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KYA HUA


Swati was dead. Shlok and Aastha made the final rituals and were back at home. Shlok was walking like a soulless man. Aastha cant see him like that but she doesn't know wat to do and on the top of that he came to know his own mother was the reason behind it. Shlok jus came to room and jus leaned on the bed with his head back. Aastha didn't know wat to do. She experienced the most critical situation on that day. First Aditi was going to kill her and then Swati found and suddenly her death. Wat should she think of. She too was in dilemma. Ab kya she thought. How to cheer him. She entered with tear eyed into her room. She saw him like that. Shlok was in her memories. He was thinking about Swati. Aastha don't know wat to do. She jus went to her side of the room and tried to sleep there. She turned away from him. She wants to console but was feared he might feel guiltier. She turned and saw him, he is still in that position. She gained courage and went to him and sat beside him and placed hand on him. Shlok suddenly got up and shouted "Swati." Aastha was shocked. Shlok "Aastha tum kya kar rahe ho tum theek tho hain na." Aastha instantly got tears but rubbed them "Shlok main theek hoon lekin aap..." Shlok "Aastha mujhe kuch der akela chod do." Aastha "lekin Shlo.." Shlok "Aastha pls tang mat karo." Aastha felt low it was easily visible in her eyes. She saw here and there and slowly got up from there and went to her side. Shlok stared at her walking to her side.

Aastha was thinking Kya Shlok kam se kam mujhe sirf ek hi second keliye to sahi kya usne mujhe ek second bhi patni nahi samajti hain kya and more tears flew from her eye. Kya isko mujhpe ek pal keliye bhi pyaar nahi hua kya. Kya main sach main parai honge isko. She defeatedly came to her side and was thinking of her life lekin kyun usko uski life se jyaada Shlok ki bare main sochne lagi. But she sensed something pain is it in her heart oh no she was bleeding at the elbow. She didn't recognize that. That was hit wen she was dragged by Shlok to save her from the bullet shot by Aditi. Oh God ab ye kya and she got up and went to wash room and left the door. She went infront of the mirror and rubbed her hand there and squealed in pain while rubbing on the wound. She slowly dressed it by the cotton and bandaged it. She came out and saw him now drinking. She stood like that for sometime watching him and went to her place. Shlok was drinking badly. She cant hear those gulp sounds. She suddenly got up and went to him and threw away the bottles. Shlok suddenly saw her. Aastha cried seeing him like that "Kya hain Shlok ye sab kyun kar raha hain ye sab pls stop it Shlok pls." and she hugged him. Shlok jus want that. He too hugged her and cried in her embrace. Aastha "chup hojayiye Shlok pls ro mat main tumhe aisa nahi dekh sakti hoon pls Shlok kya hua tha Shlok pls bhool jayiye aap." Shlok broke the embrace and looked at her. He wiped her tears. Aastha wiped his. Shlok "kuch nahi tum theek hain na." Aastha "hmm." Aastha "kya main aapko ek sawal pooch sakti kya wo hak hain mujhe." Shlok "kaunsi sawal." Aastha with teared eye "Kya aapko main sach main patni lagta hain kya kya aap ek pal keliye bhi mujhe patni ya mujhe ek pal keliye bhi pyaar nahi kiya kya boliye na Shlok kya main sach main aapko parai hoon kya." Shlok looked here and there. Shlok with teared eyes "Aastha I m sorry." Aastha "mujhe kuch samaj nahi rahi hain Shlok main aapko kaise batao." And she sobbed a little leaving her hands. Aastha "bohut dard ho raha hain aapko iss tarah dekhke main jaanti hoon sab jaanti hoon aap Swati se pyaar karta hain aur Swati ko nahi bhool paogi lekin mujhe ye baat samajme main nahi aa rahi hain ki main aapko hain kaun aap ye rishta kaise nibhaana chahta hain Shlok batayiye na bohut takleef ho raha hain Shlok pata nahi mujhe kya karna hain kya nahi aap hi batayiye.." Shlok suddenly bursted out "bas Aastha tum mere biwi ho samje tum aisa sochna bhi mat main tumhe jindagi bhar nahi chodne wala samje tum." And he held her hands tightly and brought her closer. Aastha saw him into his eyes. Shlok too stared at her like that. She didn't know he meant it for granted or not but she wants to be like that. She crossed her arms across his broad chest and rested her head on his heart "Shlok I love u main aapko iss tarah nahi dekh sakti Shlok aur main aapko tootne nahi doongi chahe kuch bhi hojaye." Shlok "Aastha I m sorry for not believing u about Aditi I m really sorry if I had know.." Aastha "shshsh Shlok aap kuch nahi khaaya main kuch laati hoon tumhare liye."

