FF-HUM AAPKE HAIN KAUN?(Final Part & Epilogue update in Pg66

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#451

ok.its a nice ending.but it wud b nice if u bring up an epilogue

Originally posted by: hp_2006

I thought of ending this FF later yaar..Couldn't come up with more parts..😊So decided to stop updating

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hiba

@mriara13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#452

Hey sweetie ...

just came across your little story and read it all in one go. ..

must say my my what a magnificent story. ..

even if you don't continue I have no regrets but just give us a final paragraph or something lol..

Nonetheless it was beautiful...really

hiba

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: mriara13
Hey sweetie ...
just came across your little story and read it all in one go. ..
must say my my what a magnificent story. ..
even if you don't continue I have no regrets but just give us a final paragraph or something lol..
Nonetheless it was beautiful...really
hiba

Thank you so much yaar Hiba..😃

I will surely add an epilogue..😊

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Natasha

@.Natasha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#454

Hey! Nw u will hav to write one Naina... I demand epilogue along with em... Bt hav exams, so will read oly after 26th 😔

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: .Natasha.
Hey! Nw u will hav to write one Naina... I demand epilogue along with em... Bt hav exams, so will read oly after 26th 😔

😛 Sure my sweetie..How was ur exams, till now..? Hope that you did well..😊

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
ok.its a nice ending.but it wud b nice if u bring up an epilogue

I will add an epilogue for sure my dear..thanks for demanding😃

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Natasha

@.Natasha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: hp_2006

😛 Sure my sweetie..How was ur exams, till now..? Hope that you did well..😊

Easy so far... Can't believe I was breaking heads fr this😆 Bt ya, nxt week, I hav tough exams 😔

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: .Natasha.

Easy so far... Can't believe I was breaking heads fr this😆 Bt ya, nxt week, I hav tough exams 😔

😊 don't worry my dear..You will do well in those exams too..My best wishes are with you..God Bless😊

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#459

PART 11--FINAL PART

*********************AFTER THREE MONTHS******************

Anjali and Aastha were doing some work in the kitchen.

A: Aayi, I have made the necessary masala for the lemon pickle. Please check whether this is ok.
An: Ok beta..One minute.

Anjali came towards her and took a pinch of the masala and tasted it. But Aastha was feeling dizzy, she closed her eyes and then she fainted. Anjali heard the sound and turned in shock. She saw her on the ground and she knelt down beside her.

An: Aastha..Aastha (shakes her)

Then she took some water and sprinkled on Aastha's face..She opened her eyes..
A: (weak voice)Aayii..(sits up and touches her head)
An: What happened, Aastha beta..Are you not feeling well..?
A: I am ok Aayi..I felt like my head was spinning..Now I am alright..
An: No No..You need rest..I will take you to your room..Come with me..

Anjali helped Aastha to get up and took her upstairs to her room. After sometime the Doctor came and checked her. After some time the Doctor smiled at them.

D: Aastha is pregnant, Anjali ji...

Anjali's joy knew no bounds. She thanked Bappa for the good news.
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Ayaan and Navya arrived from the school in the evening and saw only Anjali in the drawing room. They ran to her and hugged her.

Ay: Aaji..Where is Mumma..?
Na: Has she gone out for shopping..?

Anjali smiled at them and took their tiny hands in her hands and led them towards the sofa.

An: Both of you sit down. I have to say something to you both.

The kids sat down as she told and gazed at her intently.

Ay: Aaji..what is it..?
An: (smiling sweetly) Your Mumma is upstairs in her room. She is having a small baby in her tummy now. Both of you are going to have a brother/ sister soon.
Navya widened her eyes and smiled excitedly whereas Ayaan gazed away dreamily and smiled.
Na: Wowww Aaji..But how did you know about it..? Did the baby cry from inside Mumma's tummy..?

Anjali chuckled at her innocent question. Ayaan frowned and hit his forehead gently with his hand.

