Aashlok SS: Love With Flaws, part 5 and note post updated pg no. 16 - Page 17

Originally posted by: shubhraa...

nic eupdate
loved it

Originally posted by: pooja186

loved d line ISS PYAAR KO KYA NAAM DO?...
it suits...
update s very nice ...

Originally posted by: fiza1995

Part 4

Loved it and i just hate anjali and her words were pinching...may god give her some sense soon

Originally posted by: fiza1995

Part 5

Omg..they are brother and sister means shlok and astha are brother and sisters too???

Please continue soon.

Thanks for the pm and keep updating

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

hearty congratulations to u my dear🤗 ...awww thank you soo much hiya🤗
so happy for u...
may god bless u with all d success & prosperity u deserve...
all d best for ur future... ...thanks a lot darls😃

Originally posted by: maitydeblina

Unreserved page 17😃

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update.. ...thanks you hiya😊
avdoot anjali's brother😲 wat a twist... ...twist😉
means astha & shlok r siblings.. though not real but distinct...😕 ...no no buds how could be aastha and sholk are siblings
but i guess in their culture it is allowed...😕
astha missing her mom & remembers her...😭 ...Itz the difficult thing for a girl you know living life without mother😭
poor kalindi 😭 she was trying to help her husband by working & had such bad fate.. but as she couldnt handle she commited suicide😭😭 ...oh my dearu don't conclude everything yar😉...there is lot more to come out in open dear😭
shlok loves astha... but thinks she betrayed her... ...everyone goes thru the same my guess😉
cant believe shlok had printouts of all their chats .. if astha would refuse on him he would blackmail her by using this😲😡.. but things turned out to b opposite... ...yeah he a preplanned man😡
want to know more abt avdoot-anjali relation...😕 ...curiosity kills babes😉😆
continue soon.. ...will continue soon dear😊
i would really love if u gv more parts in d story... ...aww my darling will try to give more parts😊
u r a great writer dear.. absolutely lot more better then our stupid cvs... so dont worry... ...aww thatz a lot hiya the best complement i've received in this forum my darlling🤗
thnks 4 d pm... ...you're welcome honey😊

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Part 5:

Another heart touching update... ...Thank you akka😊

kalindi died for astha's studies...so sad... ...still lot of story to come out akka 😊

where did kalindi work...hope its not shlok's house... ...lets see akka

but why she has to take such drastic step... ...you'll get to know it akka

shlok still in love with her...he cant hate... ...first love can't be forget so easily right??

hope he find out the truth soon... ...truth comes out akka that is for sure

before astha get heart broken beyond repair...

so anjali and adhvoot are brothers and sisters... ...yup akka

so ashlok are blood related...they r made for each other ... ...ofcourse they're made for each other

do continue soon... ...will continue soon akka...

thanks for the wonderful update... ...glad akka you liked the update

Originally posted by: jhumjhum

Hello my dear behna Vijji 😃. Interesting update many truth come in front. Avdhoot n Anjali siblings but very different from each-other n now Anjali ashamed of her filth talk n behavior waiting to see their reaction. ...Hi di😊...thanks a lot di...yup avdhoot and anjy are siblings...and yes anjali is really shamed of her behaviour😊

Astha's mom get abused in her owner home but than she left that job but she left her family too why I have this feeling she sacrifice her respect for her daughter education n than leave them forever 😭. ...she sacrifice her life for the sake of aastha's education but how and why...you'll get to know in future updates😊...

Shlok finally understanding his own feelings for Astha let's see if he ask forgiveness for his harsh behavior.Thanks for PM dearu n waiting for next update. ...lets see what shlok do next and you're welcome di😊

Now come to your Govt.job my heartiest congratulation & well wishes for u may u get all success u deserve.

Thanks a lot di for your good wishes🤗