Aapki...AasthaFF(Part 15 update in Pg 78)

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Bobbie

@bobbiedhillon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Awesome. I am excited to find out what will happen. Please update soon.

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Priya Ramkissoon

@priyaR4448

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Posted: 11 years ago

#302

What a creative and full of desire scene Naina .

Genius u r .

Eagerly waiting for nxt update.

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Saumya

@tinkylove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

Naina it was a fabulous update again as usual!!!! I am flat!!!! Yaar bahut hi acha tha!!!! Awww our shlok cant control his sense !!! LOL!!!! He is just too good!!!!! And our astha cant stop staring at him!!!! Ha ha!!!!! They both r just amazing and on the whole it ws MIND BLOWING FANTASTIC COOL!!! AUSOME!!! INCREDIBLE AND ROMANTIC!!! Ahan Naina when we r getting some nirma moments???? Lol!!

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logambika

@.logs

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#304

love the update yaar... poor shlok... will have one sleepless night...

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#305

chapter 7

Awww Kavya is soo smart😎 loving Ashloks banter..the film one was superbb😉Shlok caught her neck🤣 cute and hilarious! Always love rain sequences

Chap 8

the ahchooo was so cutee😳 And the hiding-behind the door-half naked part was hilarious🤣 Idk totally hard to imagine avi as shlok doing that☺️

You described their attraction so well!!😳 I was like..is this your first fiction?🤓

Shlok is soo right..god save him🤪 He is too weak for his own decisions!😉

Cont soon! sorry for late reply😃

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avi_ashi

@avi_ashi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#306

it was such an amazing update dear... Shlok and astha both controlling each odr.. Hayeee I loved d way u wrote the whole scene.. Their awkrdness was clearly visible.

bt I was thinking one thing will payal come to the apartmnt that nyt.. I hope she does not come.. Let the love birds spend some quality tym..

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really excited for d nxt update...

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