Ay: Offo Navya. That baby is a boy like me. It won't cry. It's brave like me and Papa.
An: No my dears. The baby will be so small now. We won't hear it. Mumma fainted today and so Doctor Aunty came and did some check up. And she said that there is a baby inside Aastha Mumma's tummy now and we must all take care of her. She is weak now so you both shouldn't give any tension to Mumma and baby. Promise me.
Ay: We would take care of Mumma and baby. Isn't it Navya..?(put his arm around her shoulder)
Na:(nods her head) Of course Ayaan.
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After having some tea time snacks and milk, Ayaan and Navya went upstairs with Anjali to meet their Aastha Mumma. They saw that she was sleeping and so they sat down beside her for some time and then went out to play.
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It was evening and Shlok came home after office. He was so happy and he came to their room. He saw her lying on the bed with her eyes closed. He went and sat near Aastha. He slowly ran his hand along her head. She opened her eyes and saw Shlok.

A: Shlok..(smiles and sits up) When did you arrive..?
S:(looks at her with lot of love)Just now...I am so happy Aastha(hugs her excitedly)
A: (smiles) Even I am, Shlok..
S: love you...(and kisses her forehead)
A: I love you too Shlok...(and again hugs him)
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By the evening Aastha overcame her weakness after resting for a long time. She helped Anjali for preparing the dinner and later had dinner with everyone.

After she tucked the kids in their bed, she came back to her own bedroom. Aastha was standing alone in the balcony and she was looking at the moon. She was wearing a pink color night gown with spaghetti straps. Shlok came out from the washroom and he saw Aastha standing in the balcony. He went to her and hugged her from behind and kissed her bare shoulder.

A:Shlok...(and touched his face without turning back)
S:(raises his head and kisses her cheek) What are you looking at, sweetheart..?(places his head on her shoulder)
A: I was looking at the moon..You know what, Shlok..Our son will be handsome like this moon..
S:(takes off his head from her shoulder) Son..?? No..I need a daughter...(leaves her)
A:(gets irritated and turns to face him) Who told you..? He will be a son..I know it..
S: (touches her tummy) No yaar..It is a girl..I can feel it...(and holds her shoulders, then romantically) And she is going to be beautiful just like you(smiles)
A:(blushes)Shlok...(and hugs him)
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Months passed. And now Aastha was 7 months pregnant. Her belly was bigger than ever. She was sitting on her bed leaning on to the pillows and was reading a book based on babies and pregnancy. Shlok was also there in the room and he was doing some paperwork sitting by a table in a corner. Suddenly Aastha called out..

A:Shlok!!
S:(startled) What is it ..?

He found that she was touching her belly and smiling.

A:(excitedly) Look here, Shlok..It is kicking my insides...Come on...Touch and see...(and touches here and there on her belly)

Excitedly Shlok got up from his chair and sat beside her. As she was wearing a sari, she shifted it off her belly and Shlok could see the foot prints of his baby kicking on the surface of her round belly. He became curious and touched the area. He could feel the small pressure of the kicks. He placed his face lightly on her belly and received one kicked on his face. He felt a tickling sensation and took off his face. Then he started talking to the baby.

S: Hello...You are kicking on your Papa's face...Very bad, huh..!!Very bad..
A:(laughs)Shlok!!
S:(looks at her and smiles..Then again to her belly) Your Papa is eagerly waiting to see you, baby..Come out soon.. So that I can shower you with my kisses...(and starts to kiss all over her tummy)
A:(starts laughing) What are you doing, Shlok..Your beard is tickling me..(continues laughing)Ok my wifey..(stops kissing and sits up facing Aastha ) I can place a kiss on your cheek na..(and gives a sweet kiss on her cheek)No..It's not enough..

Then he started nuzzling her neck side.

A:(laughs) Stop it Shlok...(slaps lightly on his face) And finish off your work soon..I need to sleep..
S: Wait I want to give one more kiss..

