Ashlok FF - You've Won My Heart! (Chapter 10 updated on page 138)

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Suri

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Posted: 11 years ago

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finally! we'll have her FF's tenth birthday...geez

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 6:

Wowww, you are a very descriptive writer Samia, I sit here imagining each and every little detail! And the complex language, is just wowAs always I'm loving this bold development in Astha, she's not the meek and timid like which is what I love And wow loved Astha's taunts, GO ASTHA! HAHAH🤣 Shlok speechless for once, loved it Your updates leave me wanting more *runs to read next chapter*

Chapter 7:

SAMIAAA! You pulled it off so well! I guess your hard work and efforts for this chapter paid off, it was absolutely amazing👏👏 where do I start, firstly wow yet again got to see the boldness in Astha. Felt a little sorry for Shlok to think that he actually bought her a ring, but whatevs he deserved everything coming towards him. And Astha's emotional retort was like the cherry on the top.

Hats off to you! Your like one amazing writer. The updates are getting better and better! And I hope we got to see a little bit of the K Shlok Wanna see him more in the upcoming updates😆 Aww Astha got herself a ring, poor Shlok's ring gone down the drain😆😆 Overall it was one amazing update full of emotions and fury! Just loving your style of writing. Keep up the great effort😊

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...Ayesha...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 9:

Omg, I'm just loving the understanding between Astha and Shlok, they're forming a stronger bond😃 Also loving the pace of your story, and the descriptive vocabulary, it's just amazing. No doubt an amazing writer like you will maintain it very well! I'm soo jealous of you all amazing writers on this forum, mashallah your very talented😃 Well done

Okay coming to the update. They sound just like a normal married couple can't even tell they don't quite get along! Poor Shlok is perturbed by her unusual behaviour he hasn't realised that she is totally in love with him And the love moments, damn Shlok came out with no top on, Astha on the inside probably was likeShlok should've advantage of the moment to annoy a blushing Astha😆

And the needle poking part was hillarious, I was sat here imagining it all! Poor Shlok😉 Astha gets too nervous to even sew a button.

When Swati rang I was like Shlok even took advantage of that moment! Poor Astha, if only he understood that it wasn't jealousy, she was hurt! But that day will come when he gets hold of her diary and understands her😃

OMG the precap, can't believe it. Your updating tomorrow right, I'm too excited, you best update tomorrow and not delay it anymore!😃

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@xayeshax

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Zehra.
Spamming ?? without me ?? 😭

we didnt doo much! Let her comee and we'll force her to update in a new thread🤗

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Zehra Fatima Chohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

we didnt doo much! Let her comee and we'll force her to update in a new thread🤗

and i am leaving 😔
yayyy hope to see the update in a new thread 😉
all the bessttt 😉

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Samia

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Posted: 11 years ago

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You guys up to spamming again?

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...Ayesha...

@xayeshax

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sam_15
You guys up to spamming again?

Haha! You best respond to all my comments I tried to make them long but I failed against your lengthiness😆

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Samia

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

Haha! You best respond to all my comments I tried to make them long but I failed against your lengthiness😆

Yes I saw ur comments. I will respond to them after my update tomorrow. Right now I am focusing on finishing it off on time Btw love u for leaving me long comments 🤗 they are lengthy enough for me 😛😃

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@xayeshax

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sam_15

Yes I saw ur comments. I will respond to them after my update tomorrow. Right now I am focusing on finishing it off on time Btw love u for leaving me long comments 🤗 they are lengthy enough for me 😛😃

Hehe yayy, atleast you liked them😃