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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: DEVU.NAIR
very good update😛
finally ashlok met😉
continue soon...

Thank youu devutty...😊😊😊.I will call you so..
You don't mind na..😉
I will continue soon

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Lovely Update Naina...

Shlok and Astha started their fight on first sight...so cute...

Sojal with her attitude...

Hope soon Ashlok fall in love soon...

awesome writing... waiting to know what happen next...

Hello yaar...😃
Thanks a looot for your compliments..😃
Yes Aashlok fight is on...
Plzz keep reading yaar

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: athmi
Superb update naina 👏 👏 👏
actually i was longing for this update for 2 days 😳
coming to the update
poor sojal all her plans went in vain
if i was her; i would have turned the house upside down. 😆
liking the contrast version of jo's character. 😃
always hero and heroin mistakenly carry each others bag but here brother mistakenly carried sis's bag which paved the way for the first meeting of hero and heroin 😆 😉.
superb lehenga dear. i really like that a lot. 😃
whoever sees astha in that attire would have gone flat; even our hero was not an exception. 😆 😳
hated towards each other... 😲 that was really good; bored with falling in first sight. 😃
but i was expecting sid and jo pair meet first. 😳
i want astha to drive shlok crazy for her 😆.
as always will be awaiting for the next chapter 😳
love you my dearest new Goldie 🤗 ❤️ 🤗

Hmm..Sojal is afraid of her Aayi..
That is why she didn't create any more problem..😆
I am happy that you liked Jo's character...
Thank u for appreciating the Lehenga pic..😃
And coming to Aashlok meeting and fight...
We all love their fights right..😊
I was soo soo sooo waiting for your comment..😳
Finally u did

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Devu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Thank youu devutty...😊😊😊.I will call you so..
You don't mind na..😉
I will continue soon

no problem dear😉

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

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PART 5

{{RECAP: Sojal is upset because their Goa trip gets cancelled due to the arrival of Kirloskar family...She argues with her mother Priya because she doesn't want to sleep with the other two girls..Sojal agrees at last..Kirloskar family arrive...Aastha and Jyoti are in Sojal's room and Varad is in Shlok's room..Aastha opens her suitcase to change the lehenga which she was wearing...Aastha realizes that her suitcase is with Varad and his suitcase is with her...So she goes to Shlok's room and knocks..Shlok stares at Aastha and thinks that she looks beautiful...Aastha and Shlok fight with each other on their very first meeting.}}

Aastha walked back towards her fallen suitcase and lifted it up..Then she glared at Shlok and walked towards the door muttering curses under her breath...As she passed him, he blocked her way and looked into her eyes with lot of attitude...She looked back with equal attitude and raised her brows at him...

Sh: What is your problem..? Oh hello..Do you think that you are so beautiful..?
As:(simply glared at him)
Sh:(Angrily)Then you just need to wake up..Stop dreaming, Ok..?! (steps aside)Now you may go...!!
As:(scornfully)As if I would love to stay here...huh!!(walks away shaking her head)

Shlok watched her walking away...He felt annoyed to the core..No girl had ever behaved with him like that..

Aastha reached back to her room with her own suitcase...She was really annoyed because of Shlok...She placed it down and opened it...

As: What does he think about himself..!!

She took out a night dress to wear and closed the suitcase...

As: Idiot ..!!Oh God...I will have to put up with him for some more days...

She didn't see Jyoti who came out of the washroom who had changed into her nightdress...

As: Doesn't even know how to talk to a girl..!
Jo: What happened, Aasthu..?Why are you muttering to yourself...?
As: (turns and sees Jo)It's nothing Tai..! I was just...
Jo: Ok Aasthu...Now you go and change your dress after freshening up...
As: Ok...(gets up and goes to the washroom)
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Meanwhile in Shlok's room, Varad came out of the washroom..

Va: Now I'm feeling so fresh yaar, Shlok...(smiles)
Sh: Your sister came here, some minutes ago..
Va: Who..? Jo or Aasthu...?
Sh: (shrugs his shoulders) I don't know yaar..She was saying that her suitcase was here...and yours were with her...
Va: Oh..then it will be Aasthu...Our suitcases look alike...Must have got interchanged by mistake
Varad walked towards his suitcase and opened it...He took out a night shirt and pajamas to wear...

Sh: Vaastuu..huhh...Strange name ..?
Va:(laughs)No...Its Aastha...Aasthu is her pet name
Sh: Aastha... (he thinks "It's a nice name!!")

Varad changed into his night wear...Siddharth walked into Shlok's room...Siddharth saw Varad and he understood who it was...

Si:(smiles to Varad)Hello..I am Siddharth...
Va:(smiles)Hiii Siddharth...I am Varad...
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After freshening up everybody assembled downstairs in the sitting room...Ram introduced Sojal, Shlok and Siddharth to the Kirloskars..Aastha and Shlok were trying to avoid each other's eyes..Varad, Shlok and Siddharth were sitting together...Aastha and Jyoti were sitting with Kalindi where as Sojal was sitting with her Kanya vahini...

