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Hello Friends..😃
I have come up with a new FF..
It is based on a popular Malayalam Film..This story is a really touching one and I love this film very much..😳
So I thought of making this FF based on our show..I have twisted the storyline a little bit..I hope that you all will like this one..😊
Shlok Agnihotri had just returned from the office on that evening. As soon as he stepped inside the Agnihotri Mansion, he walked towards the huge Photo frame mounted on the wall of drawing room. He folded his hands in a Namaste, praying for the blessings of his beloved father, Late. Shri. Niranjan Agnihotri.
His Mother, Anjali walked towards him. He bowed and touched her feet also. She touched his head and blessed him..Then he stood straight and faced her.
S: What happened, Aayi..? Why did you ask me to come home immediately after office? Is there any problem..?(feeling concerned)
A :(tensed) Shlok beta, your kids are throwing up tantrums. They are telling that they won't have any food, unless their Baba comes and fulfills their demand.
S :( slightly shocked) What..?!
A: Yes..They haven't had any food since they came back from the school today..
S :(frowning) But Aayi...What is their demand?
A: Well..I don't know..You go and ask them..They are in their room..
Shlok was deep in thought, as he climbed up the stairs. He walked along the corridor and reached the Kids' Room..He opened it and his eyes fell upon his two twin kids (Both 6 years old), Ayaan and Navya, standing with their back at him at the window. Ayaan had put his arm around his sister's shoulder and Navya's arm was around his waist. A happy smile appeared on Shlok's lips as it always did whenever he witnessed the love and unity the siblings shared with each other.
S: (Loudly) Good evening, my sweethearts..Your Papa has arrived..
Ayaan:
Navya
The kids turned swiftly hearing their father's voice..But suddenly both of them turned away from him at the same time without greeting him..Shlok was quite taken aback by their behavior.. He approached them from behind, knelt down and put an arm around each of them..
S: What is the matter with you two, my babies..? Are you angry with your Papa..
Both the kids turned in unison and pushed Shlok away gently with their both hands..
A & N : We want to see our Mummy..
S :( truly surprised)What..?!
Ayaan: Yes Papa..Everyone in our class has a Mummy..
Navya: Why is it so that we are having only you, Papa..
Shlok smiled at them and hugged them again..
S: (slowly and lovingly) It's because I am both your Mummy and Papa..2 in 1..
A: No Papa..You are lying to us..
N: We know that we have a Mummy..(starts crying)
Shlok let out a sigh and got up..He made them both sit down on the bed and knelt before them..
S: (taking a deep breath) Now listen carefully.. I only know one thing..Currently, your Mummy lives in Mumbai..5 years ago, when both of you were one year old, she fought with me and left all of us.(tears fill his eyes) I am really angry with her ..(looks down sadly unable to talk)..(again looks up) Why do you both want to meet her when she doesn't want to be with any of us..
Ayaan and Navya looked at each other..They were astonished to see tears in the eyes of Shlok, their "strong Papa"..
A:But why did she fight with you Papa..?
S: She wanted to run a business on her own and she was not happy to be a part of our family business. But my Baba, i.e., your Grandpa, was against her and she walked out of our house. I couldn't support her because I couldn't go against my Baba's wish..He was God to me..(looks away)
Ayaan and Navya tried to imagine those scenes in their mind's eye. But even if they could see their mother's vague image, they couldn't imagine her face..But they understood that their Papa wouldn't be able to let them meet their mother. They understood his dilemma..
A: It's ok Papa..We don't want to meet her..But we just want to know how she looks..We want to see her photo..
S: (looks at him) I don't have any photo beta..We discarded everything related to her..
N: But Papa..Please tell us how she looks..Was she tall like you?
A: Was she beautiful?
S :(looks away as he was trying to imagine) She was really shorter than me..She had beautiful doe-like eyes..Her lips were rosy and pretty..Always wore a cute little bindi on her forehead..(touches Navya's forehead)She had long and beautiful black hair.. She liked to wear beautiful sarees..
Shlok's face grew painful with each statement..He looked down and wiped his tears..
S: (smiling miserably)Now if you both love me, (Shlok took each of their one hand in his either hand) Please don't ask about your mother again..
Ayaan and Navya hugged their father with all their love and care..They felt really sorry for their Papa..
A&N: We won't ask Papa..We love you..
S: Ok then.. You both are coming down with me now and are going to have some food..
A&N: Ok Papa..
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So this was the PROLOGUE..Should I continue this FF.. ??😊
Please feel free to express your views about this story..
Those who already know this story, (Malayalis/Keralites),Please enjoy reading the EBP show' version😳
Love you all,
Naina🤗
INDEX
*********************************
PART 1- PAGE 8
PART 2-PAGE 13
PART 3-PAGE19
PART 4-PAGE25
PART 5-PAGE 31
PART 6-PAGE 35
PART 7-PAGE 42
PART 8-PAGE 48
PART 9-PAGE 54
PART 10-PAGE 59
PART 11-PAGE 66
EPILOGUE-PAGE 66
PM LIST
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I have come up with a new FF..
