Ashlok SS-Game Of Destiny(Chapter5-Pg40)...14/12/2014

Devu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

good update dear👏

poor shlok already go through so much pain😭helpless anjali😭hate na😡😡

waiting for astha's entry❤️

update soon dear...

Edited by DEVU.NAIR - 11 years ago

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sathuraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Nice update Meerab...

Poor Shlok has faced so much torture from childhood...

Feeling pity for Anjali who has undergone so much taruma in her life...

NA is proved to be a bad father...to treat his own kids and step son in a different way...

Anjali is got struck between his son and husband...

Hope shlok will find all the joy and happiness with Astha...

thanks for the wonderful treat...

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tamanna-azaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

it was nice nd very painful

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Lepzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Nice prologue and update 1...

Thanks for the PM.

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Fero

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

it's awesome meerab
I loved it thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

ok so dat is y shlok is like dat

bt y is astha is here

do update soon

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: whitelily
Interesting start

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
Very interesting meerab good work
Looking forward to it :D
Again you are giving us an story for which we will wait with bated breath ;))continue soon

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan
nice prologue dear..

Originally posted by: mehare
Interesting prologue meerab loved it great one waiting for it to be update first part

Thanks 😳

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul
interesting.who is scaring them?wht happened btw Anjali n shlok?and who is aastha rly?

Originally posted by: rbb1
Wow really nice prologue very interesting can't wait to read it

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon
Nice a new story

Originally posted by: sireesha76
interesting prologue
continue soon

Originally posted by: Surish
Beautiful prologue intro! Has me uttely enthralled beyond capacity!

Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.
great start dear

Originally posted by: Sandy198
looking forward to it...

Al da best for your exams =]

Thanks sweeties

@jasminerahul

No one is scaring them its astha who thought shlok as thief...and next questions will be answered in next updates...

@sandy

Thanks dear for your wishes...

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Efinah36
Awesome start
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: DEVU.NAIR
interesting prologue dear😃
in your story shlok hates niranjan,i like that😆
waiting for your update😊

Originally posted by: mehare
Waiting for dear

Originally posted by: Anunilmini
This sounds so interesting meerab. No worries we will wait for your return. And all the best for your exams.

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Nice start...

Interesting fact is that Shlok hate his father...

eagerly waiting to know what happen next...

Take your own time ...concentrate on your studies dear...

thanks for the PM..

Thank u everyone for ur sweet comments...and wishes...love u all😳