Rm: So Avdhoot..Let us call Deepak and give him a surprise...He was so sad that he couldn't contact you to invite to his daughter's wedding..

Av: Yeah..Let us..

Ram dialed their friend's number and waited..He put on the loud speaker..

De: Hello..Ram...
Rm: Deepak..There's a big surprise for you...
De: What..?
Av: Hello Deepak...Guess who this is..
De: Avdhoot..?! No..How can it be possible..He is in Australia...
Av: Deepak..It's me yaar..(laughs)
De : (happily) Oh Avdhoot..It's you only..Yaar I can't believe this..!! So you are coming for my daughter's wedding right..?
Av: Of course yaar..
De: Ok then...Bring your family too..Wedding date is on day after tomorrow..
Av: Sure ..We will be there tomorrow..
Rm: Ok then Deepak..See you tomorrow..Bye...
De: Bye..

Ram disconnected the call...

Ni:Ram..The wedding is at Pune right..?
Rm: Yes Daada...
Jo: Baba..Should we also come to this shaadi..?
Av: Yes beta..Why...?
Jo: I don't want to come..Please Baba...It will be boring..
Va: Yes Baba. Today also we attended one shaadi...It was really boring..
But Aastha wanted to go..But she would miss all fun without her sister and brother...
Av: But beta...
Rm: It's ok na Avdhoot..Why are you compelling them..?Let them stay here...

Sojal widened her eyes in surprise hearing her Baba talking like this...

Av: Ok then..Aastha beta..Are you coming..?

Shlok looked at her...

As: No Papa..I will stay with Tai and Daada...
So: Baba..Then even I won't come..It's quite boring..I don't even know those people..
Rm: Sojal..
Si: Yes Baba..Even I and Shlok also...
Rm: Siddharth!!
Ni: Let it be Ram..If they all don't want to come, don't force..We all elders..i.e. You, Priya, Me, Anjali, Avdhoot and Kalindi can go..These kids don't know anyone there...Let them enjoy here and we will enjoy there..What do you say, Avdhoot..?
Av: Alright Niranjan daada...(smiles)
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Bed time, Sojal's room:

Aastha, Jyoti and Sojal walked into their bedroom yawning...

So: HAaawW...(yawning loudly)

Jyoti looked at Aastha with a funny expression..Aastha just smiled at her..Thankfully, Sojal didn't see them..Before anyone, Sojal got into the bed and lay down comfortably in the middle of the bed...After switching off the light, Aastha and Jyoti lay down on either sides of Sojal...The three of them fell asleep soon...After some time, Sojal began to snore...Jyoti opened her eyes suddenly...

Jo: What is that noise...?!!
And she understood that it was Sojal snoring...
Jo: Gosh!! This girl...!!

Jyoti turned towards Sojal and looked at her impatiently...Sojal was sleeping peacefully with her mouth opened slightly...Jyoti moved her hand towards Sojal's nose and slightly closed her nostrils with her fingers..The snoring noise stopped...

Jo: Phew...!(took off her hand)

But again the snoring started...Jyoti got irritated and began to shake Aastha who was lying on the other side of Sojal...

Jo: Aasthu...Aasthu...
As: (opening her eyes) What is it Taai..?

Aastha heard the snoring noise and turned towards Sojal...
As: Oh!! This girl snores...!!

Jo: Yeah..I am not able to sleep Aasthu...
As: What will we do..?How will we sleep..?
Jo: Don't know.!

But just then Sojal turned and lay on her side and the snoring subsided...

Jo: Phew!! Thank God..
As: Come on...She will start again soon...Let us sleep before that...
And Aastha and Jyoti lay down on the bed...
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So the next day all the elders left for Pune early morning...Ranbir and Kanya didn't go with them because, Kanya was left at home to take care of the youngsters and Ranbir decided to go to office, since there should be someone to take care of their business..

Shlok's room, 6.30 a.m:

Varad and Shlok were lying on the bed cosily under their blankets...Varad opened his eyes as it was the usual time he got up in the morning..He went for jogging in the morning..He sat up, stretched and looked at Shlok who was still asleep...

Va:(tapping his shoulder)Shlok...Shlok..
Sh: Hmm..Let me sleep...
Va: Shlok..Please get up...You promised me yesterday that you will take me for jogging..
Sh: Ok...(opens his eyes and sits up)
They washed their faces, put on their track suits and went off...

Sojal's room, 7.00 a.m:

Aastha awoke from her sleep and she got out of her bed...She didn't want to wake up Jyoti or Sojal who were sleeping peacefully...After freshening up, she got dressed in a green color kurta and jeans...Aastha went downstairs and she saw Ranbir who was sitting in the hall reading the newspaper.