It is based on a popular Malayalam Film..This story is a really touching one and I love this film very much..😳
So I thought of making this FF based on our show..I have twisted the storyline a little bit..I hope that you all will like this one..😊
PROLOGUE
Shlok Agnihotri had just returned from the office on that evening. As soon as he stepped inside the Agnihotri Mansion, he walked towards the huge Photo frame mounted on the wall of drawing room. He folded his hands in a Namaste, praying for the blessings of his beloved father, Late. Shri. Niranjan Agnihotri.
His Mother, Anjali walked towards him. He bowed and touched her feet also. She touched his head and blessed him..Then he stood straight and faced her.
S: What happened, Aayi..? Why did you ask me to come home immediately after office? Is there any problem..?(feeling concerned)
A :(tensed) Shlok beta, your kids are throwing up tantrums. They are telling that they won't have any food, unless their Baba comes and fulfills their demand.
S :( slightly shocked) What..?!
A: Yes..They haven't had any food since they came back from the school today..
S :(frowning) But Aayi...What is their demand?
A: Well..I don't know..You go and ask them..They are in their room..
Shlok was deep in thought, as he climbed up the stairs. He walked along the corridor and reached the Kids' Room..He opened it and his eyes fell upon his two twin kids (Both 6 years old), Ayaan and Navya, standing with their back at him at the window. Ayaan had put his arm around his sister's shoulder and Navya's arm was around his waist. A happy smile appeared on Shlok's lips as it always did whenever he witnessed the love and unity the siblings shared with each other.
S: (Loudly) Good evening, my sweethearts..Your Papa has arrived..
Ayaan:
Navya
The kids turned swiftly hearing their father's voice..But suddenly both of them turned away from him at the same time without greeting him..Shlok was quite taken aback by their behavior.. He approached them from behind, knelt down and put an arm around each of them..
S: What is the matter with you two, my babies..? Are you angry with your Papa..
Both the kids turned in unison and pushed Shlok away gently with their both hands..
A & N : We want to see our Mummy..
S :( truly surprised)What..?!
Ayaan: Yes Papa..Everyone in our class has a Mummy..
Navya: Why is it so that we are having only you, Papa..
Shlok smiled at them and hugged them again..
S: (slowly and lovingly) It's because I am both your Mummy and Papa..2 in 1..
A: No Papa..You are lying to us..
N: We know that we have a Mummy..(starts crying)
Shlok let out a sigh and got up..He made them both sit down on the bed and knelt before them..
S: (taking a deep breath) Now listen carefully.. I only know one thing..Currently, your Mummy lives in Mumbai..5 years ago, when both of you were one year old, she fought with me and left all of us.(tears fill his eyes) I am really angry with her ..(looks down sadly unable to talk)..(again looks up) Why do you both want to meet her when she doesn't want to be with any of us..
Ayaan and Navya looked at each other..They were astonished to see tears in the eyes of Shlok, their "strong Papa"..
A:But why did she fight with you Papa..?
S: She wanted to run a business on her own and she was not happy to be a part of our family business. But my Baba, i.e., your Grandpa, was against her and she walked out of our house. I couldn't support her because I couldn't go against my Baba's wish..He was God to me..(looks away)
Ayaan and Navya tried to imagine those scenes in their mind's eye. But even if they could see their mother's vague image, they couldn't imagine her face..But they understood that their Papa wouldn't be able to let them meet their mother. They understood his dilemma..
A: It's ok Papa..We don't want to meet her..But we just want to know how she looks..We want to see her photo..
S: (looks at him) I don't have any photo beta..We discarded everything related to her..
N: But Papa..Please tell us how she looks..Was she tall like you?
A: Was she beautiful?
S :(looks away as he was trying to imagine) She was really shorter than me..She had beautiful doe-like eyes..Her lips were rosy and pretty..Always wore a cute little bindi on her forehead..(touches Navya's forehead)She had long and beautiful black hair.. She liked to wear beautiful sarees..
Shlok's face grew painful with each statement..He looked down and wiped his tears..
S: (smiling miserably)Now if you both love me, (Shlok took each of their one hand in his either hand) Please don't ask about your mother again..
Ayaan and Navya hugged their father with all their love and care..They felt really sorry for their Papa..
A&N: We won't ask Papa..We love you..
S: Ok then.. You both are coming down with me now and are going to have some food..
A&N: Ok Papa..
***********************************
So this was the PROLOGUE..Should I continue this FF.. ??😊
Please feel free to express your views about this story..
Those who already know this story, (Malayalis/Keralites),Please enjoy reading the EBP show' version😳
Love you all,
Naina🤗
INDEX
*********************************
PART 1- PAGE 8
PART 2-PAGE 13
PART 3-PAGE19
PART 4-PAGE25
PART 5-PAGE 31
PART 6-PAGE 35
PART 7-PAGE 42
PART 8-PAGE 48
PART 9-PAGE 54
PART 10-PAGE 59
PART 11-PAGE 66
EPILOGUE-PAGE 66
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