ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 61

Originally posted by: rbb1

Thank you nice update, wow he was married before, this story is getting interesting, Eid Mubarak

Originally posted by: NatashaRia

*sighs* at last I finish reading all d chaps... Sry hon, fr keepin u at wait...

Shlok

OMG... Haven't read a gentle man like this... He's just amazing...

Aastha had to go thru a lot bcuz of her step dad...If dat man ws ever alive, I swear I wud've killed him brutally with my bear arms... Is dat wat a man does to a girl??. Aastha shud ve opened up bfre itself to her mom... Bt, she at least saved another girl... Dat bas***d... Uff, sry fr my language... Bt d whole update raged d girl in me up... Each time I read these stuffs in newspaper, I cry... This too made me cry...

Shlok ws sooo supportive, so gentlemanly in dis FF... Bt dat prompts out a question, do people like him exist in this cynical world? In this world where Reputation stands first, nt human beings? Cn a person love anybody more dan dis??? I used to believe in love, used to... Bt dis made me believe again... Fiction or not...

I love Shlok in dis... He's just amazing... OMG... The way he don't give up hope n tried fr Aastha... Cupid, bow to him...

Aastha at last accepted her love n I ws dancing like maniac...

The KISS... ☺️ soo cute...

Rash n rosh were adorable in dis...

Loved it soo much... N ur poems... Dey r gr8. U shud try writing fr Mills&Boon... I loved it Anu... I totally loved it...

I wish fr my MPC to be like Shlok...

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

is it so..nats...liked each and every word you said... about this FF... great comments

Originally posted by: meerab...

It was sooo emotional anu...

I was feeling sooo bad for the poor small girl who was raped for five years😭...her step dad was 😡...every punishment is less for such people...

But happy that even with her worst past shlok accepted her...

And the kiss part was really sooo good...

And her daughters truth...that was another sad part...how can someone throw their children sooo mercilessly to die...

Overall it was a superb update and u nailed it with ur brilliant writings⭐️...

Originally posted by: athmi

oh no poor astha had to under go all these crap 😭

the worst filthy man was her step father 😡

hope that shlok's parents accept her 😕

tfd pm. 😊

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Heartbreaking update! What a poor soul! She was raped for nearly five years i hope nothing like that ever happens to any of our kids!

Sadly that her daughter's were thrown away just because they weren't "perfect".

I hope Shloks Family will approve their relationship! !!

Pls do update soon

Originally posted by: priya_avi

Shlok ...what a perfect man for this tiny lost broken soul...
Even though u have mentioned in detail about astha' past already...again reading it made me 😭 as reading it first time...
Now I understand what she must be feeling to open up...its a most terrible thing to happen to any kid...
That too for 5years 😭 ...ruthless animal 🤢 🤬

Kiss 😃 its really awesome...double treat [:D/]
❤️ love u for this ❤️

Loved how he called the kids as his future daughters... 👍🏼

Thank u anu for this wonderful updates...n pm...

Will shlok parents accept astha with 2kids n terrible past...
I think they will,..
After all they r shlok agnihothri's parents 😎