Ashlok SS-Falling For You....(Part4-pg30)15/10/2014

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Surish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Hehe Chachu n Rani🤣

U had difficulty in portraying an abnormal family like Agnis a normal one ryt??? I understand😆

I can relate to Shlok for feeling like the only sane one in the family...

He's not interested in marriage 😔 bt still! he'll marry Aastha ryt?

N dat slap part ws true? My sis, bro n I used to do dat to our foofa😆

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: meerab...

Another concept was continously clicking in my mind😆...so finally I decided to convert it into another fiction..Hope you will also enjoy this one...But I will continue this one after my exams...

Teaser

The story is about the agnihotri's which belong to punjab...a happy fun loving family...

Shlok a reserved and angry youngman ... not interested in girls and marriage...

Astha a clumpsy ,bubbly and lively girl but innocent at the same time ...she has million dreams about her life partner and marriage...

What will happen when destiny will bring them together????...

Nice concept meerab

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Awesome update dear

Loved it

Chachu married rani 🤣

Astha is different from other stories.. Very bold

Continue soon

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Teaser

Shlok came downstairs and found anjali,sojal and jyoti peeping inside chachu's room...at the same time trying to control their giggles...

He slowly came behind them and try to see what is making them so happy...
As he bent a little forward he feel so embarrased seeing chachu romancing his chachi rani...

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Kalindi strictly warned astha to talk minimum infront of shlok as boys don't like very talktative girls...
Astha:but aayi ...
Kalindi:Its just matter of few minutes...phir jitna bolna hai shaadi ke baat bol lena...

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago

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Serviana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

nice start dear...lets see if Asthas wish will come true...poor baby...dreamer she is

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Aww...astha gonna have tough time controlling her continuous banter...
Chachu rani 🤣

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Devu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

lovely teaser meerab😛

chachu romancing with rani🤣🤣

can't waitupdate soon...

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
First of all : nice start liked it but i wonder why Shlok is against getting married :0 and the best part rani and vinayak kaka xD could not hold back a smirk :P
Pls continue soon

Originally posted by: ashlok
whattt!!??? vinayak married Rani
😆🤣😆that was very very funny dearrr
and shlok says his home is no less than
a Zoo that mean his home like my one
and shlok is sooo hot as aastha want
i mean very very high temper
and this aastha was very bold
shamelesss onee😆😆😆
lovely update dear
i laughed alottt update
sooon

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon
Awesome. What a concept. Love it.

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Nice Start Meerab...

Agni Family is so lovely and caring...

NA in a caring and loving dad...so cute...

The twins mischeives with Shlok was so lovely...

Agni house everybody trying there level best to make shlok agree for marriage...

Astha is very bold to talk to her mom abt her marriage...

Hope Astha dreams come true...

Percap sound interesting...

Thanks for the PM...

Waiting for the next part...Take your own time...