Ashlok SS-Falling For You....(Part4-pg30)15/10/2014

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Riddhima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Hmmm let's see aastha's wish come true...

Very nice teaser...

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Neelum.drashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

omg chachu romancing rani n every1 watching🤣..update quickly😳

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti

omg chachu romancing rani n every1 watching🤣..update quickly😳

OK I will try to update it buddy 😳

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 2

Thank you sooo much for commenting on last update...here is the next part...hope u will like it...btw sorry for any mistakes...

After giving gauri a lecture on the importance of marriage astha went downstairs with her for breakfast...

On the breakfast table she asked kalindi a thousand times that what nandini aunty had told the boy said yes or not...

Seeing her impatient nature finally kalindi had to call nandini to know the answer of shlok's family...

Nandini asked for time of few more days and in the evening she landed at agnihotri mansion pressurizing anjali and niranjan for an answer...

The same time shlok also came back from office...and nandini also dragged him in their conversation...

She asked about his decision and like always shlok refused in plain words...

Anjali looked towards niranjan and he understood what he has to do...

Niranjan:shlok you have to say yes this time as its matter of my honour ...at your age I was having two kids and you are still unmarried ...what a shame for me...What will society think...People will doubt that my son is a gay that's why he is not interested in girls...
Shlok:Baba Please...

Niranjan:No shlok...you have no option except to say yes...if you said no to this girl then definitely something will happen to me...

Anjali and nandini also sided with niranjan and soon sojal ,varad and jyoti were also there to support them...but still he was adamant...

Shlok:stop it baba ...I know its all your ways to make me agree...its nothing about honour...

Niranjan:shlok you have to marry this girl and that's my final decision...he said in a rough and harsh tone...

Shlok:and my final decision is that I will not marry and a heated argument started between the two...

When niranjan saw no hope.. he suddenly faked out a heart attack ...acting like it is paining him a lot... he placed his left hand on his right side ...

At first shlok thought he is lying but the way niranjan was acting made him to believe that he has actually got an attack...
He became tensed and asked niranjan if he is ok...

Anjali started cursing him for niranjan's condition...
All others also held him responsible... indirectly forcing him to say yes...
Shlok was puzzled ...he asked jyoti to call the doctor and she immediately dialed the number ...

Suddenly shlok noticed that niranjan's hand is on right side not on left...
Shlok:baba why your hand is on right ...when the heart is on left...

All became conscious at once that they might be caught but then anjali's little knowledge from serials saved them...

Anjali:stupid haven't you heard about dextrocardia where the heart is on right side...

Niranjan also nodded in his fake half conscious state...to support anjali...

Shlok:but maa I haven't heard about this condition...

Jyoti:how would you know bhai ...your science was always weak ...you use to hardly pass the subject...kabhi pardhney ki khosish kartey tu aaj iss cheez ke barey main pata hota tumhein...

Hearing about his weakness he surrendered thinking that may be jyoti is right because he was really not interested in the subject...

Meanwhile their family doctor came who was niranjan's some old friend... part of their game plan...

He also acted to place the tablet under niranjan's tongue but actually it was a vitamin tablet...as shlok haven't seen that sort of tablets before he didn't suspected the doctor...

After doctor completed with his examinations...shlok asked him...

Shlok:how is baba now doctor...

Absolutely fine ...he answered with a big smile but when from side niranjan pinched on his leg...his expressions changed to a sad ones...I mean he will be absolutely fine if you will keep him happy ...and for now he is out of danger...I have written some medicines for him...go and get them soon...

Varad took the prescription saying he will bring all the needed medicines...

Soon niranjan acted as if he was regaining his consciousness ...

Shlok's heart pained seeing his baba's condition because of him...

Shlok hugged him and apologized...and then they had a very emotional talk...and somewhere anjali's taunt and niranjan's helplessness made him to say yes for marriage...

The moment he said yes with his head lowered down in sadness...all his family members steal glances at each other as if congratulating each other on their victory...

