||AsHlok SS~The Voice~ Chapter6 Pg62 Up*8Oct14||

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

"How to explain to the earth that it was more functional as a vegetable patch than a flower garden, just as factories were more functional than schools and boys were more functional as weapons than as humans." 👏 👏

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

ch 4..

What a mess... shlok loved her to...
he did not why astha married samer... when she loved him

so the guilty feeling is keeping samer way from astha...

Nice story about Hoor and how it connected astha and
shlok...

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

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Suri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...
Awww amazing suri👏 shlok really wants Astha back in his life, but she still cares about her marriage and the fact that Sameer cares for her too. It was really cute how they took Kavya out for her birthday😃 the scenes were described really well, without doubt👏 loved it. Continue soon😛

Thanks Ayesha thank you for reading it!😃

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Suri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: khisher
Loved the chapter and the beginning especially🤗
Thanks for the PM yaar and This chap was once again and as always INCREDIBLE 👏

thanks Anaya

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904129

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Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Hun..Sorry For Posting Here! But Plese Do Check Ur Scraps..😊

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Devu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#397

fabulous update dear👏

well written,loved it❤️

continue soon...

Edited by DEVU.NAIR - 11 years ago

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#398

Both did it for each other...so sad...

their lifes change..coz they delayed ...

still have feelings...

but astha... carry more weight ... sameer and shlok...