OS Jaan ka Dushman *UPDATED PART 9 PG19*

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AlbusDumbeldore

@AlbusDumbeldore

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Woan awesome pleasure continue want to know what will happen with aastha now.

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Jannat ahmad

@jannat_1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

A very good start , it reminds me of temple scene in chennai express
Plz continue

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latha_555

@latha_555

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

awesome story...shlock is extremely concerned for aastha, and i would love to see something like the hotel part in the show...please update soon...

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JJ15

@JJ15

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Mizzdesi, that was really good and interesting. You write so well! Please do continue! 😊

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Loved the temple scene. plz update soon

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swathin

@swathin

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

great update
would like to read more
continue soon

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Felt so nice readng hw shlok givs iritatd looks to aditi in ur os😃continue soon😳

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Pveenat

@Pveenat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Really very nice OS, continue soon.

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banoo2012

@banoo2012

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

superb start cant wait for nxt part

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

nice start

waiting to knw wats aditi next plan

do update soon

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