Nandini was shocked to see the sudden series of events happened a few minutes before as she was not a dumb...she can understand that niranjan is acting but she didn't asked anything from anyone as her only concern was shlok's yes which he had said...

After everyone left niranjan gave a hi-five to anjali...he was happy that their planned worked and finally shlok said yes for marriage...
All slept peacefully that night except shlok who had a dozen of nightmares about his marriage...he was not ready to share his life with someone but he was having no option left...

It took few days by the family to completely assure shlok that niranjan is actually recovering slowly and if shlok again changed his decision then his baba's condition can worsen again...

In few days agnihotri's decided to visit kirloskars ...

Everyone asked shlok to come with them but he made some excuse saying that he has some important meeting...
so they had to left without him...

After meeting avdhoot and his family niranjan felt as if he has meet his long lost brother...kirloskars were also having the same liveliness...the same madness like agnihotri's...even astha didn't feel uncomfortable in their presence...she became friendly with them in a short time...

Niranjan and anjali liked astha so much that at once they said yes for the marriage ...avdhoot too responded back the same way but suddenly everyone left surprisedwhen astha asked that where is her future husband ...she is waiting for him since long...

Anjali:astha beta he was busy that's why he has not come...

Astha:then sorry aunty because without seeing his face or meeting him I am not gonna say yes what if I he came out to be some abnormal person ...don't you watch serials...you must be understanding what I mean...

Agnihotri's didn't mind her demand but was bit scared that how shlok will agree...

Niranjan winked at anjali assuring her that he knows how to handle shlok...

Avdhoot smiled seeing him winking as he thought that niranjan is romancing his wife so openly...

Niranjan:sure astha beta you have the right to meet shlok after all you have to spend ur whole life with him...so avdhoot ji I invite all of you for lunch in our house...and that way astha will also meet shlok...

Avdhoot immediately accepted the invitation...
and that whole evening agnihotri's were busy buttering shlok ...making him to agree to meet astha but again only niranjan's nautanki of worsening health helped them...and he again agreed to what his family wanted...

Next day there was a strange buzzing in the house...

Everyone was super happy except shlok who was feeling like his freedom will soon end and he will become like his father or brother varad who follow their wives blindly like slaves ...this was the one thing he never wanted...he never felt the need to include someone else in his life but today he was forced by his own family...

With mad mood he dressed himself in a black shirt and pant...

Though he didn't done his best but still he was looking extremely handsome and hot...just like the way astha always wished his husband to be...

Kavya came running to his room...

Kavya:chachu aap ko dada ji bula rahey
hain...

Shlok:Tell him I am coming ...

Kavya:Ok chachu...

Kavya was making her exit when shlok suddenly stopped her...listen kavya...

She turned to him with innocent and questioning eyes...

Shlok went on his knees and extended his arms for her...she quickly came to him...
Shlok picked her up in his arms and kissed her cheek...sorry my princess.. chachu ne aap ko kal phir se dhanta...he said giving chocolates to her...

Kavya:Its ok chachu... kavya ne bhi tu aap ko bohat tang kiya tha na kal...

Shlok:no my doll...aap ne mjhey bilkul tang nahi kiya bus chachu ko hi bohat ghussa aa jata hai...lekin chachu aapko,prem aur vansh teeno ko bohat pyaar kartey hain...he said again kissing her...

She gave him a big smile...kavya bhi aap se bohat sara pyaar karti hai chachu...she kissed him back making him to smile...
Shlok:Chalo ab baqi ke chocolates prem aur vansh ko bhi dein aur dada ki baat sunney...

He came downstairs with kavya still in his arms...

Suddenly his eyes fell on anjali,sojal and jyoti who were peeping inside chachu's room...at the same time trying to control their giggles...

He slowly came behind them and try to see what is making them so happy...
As he bent a little further he left embarrassed to found that three of them were watching chachu and chachi romancing...

Vinayak was about to kiss rani...and the excitement of the three women rise beyond limits... as if they were watching romance for the first time in their life...

