Ashlok SS-Dreams of a Sculptor & Sculpture- chp 13 - 28/5/15 uptd - Page 5

Originally posted by: SahriShrAvi

unres on page4😛

Originally posted by: Priya_ShrAvi

Aval oru thodar kadai...exactly the characters...after watching such movies...I can't tell whether I enjoyed it or not but feel a lil low after watching...with tears n all...lol

But in FF's I don't have such prob...bcos u guys will give almost happy ending...so love to read them!

And the reason I picked that arangetram movie...in the same way ...lots of siblings...extreme poverty...being the elder one she starts her career but the cruel fate push her into sex trade!and it goes like that...her struggle...her inner turmoil...beautiful portrayal...but one need tissue bundle to finish watching...lol

Have u watched that movie??

Originally posted by: nim_var

Hey deepa, wonderful tale.

Silence betn them. shlok is an aritst, a new concept. love how you are developing the chars and Aastha as the responsible older daughter...to help her family.

weeks go by and not a word exchanged but looks and eyes speak all, convey their inner most deisres and emotions.

superb, continue.

Originally posted by: taahir004

Awesome and Sizzling Update
romance and fun held the highlight it was just fabulous

Originally posted by: avni4

Wow...it felt like am in 3d world snd everything's ng is happening before me

Originally posted by: vj3072

deepa superb...well I want her to run to Shlok without the 5 yard satin 😆

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

Very unique concept buds! 👏

A painter and his muse! 😉 Your writing is flawless babe, i could feel the chemistry between these two and their flaming desire was burning me too! 😳 I too like intensity in a romance. Love all the way or not at all! 😉

Thank you Mahi .. Intense romantic love.. This is not gothic kind...but may be desire and passion.. all dark shades i may try and bring in ..let me see. .

Love like dying, love like there is no tommorrow, love with your all that you've got, love beyond reason and imagination! That's my motto

look who talks serious love.. loved the thought..mind i borrow these lines..

I loved how her cloth got stuck and fell from her body revealing her body to him, but that wasn't only her body that was her soul too! 😉

And buds will be eagerly waiting for your next update, you see i'm a lecherous old gal! 😉😆

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

hey pinky baby..

thank u for ur sweet comments.. sorry devu for not replying in the other thread.. kinda busy..im trvlng this weekend and no time..

again my 4G giving some problem..

now cmng to this concept,..it was started way back in july..now got time to think on melody love..

trying and experimenting something new..

thanks once again for ur apprn ..missed u a lot.. how much u urself will know..

tc..love u, ..

Originally posted by: DEVU.NAIR

no worries chechii,will wait for ur comments always😃

missed u too a lot,love u🤗❤️

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

devu ..chk the other thread.. the angles and demons htread..

i wrote a poem for u.