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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Blukitten

Oh yeah thts bound to happen 😉
Though its gonna create a huge mess😕

obviously,Shlok is a prince of enemy from enemy kingdom...their love will be sensational and as Astha is fiance of Varad ,

ahhh...mess

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raji

@raji_sudha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

aww nega really nice update these two finding each other irresistible.wow great looking forward to the mess U have mentioned .I thing aditi will came to know about aasthas absence and try to destroy her reputation

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Blukitten

@Blukitten

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: raji_ashloksfan
aww nega really nice update these two finding each other irresistible.wow great looking forward to the mess U have mentioned .I thing aditi will came to know about aasthas absence and try to destroy her reputation

AHHH some more mess 😕

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

PART 3
Really super duper update 👏👏

Wowww..Shlok is soo caring

So Shlok will take care of her till her fever is down..😊Hmm..hope her fever lasts forever😆 Just kidding

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Oh I like this more and more. Bandit and the fair maiden! If she thinks he's a bandit, then he must be the most soft hearted bandit ever. Love the way he's trying to keep his guard up. But love and attraction together is far more potent.

And uff! This aditi is in this as well. Hope she'll play Cupid unknowingly. Thanks Neha for the wonderful update and Yasna for the PM. Will be waiting for the next update.

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Blukitten

@Blukitten

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Thanks all This is my Fav FF and its pretty long one

It has almost 30 chapters 😉

Though I am combining some short ones into longer single chapters...And I make plot twists on my whim 😆 So story may diverts from the original...

So far the second draft is coming along really well...So continue reading if u have patience for 30 chapters 😛

Edited by Blukitten - 11 years ago

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

PART 4

This part was sooo beautiful my dear..❤️

Aastha's blushing is sooo cute..

And poor Shlok ..He is sooo attracted to the beauty..😳

I am loving this plot totally...And the way you write is just awesome Neha..🤗

Yasna...I am soo happy that you requested Neha to come up with this story and the former one🤗