Ashlok SS-Dreams of a Sculptor & Sculpture- chp 13 - 28/5/15 uptd

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

@mahirmukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Very unique concept buds! 👏

A painter and his muse! 😉 Your writing is flawless babe, i could feel the chemistry between these two and their flaming desire was burning me too! 😳 I too like intensity in a romance. Love all the way or not at all! 😉

Love like dying, love like there is no tommorrow, love with your all that you've got, love beyond reason and imagination! That's my motto

I loved how her cloth got stuck and fell from her body revealing her body to him, but that wasn't only her body that was her soul too! 😉

And buds will be eagerly waiting for your next update, you see i'm a lecherous old gal! 😉😆

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Devu

@DEVU.NAIR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

awesome story chechii👏👏👏

totally different and interesting concept👍🏼

u always try to bring something new,i like that❤️❤️and ur writing style is so beautiful and intense,sometimes i feels like professional👏👏⭐️

loved the 2 updates very much❤️

do continue soon

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Me first...hehehe...

You are any time.. first..thanks satya.. 😉

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: DEVU.NAIR
awesome story chechii👏👏👏
totally different and interesting concept👍🏼
u always try to bring something new,i like that❤️❤️and ur writing style is so beautiful and intense,sometimes i feels like professional👏👏⭐️
loved the 2 updates very much❤️
do continue soon

hey pinky baby..

thank u for ur sweet comments.. sorry devu for not replying in the other thread.. kinda busy..im trvlng this weekend and no time..

again my 4G giving some problem..

now cmng to this concept,..it was started way back in july..now got time to think on melody love..

trying and experimenting something new..

thanks once again for ur apprn ..missed u a lot.. how much u urself will know..

tc..love u, ..

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: SahriShrAvi
me second🤗
you started it in July...😳 you wont believe i just read its 1 chap now (just going through old stories)
after finishing 1st chap i wondered ...would you ever continue it or not😔... and TADDA..🥳 you updated at same moment 😃 OMG So Happy😃

thats surprise sahrish .. u were readign my old stories.. kinda shockign but happy .. very happy ...
i started long back..but some how inspiration for moving it fwd ..i dint find ..so stopped it..felt writing again romance..so reopened.. let me try in this too ..thannks dear ..

Deepa...thank god you did not continue then... so now you have decided to make it SS that too Romantic one😉 Aahaan😳 and you kept your words as IT WAS HOT☺️... so perfect update even after long break👏

Oh..thank you again Sahrish .. I dont know..im tryin.. contemprory art with abstract and erotic with poetic romance.. all new try ..how it will take shap im still clueles..
hotness guaranteed.. in each chapter we may find little bit atleast.. atleast somebodsy pov..

LOved the scenario and you described Aastha'z beauty really well 👍🏼 just loved it.

OMG ... end was ☺️ she dropped that satin cloth accidently😲 and Shlok is all

that moth part i loved where moth bit aastha and in last on shloks hand to bring him in his senses 😆

Deepa... 🤗Loved the Update
Thanks for updating😳

Thanks again .. loved ur kind words.. Astha is a beauty..natural beauty.. describing her and him,...it is herculean task ..but i guess i was able to fulfill little bit of u guys thrill ..thanks a lot ..
moth.. even my fav too ..

love u gal..

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: avina_radev48
Hi deepa

Just read your SS in one go,

I can't explain how beautiful it is, even those words are less for praising, I don't know if I was reading a poem or a story, you have very different and awesome writing skill👏👏 it is flowing like a water, I just loved it!

Thank you Avina..it is really a big compliment .. that too getting from u ... I really dont know to write dialogues kind of writing..mine is more on narrative writing..i tell a story..or stroy reading .. i want the characters to be really felt by the reader and make them the part of the story as she is ashta or he was shlok...

Poetic .. STORY.. flowing like water.. vow.. big appreciation ..thanks a lot..

i loved their interaction, they are silent but still their emotions were conveying their thoughts to each other..
the story is contemprory and artistic.. so their emotions will talk in words.. they will talk less.. but it will be very romantic and erotic also ..

waiting for the next part eagerly, i want to see how shlok will control himself or will he?

nirma thoughts😆

lets see.. how it will be.. nirma.. or something else..