As:Good morning Ranbir daada...(smiles)
Rb:Good morning Aastha...(smiles)
As: Where is Kanya vahini..?
Rb: She is in the kitchen..
As: Ok...

Aastha reached the kitchen...Kanya was busy in the kitchen, making breakfast for everyone...

As: Good morning vahini...(smiles)
K: (smiles)Good morning...Sojal and Jyoti didn't get up..?
As: No.
K: The boys got up early today...Shlok and Varad went for jogging..
As: Varad bhaiyya goes for jogging daily..Where is Sid then..?
K: Oh Sid..? He might be in the garden..

Just then Aastha noticed a tray laden with two tea cups..

As: Vahini..These are for Daada and Sid right..? Shall I go and give it to them.. ?Then I shall come back here and help you..
K: (smiles) Will you..? Oh..Thank you soo much ..

Aastha took the tea tray and first gave one cup to Ranbir and then went out to check for Siddharth.. He was sitting on a garden bench and was writing something..Aastha walked towards him.

As: Good Morning..Your tea (smiles)
Si:(smiles) Oh thank you.. Good Morning Aastha..
As: What are you writing..?
Si: Oh..It's nothing..A poem..
As: Ohh..Show me..
Si: Sure..but not now..After I finish it..Ok..?(smiles)
As: Ok..(smiles)

Just then Shlok and Varad came back after their jogging...They came towards Siddharth and Aastha...As usual Shlok and Aastha avoided each other's eyes...

Va: Good morning Siddharth and Aasthu..Where is Jo..?
As: Good morning..Still asleep I guess...
Si: Good morning Varad...Shlok..You also went for jogging today..?
Sh: Yes...Varad asked me to take him..(looks at the paper in Sid's hand) Sid...Have you st..
As: (interrupting Shlok) Daada..Sid is writing a poem..Isn't it Sid?
Si:(smiles) Yes...(looks at Varad)
Va: Is it..? (looks at the paper)

But Shlok was glaring at Aastha for interrupting him...Aastha just looked back at him coolly...Neither Varad nor Siddharth was noticing this...

Va: Well Shlok..Shall we go inside..I am starving...
Sh: Err..Ok..(looks at Varad) Let's go...(again glared at Aastha as he went with Varad)
As: (looks at Siddharth) Bye then.. I am going inside to help Kanya vahini..
Si: Sure...(smiles)
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Shlok and Varad walked upstairs and they reached near the girls' room...

Va: Shlok..You go...Let me go and wake up Jo...
Sh: Ok..(walks to his room)

Varad opened the door without making any noise...He looked at the bed and he saw someone sleeping on the bed fully under the blanket...It was Sojal..!!But he thought that it was Jyoti...He tip toed towards the bed and went closer to her head...

Va: (shouts)AAARRRGGG...

Sojal who was dreaming about some deadly monster, screamed loudly and attacked Varad on his face...She caught hold of his head and began to hit him violently as if she was battling with that monster, and she was screaming continuously...Poor Varad...At first he couldn't realize what was happening to him...The blanket shifted and Varad saw her face...Sojal eyes were still tight shut and she was brandishing her hands dangerously..

Va:(came to his senses) Soojaaal...?!!
So:(opened her eyes and stopped hitting) You..?! (sits up) What are you doing here..?

By that time, Shlok, Jyoti and Ranbir reached the room, hearing all the screaming noise...They were surprised to see Varad inside the girls' bedroom with Sojal...
Rb: What is going on here...?

Varad and Sojal looked at the door and saw them all...

Va:(surprised)Jyoti...!! I came to wake you up and I thought she was you...

So:(complains ) Ranbir Daada..This Varad tried to scare me...
Va: (innocently) Ranbir Daada.. You know what...I just roared loudly and tried to wake up Jyoti.. But it turned out to be Sojal..(looks at Sojal) And she hit me badly...(touches his face) Ouch..!!
Jo:(laughs loudly)Great Sojal...!!(laughs harder and gives a high five to Sojal)
So:(smiles happily) Thanks..

Shlok and Ranbir also began to laugh seeing Varad's helpless expression...

Rb: Hmm..You know what...She is the Sherni (lioness) of our house...(laughs)..Isn't it Sojal..?
So:(smiles) Yes...!!(looks at Varad and made an irritated face at him)
Va:(clutches his fist and acts as if trying to hit her)
Ranbir and Kanya went off, still laughing and Shlok walked towards the bed...
Sh: Miss.Sherni.. You go and brush your teeth..Then come down to have breakfast..
So:(made a face at him)O.K...(and got off the bed and went to the washroom)
Jo:(laughs at Varad again)
Va:(irritated) Listen Jo.. Don't you laugh at me...
Jo:(laughs harder) Shlok..See his expression..(bend with laughing)
Sh:(laughs)Varad..You look funny haan..(gives a high five to Jyoti)
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Did you all like this part..
Plzzz comment my dears..
Thank you for reading..
Love,
Naina😊