She went to kitchen. Shlok went to wash room to fresh himself. He saw few blood drops and panicked. Ye sab kya hain and he examined them kai Aastha ki tho nahi hain na and he recalled her coming from wash room. He shouted "Aastha Aastha." Aastha came into room storming with food Shlok rushed to her "Aastha ye sab kya hain." And he showed blood drops. Aastha "Wo wo.." Shlok "woo wo kya kya hain tumhari hain kya." Aastha nodded. Shlok "kya hua tujhe tum theek hain kaha lagi dard kaha hua." Aastha just kept on staring at him. Shlok literally shaking at her and suddenly shouted "Aastha." Then she came to the earth. Aastha showed her elbow to him. Shlok keenly saw it bandaged. Shlok "mujhe kyun nahi bataya." Shlok furiously "mujhe kyun nahi bataya." Aastha "wow o aap chodiye Shlok choti si chot hain kuch nahi hua sach." And she backed a step. Aastha "Shlok aap ye khana khaalijiye." And she gave plate to him and went to fold the sheets. Shlok was watching her. Wat happened to her. Shlok was disappointed and also ate everything lifelessly jus bcoz of Aastha.

Next morning Aastha woke up from her side of the room. She saw his side and smiled. He was still sleeping. She slowly went to his side and caressed his hair and put her hand on his hand. Shlok suddenly changed his postion which made Aastha to fall on him. Shlok suddenly woke up and saw her on him. They were very close. Her hair fell on her face covering half of her face. Shlok slowly took away her hair strands and saw into her eyes. She too stared at him like that. Shlok "gud morning." Aastha suddenly got up and looked here and there. Shlok "kya hua." Aastha quickly said gud morning and ran away quickly. Shlok carelessly got up and saw towards her. Isse kya hua mujhe ignore kar rahi hain kya. He doesn't want to go to jaogging. He jus remembered Swati and decided to forget her. He doesn't want to show he is affected by her to Aastha. Aastha slowly came out of wash room dressing her bandage. Shlok went to her and helped her in dressing it. She thanked him and asked wont he go to office. He nodded and went. In office he cant concentrate on his work y he doesn't know. He was always staring at the phone, he didn't get any message nor a call. Shlok felt strange kya hua isse non stop bak bak ko kyun phone nahi kar rahi hain. Aastha too feeling heavy wat is happening to her wat is she thinking y cant she go to him wenever she wants wat is stopping her. She slowly done all her chores and was climbing upto her room. He worked for sometime and went to home. It was already 7. He freshened up. Aastha was not there in his room. She was with Kavya playing chess with her. Shlok called her. Aastha rushed to him. Aastha surprised "aap itni jaldi." Shlok "haan." Aastha "aapko kuch chahiye kya." Shlok "haan." Aastha "arey aapko kuch chahiye kya." Shlok "hmm nahi kuch bhi tho nahi." Aastha looked at him "tho main jaao." Shlok nodded. Aastha went away. Shlok saw her leaving. After the dinner. Shlok was working on the laptop. She kept glass of water on the table and went to her side to sleep. Shlok was working seriously. Light was on. She jus kept her hand on her head and tried to sleep but lost in her thoughts. She jus stared ceiling and was thinking something. Shlok suddenly closed the laptop and saw her sleeping wat wen did she come yaar. He closed the laptop and was going to switch off the lights not b4 watching her. Her eyes were still opened. He switched off the lights and noticed no reaction from her. She was lost in her thoughts. A small tear escaped her eye. He didn't notice it.

