pooja : " AB!! Tu ABB BOHUT HI ZYAADA muri lagrahi hai..yehh shakal dekh aapni..(she pulled Khushi to see herself in the mirror) Yeh jo mu fulakey ,udaas wali shakal jo banati hai na? Tujhe suit nahi karti. Yehh wali smile dikhaa.."(Pooja smiled showing all her teeth, Khushi's smile.)

Khushi's face lit up.She ran abit behind Pooja. Pooja turned to see why she was running and where? She looked confused.

Khushi : " ABB KAISEY LAGRAHI HOON MAIN?! Ekdaam mast! Naa dii?"

Pooja started laughing.She came closer to her, viewed her from every angle possible. She had a disappointed face, as if she wasn't impressed. Khushi was confused.

Khushi : " Di…? Kya.."

Pooja gave a dirty look.

Pooja :" YUCK! " (she pretended to vomit to make her feel terrible)

Khushi was surprised. And was dumbfounded.

Khushi : " Di..! Sun, agar tu yahi kahegi na.. saare kya kahenge! Dii.. yaar.. please meri madat karnaa! "

Pooja bursted out of laughter.

Pooja : " Budhu, main Mazak karahi thi. Tu bilkul.. who kya kehte hai? ITEM bomb lagrahi hai " ( She winked at Khushi , Khushi gave her reply by blushing and laughed)

Khushi : "ouuf di! Tub bhi na,mujhe toh darahi diya. Pagal"

Pooja laughed.

Pooja : " Abb chaley madam jee? "

Khushi agreed with a smile, and wrapped her right arm around Pooja's left arm.

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Part 3 will be posted soon. Sorry im only writing bit by bit.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting!! Love the Pooja-Kushi sis bonding...Khusi is gonna get married..to whom?!! Update soon n do add me to your pm list :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing parts!!! Do upate soon and pkease add me to ur pm list...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey your FF is really good!

Just wanted to let you know that I have a FF called 'Kaisi Yeh Taqdeeer' but I have no problem with you keeping your title 'Taqdeer' - I guess great minds think alike! 😆

Tina

Xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey!!..
Congrats for your FF honey!!..and Taqdeer!...Interesting!!...I'm glad to read a FF on Arhi as they are a wonderful jodi!...and loved the concept!...Do update soon and PM me...😳

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