Aashlok OS - THE BRIDGE

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Samia

@Sam_15

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

RES..

Will read and comment later

Thanks for the pm btw :)

Edited by Sam_15 - 11 years ago

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@MereMahiyaa.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Wooow awesomee os yaar thanks for the pm
very well writting

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Efinah36

@Efinah36

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Great OS
So sad and touching
😭
Loved it

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logambika

@.logs

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

awesome yaar... thnks for the pm..

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

awesome os NehA
but the end was sad
well written

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Zehra Fatima Chohan

@Zehra.

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

What an emotional OS neha .. i almost guessed it while reading that something has happened to astha but was shocked to read that she was murdered 😭
it is so well written that it kept me hooked till the end !! keep writing 😊

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Why were u nervous??😲 The min I read the last line of 1st paragraph I knew smthng ws wierd abt d situatn..and the way u ended it..I say I hate sad endngs bt whle readng ths I smiled al along..The end..I would hv neva been able to write it that way! AShlok holdng hands U r right hw situatns matter the way v take them!😊 Btw my guess wasnt that bad aftral! Evn aftr sayng alvida to life she stayed wid him😳 Okay thts me self-praisng😆 Wish It ws longer!😊 btw did I say u are the only writer who hs made me like sadness in a story👏🤗

Edited by Aishaa3 - 11 years ago