Shlok felt irritated at his family's strangeness that chachu is romancing his chachi rani in front of all and his mother,sister and bhabhi is enjoying it so shamelessly...

Little kavya too understand that its something children should not see...so she placed her little hand on her eyes...
with a hawww expression ...

Shlok got more irritated and immediately went and with a thud close the door making them all extremely embarrassed and shocked...

Shlok:don't you feel any shame watching someone's private moments...he scolded three of them...

Anjali:I know...I know ur lecture will start again...but your chachu is not a saint...he has also seen me and your baba romancing many times...

Sojal and jyoti also supported anjali...

Shlok :Oh God ...it is useless to talk to you all...they were busy in their own argument when chachu slowly opened the door with little bit embarassing expression...

Chachu:What you all are doing here????...

Shlok:what can they do...by the way chachu leave them they cannot be changed but u tell me cann't you close your door before this morning show...

Chachu:Such moments always happen this way ...I mean suddenly...no one have the time to think about others...you are just taken away by someone's beautiful eyes and face and want to do ...you are understanding what I mean...he said in a romantic and poetic tone...

Anjali:haan haan devar ji I am getting ur meaning clearly...

Shlok jerked his head in disapproval...you all are sooo shameless...

Chachu :dont worry you will also be shameless soon like us after your marriage ...

Shlok gave a disgusting look and left with kavya who didn't understand a single word of theirs...

Niranjan requested shlok to behave properly with his in-laws and especially astha...

So her name is astha...her name sounds a bit calm...wish she will be like her name...calm and quiet...shlok thought to himself...

Kirlosker's were exactly at time in agnihotri house for lunch...

Astha was dressed in a beautiful yellow
salwar suit with right amount of make up ...she was looking extremely stunning that anyone could have easily fallen for her...

Astha:Maa I am looking good na...I mean my dress ...my make up...everything is ok na????...she once again asked kalindi...

Kalindi:For God sake... stop it astha...its for the twentieth time you are asking me the same question...she whispered...
Astha:Ok don't be angry...

Kalindi strictly warned astha to talk minimum infront of shlok as according to her boys don't like very talktative girls...

Astha:but aayi ...

Kalindi:Its just matter of few minutes...phir jitna bolna hai shaadi ke baat bol lena...

Astha made a puppy face... ok Maa I will try...they were sitting in the hall and talking in whispers ...

Suddenly astha started getting impatient and her eyes were constantly searching for her future husband...

Anjali noticed her ...don't worry astha shlok is coming...and astha just blushed on being caught by anjali...

Kalindi poked her arm and whispered...if u want shlok to say yes for you then behave properly...

Astha:Ok sorry ...atleast don't hit me na...

Meanwhile Anjali introduced chachu and rani to them ...

Ajju suddenly shouted ...Aarey rani you got married and didn't inform me????...

Anjali:u know her????
...
Ajju:haan...she was our maid some months ago...

Anjali gave a big smile ...what a coincidence same...she was also our maid two months ago but don't know how she made a place in my devar's small heart and these days she is my devrani...all because of my mahaan devar ji...
Vinayak gave his colgate smile to everyone as if proud of his marriage with rani...

Avdhoot laughed ...what a tragedy ...previous naukrani turned into recent devrani...

For a moment all went silent but there followed a series of laughters after niranjan's ...

They didn't mind anything about rani said by kirloskars...nor did vinayak or rani felt bad...

They were busy in their happy talks when suddenly shlok stepped inside after taking a lot time in dominating his nervousness and anxiety...

Niranjan:look here comes my bacha shlok...

Astha's eyes immediately rolled to him...and seeing the six feet handsome figure standing there ...her heart started jumping and dancing in joy against his rib cage...haaayyeee he is sooo handsome...she blinked her eyes repeatedly like old heroines giving him a dreamy look...