Shlok softly sucked in her lips and she closed her eyes. He caressed her cheek with one hand and the other hand stroked her arm. He deepened the kiss and put his tongue inside and she sucked it with her mouth. He cupped her breast with one hand and laid her down on the bed gently. He buried his face into her neck and rubbed his lips along its side. She murmured his name and her hands clutched on the back of his night t-shirt. He caressed her breast and she squirmed in his arms. Shlok chuckled and he kissed her cheeks and forehead again. He whispered in her ears.."I love you Aastha.." and touched her round belly and stroked it..''I love you too baby.."
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After 2 and a half months:

Aastha was sitting in the hall with Shlok, Ayaan and Navya and they were watching T.V. Shlok and Aastha were sitting close to each other on the sofa. He had put his arm around her shoulder. Ayaan and Navya were sitting on the floor in front of them. Since they couldn't notice, Shlok started to nuzzle her face and neck. Aastha gave a nice pinch on his arm.

S:Ouch!!
The kids turned backwards.
A: What happened, Papa..?
S:Err..a mosquito bit me...
Na:(giggles) We know who that mosquito is..(looks at Aastha )
A: (widens her eyes) Navyaaa...!! You are so naughty now-a-days..Aaarrrgghhh...
Suddenly Aastha clutched her belly with a painful expression
S: What happened, Aastha ..?(concerned)
A: It's paining...Ouch!!(closes her eyes)Shlok, do something...Aaaghh...
S: Aayiii...Aastha is having some pain..
Anjali came running from the pujaroom where she was praying.
An: Shlok..Oh no..Let us take her to the hospital..
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Life line Hospital, Pune :

The Agnihotris were waiting anxiously in a corridor. Shlok was standing at the window and praying inside his mind for his baby and his loving wife. Ayaan noticed him and he nudged Navya who was sitting beside him.

Ay: Look at Papa..
Na: He is tensed about our Mumma and the baby..
Ay: Hmm..Let's go to him..We will try to cheer him up...
Na: O.k..

Ayaan and Navya walked to him. Navya patted his thigh...

Na:(slowly) Papa...
S:(turns and asks slowly) What happened, beta..?
Ay:(smiling) Papa..Don't worry..Bappa will take care of everything..
Na:(cheerfully) Yes, Papa..Mumma always says that Bappa will take care of our every worry..
S:(smiles and puts a hand around shoulder of each)Thank you my sweet hearts..

Suddenly the Nurse came out of the operation theatre. Anjali asked her.

An: Is everything alright..?
Nurse(smiles): Everything is alright. The mother and the baby. Both are fine. There's nothing to worry..
S:(runs to her)Thank you...Thank you very much..(tears of happiness in his eyes)
N: Mr. Agnihotri, It's a baby girl..
S:What..?!!(excited)

Shlok turned around and looked at his family..Everyone's face shone with happiness.
Ayaan and Navya hugged each other and jumped in excitement. Shlok hugged Anjali.

Na: It's a girl..It's a girl..
Ay: I have got one more sister..Yayyy...
Nurse: After sometime we will shift them to a room and then you all can meet both of them.
S: Ok..(smiles)
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Later, Anjali, Shlok and the kids walked into the room. Aastha was lying on her bed with a sweet smile on her exhausted face.

S: Aastha..(smiles) How are you feeling now..?
A: I am alright..(smiles)

The kids walked leant and kissed her cheeks.

Ay: Mumma, where is the baby..?
A: There..(indicates a cradle on the other side of her bed)

Shlok got up and went to the other side. Their little daughter was lying wrapped in white cotton cloth. Its little eyes were tightly shut. Shlok was delighted to see the cute little thing. He took it in his arms and his eyes filled with tears of happiness. He kissed its forehead and it squirmed cutely. He smiled wider and placed it into Anjali's arms. Anjali laughed seeing its cute face and held it closer to her heart. Then Shlok bent and took Ayaan and Navya in his arms and kissed their cheeks one by one. He was feeling the utmost joy in a lifetime, being the proud father of three cute little kids.
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So this was the final part, friends..
If you liked this update please hit the like button
Comments are most welcome..
Love,
Naina
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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#460

EPILOGUE

Five Years Later:

Ayaan and Navya were 12 years old now. They were sitting down and doing their homework in their room when little Anaya came running into the room. Her lovely eyes stared at both her elder brother and sister who were doing their work seriously.