She was still in that position. Shlok jus went to his bed. After sometime Aastha slept and so Shlok. This continued for few days. Aastha was not messaging me nor calling. She was jus like robot to him but she took care of him but talked very less. She is not like b4 Aastha. She also bcame very silent. She talked very less with Kavya too. Nothing went unnoticed by Shlok. Shlok was not liking a bit of her attitude. Wat does she want to prove. Aastha was asusual silent these days. She wants to be loved by him she wants to be cared by him she wants to be with him always but she don't know wat he is thinking, she was thinking he is still overcoming Swati"s memories. Shlok was very angry don't know y. He jus drove to home angrily. He was not liking his life at all ye sab kya ho raha hain he thought. He rushed to home. He went to his room quickly and saw her watching birds outside through her window. Shlok rushed to her and pulled her and made her face him and held her hands tightly and shouted at her face "Kya hua kyun kar rahi hain ye sab naatak band kar sab dekh raha hoon main kya chahiye tumhe." Aastha was shocked to see him such "Kya hua Shlok kiss baat ki baat kar raha hain pls ab main kuch nahi kiya pl Shlok leave me kya hua u r hurting me." Shlok "bas bakvaas band karo tum kya samajte ho apne aapko haan." Aastha jus saw at him blankly and asked "KYA HUA" Shlok jus stared at her and asked "KYA HUA KYA HUA matlab KYA HUA KYA HUA.." and he loosened his grip on her. Aastha "Shlok kya hua batao mujhe kuch chahiye kya kya hua aap itni tension kyun hain aur aapko kya chahiye kya hua Shlok." Shlok then released sigh and saw here and there thinking KYA HUA haa KYA HUA haa KYA HUA. And then he stared at her. Aastha "Shlok KYA HUA." He didn't think much he just hugged her tightly and spat those words "Kuch nahi mujhe tum chahiye Aastha mujhe sirf tum chahiye kuch aur nahi mujhe purani wali Aastha chahiye kyun kya hua wo madcap wali Aastha kya hua tumhe I m sorry Aastha I hurt u so much I m sorry I should have trusted lekin tum aisa mat rahna mujhe achcha nahi lagta I m sorry mujhe purani vali Aastha chahiye." And he broke the hug and held her face in his palms and said directly to her face "main tumhare bina nahi jihpaogi Aastha agar tum nahi to main bhi nahi ham sirf kahne keliye pati patni nahi hain tum mere jindagi ho Aastha." And he kissed her on forehead. Aastha was in tears and hugged him tightly and cried out loudly. Shlok eyes was wet. She was still crying. Aastha "bas yehi pal ka intezaar kar rahi hain Shlok mujhe sirf aap chahiye pata nahi mujhe kya hua tumhare bina main bhi nahi rahpaogi Shlok bohut takleef hua Shlok jab tumne mujhe parai kaha tha bohut dard hua mujhe laga ki main sach main bhoj hoon aaap keliye mujhe laga ki aap ko koi farak hi nahi padta main jiyu yaa maru aur sabse oopar aap mujhse jyaada Swati se pyaar karte hain." Shlok "nahi Aastha main pagal hoon tum mere jindagi ho tumne aise kaise sochliya Aastha." And he hugged her. She was jus lying in his arms and cried again. Shlok slowly caressed her face and wiped her tears. Shlok "I love u Aastha I love u so much haan Aastha main pehle se bhi pyaar kiya haan kiya tha tumse aur ye baat Swati ki Swati meri life main thi lekin ab nahi ab sirf tum chahiye mujhe tum hi mera sab kuch ho" Aastha "nahi Shlok aap ne sahi kaha ham sirf kahne keliye pati patni nahi hain ham dono ek doosre se bohut pyaar karte hain ab dekhna main kis tarah aapko pareshaan karoongi." And she smiled. Shlok smiled at her and lifted her and brought to bed. Aastha "Shlok kya kar rahe hain aap utar mujhe Shlok leave me."

Kaya came rushing "chachi chachi.." Aastha "Shlok chodiye Kavya aa rahi hain." And he put her down. Kavya cheerfully came to her "chachi pls pls aap chess khelna pls roj ki tarah aap aaj koi bahana nahi bolne vala pls khelna mere saath pls." Aastha smiled in tears and hugged her and sobbed a little. Aastha "hmm chalo khelte." Shlok from behind "jaldi aana." Aastha turned to him and blushed a little and went with her. Shlok was thinking kitni pagal hoon main itni time kyun liya sirf ye lehne keliye wo mere biwi hain Aastha mere biwi hain and he smiled himelf and went to wash room to plan something mischief and that is left to u ppl.

Friends i jus tried it wrote without any idea i know i m a test player ye T20(OS) mujhse nahi ho raha hain but jus posted anyone might like it so even bashings r allowed no worries even if u wont like it next time i will give beautiful one hope u bear with this one...

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago

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sudhamadhu thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai nice OS yaar. I liked it. It is interesting
Try to write more. 👏
V r waiting. Once again u remembered our ashloks journey in our show.
Keep it up
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice OS..
but i dint understand d reason on this title..
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hai sai... good evening
nice OS liked it
thank u for this update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow,very nice,short & sweet,nice 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one Sai... Sweet 😊
Keep writing 😃
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Hey... sorry, forgot to add some things...
Shlok's feelings were shown nicely... and Aastha-Shlok's bond too... nice work... 👏
But Sai, couldn't connect with the title somehow... Just my view, ok? Don't mind 😳
Nice OS overall... 😃

Keep writing bro 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Keep writing sai
Nice update
Thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Os...
Very beautifully written..
Keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai nice OS yaar. I liked it. It is interesting
Try to write more. 👏
V r waiting. Once again u remembered our ashloks journey in our show.
Keep it up

thank u chechi
isme interesting hone ki kya hai
i thought everyone dislike it anyway thanks for reading and liking it

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