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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update
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FROM JASMINERAHUL


Be Intehaan:The Tale of Limitless love Part 3

Prom night party...

Aastha entered wearing a blue gown.Swati was also dressed in blue.

A:Wait Swati...Shlok cannot resist becoming my partner tonight.

Swati ridiculed Aastha:Oh really?Let me see.

Swati went to her partner Sid.

Aastha thought:Where is Shlok?Will he be my partner?Everyone has a partner.My hope is in Shlok.Oh!

Shlok came.He saw Aastha.She looked damn gorgeous.He couldn't take his eyes off her.Aastha realized it and blushed.

She said in her mind:I am winning.

She walked to him.

A:Hi Shlok.What is your decision?You will be my partner now?

Shlok was silent for a few moments.

A:Shlok,there is no time.Please tell soon.

Slowly he looked at her.Aastha was waiting eagerly for his reply.

Slowly he said:Yes.

Aastha was excited:Yes.I knew it.

S:But I can't dance.

A:No problem.I will make you dance.

S:What?

Song was played.

She held his hand all of a sudden.

S:What are you doing Aastha?

A:Don't get panic Shlok.I am just trying to dance with you.

Suno Na

Kahe Kya Suno Na

Dil Mera Suno Na

Suno Zara

She held his hand and swayed to music.

As the music flowed Shlok was engrossed in dance.He was lost in her.

Teri Bahon Mein

Mujhe Rehna Hai Raat Bhar

Teri Bahon Mein Hogi Subah

Swati was shocked to see Shlok-Aastha's passionate dance.

Be Intehaan

Be Intehaan

Yun Pyaar Kar

Yun Pyaar Kar

Be Intehaan

She moved away from Sid.

Swa:I don't believe this.How could Shlok dance with Aastha?Aastha's challenge of changing Shlok is succeeding?

Jab Saanson Mein Teri Saanseein Ghuli To

Phir Sulagne Lage

Eshaas Mere Mujhse Kehne Lage

Haan

Bahn Mein Teri Aake Jahan Do Yun Simatne Lage

Sailaab Jaise Koi Behene Lage

Khoya Hun Mein Aagosh Mein

Tu Bhi Kahan Abb Hosh Mein

Makh Mali Raat Ki

Ho Na Subah

Be Intehaan, Be Intehaan

Yun Pyaar Kar

Be Intehaan

Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm

Gusthakiya Kuch Tum Karo

Kuch Hum Kare Is Tarah

Hmm Sharma Ke Do Saaye Hai Jo

Muh Pher Le Humse Yahan

Haaan Choo To Liye Hai Yeh Jism Tune

Rooh Bhi Tu Chum Le

Eshaas Bheege Bheege Kyun Hai Mere

Haan Yun Chur Hoke

Majbor Hoke Katra Katra Kahe

Eshaas Bheege Bheege Kyun Hai Mere

Do Bekhabar Bheege Badan

Ho Besabar Bheege Badan

Lete Rahe Raat Bhar Angdaiya

Be Intehaan, Be Intehaan

Yun Pyaar Kar, Yun Pyaar Kar

Be Intehaan

Dekha Karun

Saari Umar Tere Nishan


Teri Nishaan

Be Intehaan

Koi Kasar Na Rahe

Meri Khabar Na Rahe

Choo Le Mujhe Is Kadar

Be Intehaan (Race2).

Aastha looked at Shlok's intense eyes:Thank you for being my partner Shlok.

He did not know what to say.

Aastha winked at Swati in victory.Swati was embarrassed.

The next day in college.

Aastha saw Shlok not concentrating on lectures and drawing circles.

She thought:What happened to this Shlok?

The bell rang and all the students left.

A:Shlok,what is this?

Shlok came back to his senses.

S:Aastha...class got over?

A:You didn't even know that the class got over because of day dreaming.What happened to you?Where is your mind?

Shlok burst into tears.

Aastha couldn't believe that the rough and tough Shlok shed tears..

A:Shlok,what happened?

S:Today is my mother's 3rd death anniversary.

Aastha was shocked.

Aas:Your mother?

S:I was so attached towards my mom.In an unexpected accident I lost my mom.I lost her love.

Aastha felt sad seeing him in pain.

S:Though baba gives me a lot of love I can't recover...

He wept.

Aastha cupped his face in her hands:Shlok...

S:Aastha...

He embraced her crying.

She was frozen.Then she embraced him back.

A:Shlok!

Shlok came back to senses and moved away from her.He wiped his tears.

A:Shlok,I know..mother's love can't be replaced by anything else.But you should meet my mom.You will get relief.My mom is very sweet.

Shlok simply kept staring at her.

Aastha took Shlok to her house where she introduced her parents Avdhoot and Kalindi to Shlok.

A:These are my sweetest papa and Mumma.

K:Shlok beta...

Shlok became emotional hearing her call Shlok beta.

K:What happened beta?

S:My mom used to call me Shlok beta.She is no more.

Shlok's tears rolled down his cheeks.

They all became sad.

Kalindi hugged him:Don't think you don't have mother.When you miss your mother you come here.

Shlok looked at her emotionally.

Kalindi made food and fed Shlok with her hands.He was very emotional.

Aastha and Avdhoot became happy seeing it.

After some time Shlok and Aastha stepped out of the house.

S:Thank you so much Aastha for giving me such beautiful moments.Today I felt happiness after 3 years.

It's because of you.I have no words to thank you.I owe to you.

Aastha became emotional:Shlok..Please break the shell and come out Shlok...I want you to forget your grief and be happy with your present.I am trying my best for that.

Shlok was silent.

A:Shlok,will you be my friend?

She extended her hand towards him.

Slowly he held her hand.

She smiled emotionally.A small smile appeared on his face.

Aastha was very happy.

A:First time you smiled.I am so happy Shlok.

He thought:You made me smile Aastha.You brought back the happiness of my life.

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
lovely update👏 ashloks dance aww astha and shlok understanding each other😳😃 continue soon😛
Edited by xayeshax - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😆😆😆😆ab pardho ...that was incomplete before😛😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerab...

😆ab pardho ...that was incomplete before😆

i thought so, it seemed quite short😕😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really nice update it's nice to see Ashlok dancing, poor Shlok he is rude etc because of his mum. I'm glad Astha took him to meet her parents it made him happy. Astha winning the her with Swati was great and Ashlok becoming friends is good, thanks for the update can't wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
They r friends nw haww😳 cntinue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Nice update... glad that astha and shlok became friends
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Beautiful update👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...
Lovely ashlok dance😳😳😳😳...song was just awesome⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...
So astha is winning her challenge slowly...gr8👍🏼
And shlok's mother is dead...sad😭😭😭...but nice to see that how astha bring back smile on his face😛😛😛😛...
Amazing story😉...just loving it more and more❤️...
update soon😎...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok so finally shlok nd astha are frnds
swati did nt like dat astha was dancing with shlok
lets see wat happens nxt
do update soon

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