An: Ayaan Daada, Navya Taii..Please play with me na..Look here..I have brought the ball with me..

Navya and Ayaan looked at each other and smiled.

Ay: Annu baby..Is Mumma somewhere around..?
Na: If she sees us playing with you now, she will scold us. We have so much homework to do na..
An: No No..She is down in the kitchen with Aaji..
Ay: Ok then..Come Navya..Let's play with Annu.

The brother and the two sisters began to play now with the ball. They loved playing with their darling sister. They could never say "No" to Anaya. She was the apple of their eyes.
Just then Aastha came storming inside the room from somewhere.

As: What is going on here..?(stern look)

The kids stopped playing abruptly. She narrowed her eyes and glared playfully at little Anaya.

As: Annu..Why are you disturbing your Daada and Taii..?They have a lot of work to do..
An: Sorry Mummaa..But I have no work to do..(pouts innocently)
Na: Mumma..I will get her colors and coloring book. Let her do it sitting here.

Before she could complete Ayaan searched the room and came up with them. Aastha loved the way Navya and Ayaan always took care of their little sister.

Ay: Annu..You sit down with us and do the coloring work ok.
As: Annu..Promise me that you will do your work without disturbing Daada and Taai.
An: Promise Mumma..

Aastha smiled at them and she left the room. Just as she was walking along the corridor, a pair of arms hugged her from behind.

As: (blushing) Shlok..
Sh: My wifey never misses me these days. She is always busy taking care of the whole house, Aayi and the kids. Not a glance at her handsome husband.
As: It's nothing like that Shlok. You know that I love you.
Shlok pulled her inside his room and locked the door. He turned her around and hugged her tightly. He nuzzled her earlobe and whispered "You have become more beautiful now a days. I never knew you could look even prettier than you were before. "
As: (blushes) Stop making fun of me, Shlok..
Sh: (huskily) No..I noticed it while we were having dinner. And I just wanted to kiss you then and there. But I had to control my urge. Now I won't leave you..

He sucked her lips with much need and she surrendered herself to his passion. She hugged him around his waist and dug her finger nail into his skin at the back. Shlok brought his hand to her navel and clutched the pleats of her sari pulled it outside in a swift move. The sari fell down in a second and he scooped her up in his sturdy arms. Within seconds she was on the bed and he flopped down upon her petite body which was covered only by the black blouse and her black petticoat. He buried his face into her neck and nibbled the skin there. His one hand was caressing her breast and the other hand was stroking her slender waist. He focused his gaze on her cleavage and saw her breasts bulging out slightly from the neckline of the blouse. He licked those half mounds and kissed into her cleavage. He inserted his tongue into the tight cleavage and pumped it inside out in slow calculated movements. Aastha was squirming and moaning below him and it only aggravated his manly vigor. He bit the peak of her breast gently and she let out a loud moan. He unhooked the blouse and threw it aside. The lacy inner which she was wearing was transparent and he let it be. He moved down and trailed kisses along her tummy, while his one hand moved inside the petticoat and stroked her thigh and the other hand loosened the string of her petticoat. She moaned in pure passion and Shlok was not going to stop tormenting her with his raw acts of lovemaking.

She now lay in her lacy and transparent lingerie and Shlok admired her beautiful body. He hugged her and continued exciting her by caressing and kissing all over her body. After some time, he pulled off her remaining clothing and spread her legs wide and slowly entered inside her. Rhythmic thrusts led into non-rhythmic moans and gasps and Shlok was the master of this game. Aastha and Shlok reached the peak of excitement and he showered of the juice his love inside her. She was overwhelmed and pulled him towards her to hug him tightly. Shlok whispered into her ears "You will never cease to excite me Aastha..My hot wifey", to which she smiled widely and kissed his lips to silence him.
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So this was the epilogue..
Hope that all of you liked it..
Love,
Naina

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