Ashlok ff - My love is you- Part 11 - Pg 39 18/12 PM LATER - Page 13

Originally posted by: ashlok

its not fair logambika to make short update

we want long updatesss

for this short update ur punishment is next time update a

longgg one(samazlaaa???)

anyhow the update was very nice dearrr

i can sense something is wrong with aastha and shlok

but i am sure that shlok will be her new MD

plz update sooon

i love the song very much

punishment accepted... there may be... it will be known with Shlok's entry... will update soon dr...

Originally posted by: niki795

Nice part

No shlok in this update too 😒

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

shlok will be in the scene soon... thnks for reading... do continue reading...

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Logs yaar...This part was really nice and romantic.😳.
Poor Aastha..Still living in her thoughts about Shlok😭
Shlok...Come soon into Aastha's life..😊

Hope you bring the next update soon...Thank you my dear😃

thanks for ur support yaar... Who knows that what will happen after Shlok's entry...? will update soon... aur yeh thanks kis ke liye?

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Nice update Logs...

A short but sweet update...So well written...

I loved the way she pacified herself and got herself ready for the way...She is a bold and brave girl...

The way shlok cared for her in the rain was just amazing...

The rain dance was superb...But Poor Astha everything happened in her dream...

So many question raising dear...Why did Shlok and Astha seperated...

When he is going to come back to her...

Let me guess...The new MD will be Shlok...

If it so then we will be having more fun...

Thanks for the PM...

thnks for ur compliment dear... im happy that this part was liked by u all... nyc guessing... it will be revealed in the next update...

Originally posted by: .logs

thanks for ur support yaar... Who knows that what will happen after Shlok's entry...? will update soon... aur yeh thanks kis ke liye?

Thanks for updating yaar😃...I want you to update soon the next part ok my dear😊

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Thanks for updating yaar😃...I want you to update soon the next part ok my dear😊

sure dear... im working on it. If i don't have my college, I will post it on saturday. Else it will be on sunday. Also, a friend has asked for a long update.😆

Originally posted by: .logs

sure dear... im working on it. If i don't have my college, I will post it on saturday. Else it will be on sunday. Also, a friend has asked for a long update.😆

Wowww long update would be most welcome😉😃

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Wowww long update would be most welcome😉😃

ya... wil do it yaar...

Originally posted by: Efinah36

Great update
Thanks for pm

thanks for reading and commenting yaar...

Originally posted by: sruthykarthika

Interesting story. Plz pm me.

ya dr... will add you to the list...

Checked the previous chap too... Great update yaar! Loved it