Niranjan introduced shlok with kirloskars ...and as shlok's eyes met with astha...for few seconds he was smitten by her beauty but the next minute he came back to reality when he imagined her talking the same way like her family women...

She will be like them..I know it...he muttered...

Anjali:you said something shlok...

Shlok:no nothing...

Then for sometime shlok was sitting and answering every question of kirloskars very nicely...he felt as if he is once again giving viva to his teachers...

After lunch anjali asked shlok to show their house to astha...

Shlok :what ...he said almost in a normal tone controlling his anger...
I mean girls do this na then how can I?????...
Niranjan:she is our guest...then obviously you will do it beta ...
Niranjan's taunting behavior and his advancing hand towards his heart again forced him to obey his baba...

Jyoti and sojal were slightly giggling on shlok's helplessness...

Shlok quietly showed her the whole house ...

Astha was finding it almost difficult to control herself from talking to him but then kalindi's words echoed in her mind...

Astha:beta astha its just a little sacrifice ...if you want to be with shlok...she convinced herself and behaved as sensible and shy girl ...

Shlok was observing her every moment and somewhere deep inside he was getting convinced that she is different from what he was thinking...she is not a chatter box and is behaving nicely and sensibly...

After showing her the whole house ...he took her to his room...

His room was quite big and clean...all the things were neatly placed...
She found the room to be totally different from hers...as she loved to create a mess of her things all the time...

Astha was also noticing shlok's behavior...she found him perfect in every sense according to her demands but then a thought suddenly came to her mind...
is he a calm person or a angry young man???...
How can I found out???...she was confused then suddenly an idea clicked in his mind and she intentionally pushed the vase from the table when his face was on the other side...

Shlok immediately turned...and after seeing his favorite vase broken into multiple pieces he became extremely angry but as he promised niranjan to behave nicely so he controlled his anger once again ...his heart whispered again...she is another careless person...but the sweet melodious voice of hers helped him changing his thought once again...

Astha:I am ...I am so sorry ...I didn't do it intentionally...it all happened suddenly...but you don't worry I will clean it myself saying this she sat down and started picking up the broken vase pieces...praying in her heart that he stops her immediately as she has never done such things at her house...and she was given what she prayed for...

Shlok thought that he is wrong about her...she sounds a nice and well-mannered girl...

He immediately took the pieces from her hand...please no need to do all this...you are our guest...he called out seeta and asked her to clean the mess...

Astha sighed in relief thanking God for saving her...and helping her to know that shlok is a not a angry youngman...

Both were satisfied to say yes to their parents for marriage after spending a few moments with each other unaware that neither she was a quiet girl nor he was a calm person...

Precap:

Shlok got shock after shock on their suhagraat seeing astha's weirdness and madness...

Shlok:Oh God...another mad piece in my life...Please I cann't handle one more...

He got angry and astha was also left surprised to see his new look of a angry young man...

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

🤣 meeru dear am laughing really hard
Heart in right side 🤣
Anji...chachu n everyone used to c each other romancing 😆
Shlok is the only sane person in the family 🤣
Naukrani...devrani 😆
Simply superb...
Absolutely enjoyed
Precap
Waiting eagerly for next update 😆

Edited by priya_avi - 11 years ago

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Neelum.drashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

lol ''another weird and mad piece in my life''🤣.love dthis line meerab...aww doc helped NA fake the heart attack, felt bad for shlok...astha is as much in love as in drama.😆...lovely update :)

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Devu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

fabulous update dear😊

like shlok and kavya scenes😊

soo many funny scenes yarrr🤣

good work👏oh my god precap awesome😊

waiting 4 next update...update soon...

Edited by DEVU.NAIR - 11 years ago

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swathin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

too good
was having smile throughout reading this update

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Efinah36

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Great long update
Loved it
Update soon

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti

lol ''another weird and mad piece in my life''🤣.love dthis line meerab...aww doc helped NA fake the heart attack, felt bad for shlok...astha is as much in love as in drama.😆...lovely update :)

😆😆😆😆thanks buddy

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