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Ashlok OS- Teri kaun hoon main

Part 2

Hope u will like this part...shlok is tooo complicated as far his feelings are concerned...so i was just confused that what to write or not...please let me know what u feel about this update...

Varad asked chachu if shlok has returned from his business trip or not...

Chachu said ...yeah he just came an hour ago...

Varad rushed to his room...

Shlok was sitting on the sofa...with wine bottle in his hands...he was thinking about astha and their divorce...

His life was not the same anymore...her absence leaves a big gap in his life ...first it was swati but now astha's memories unnerved him ...every single day he missed astha...he was more pessimistic and empty now than before ...thats why he was keeping himself busy in work to fend off her memories...but this one thing was not in his control...

He regretted at times that why he married astha...why he brought her in his life...a sweet jovial girl...who deep inside affected him a lot...

He just wanted to saw her at that time...he came to his side table and picked up his mobile which he left in his room before leaving for business trip because it always reminded him of astha...but today he once again touched it because he himself wanted to feel her...he opened her pic...which he clicked on pati pujan day and the other one when she gifted him the mobile...

He was lost in her when varad suddenly entered the room...he just placed the mobile back in place...and greeted varad and asked'' kaisey hain aap dada''???...

But varad was very disturbed...he pushed him away and shouted...how many times i called you in last two months ...how many messages i left for u...but dammit you don't bother to see even a single one...tujhe kuch pata bhi ke yahan kya ho raha hai...

He asked...''kyun aisa kya hogaya yahan dada''???...sab waisa hi tu hai...jaisa main chor kar gaya tha...

Varad:shlok main iss ghar ki baat nahi kar raha...main teri zindagi ke barey main baat kar raha hoon ...main astha ke baarey main baat kar raha hoon dammit...

Shlok:mujhe astha ke baarey main kuch baat nahi karni dada...but inside he was dying to know what happened to her...

Varad:shlok tu samajhta kyun nahi hai...yeh bachpana dikhaney ka waqt nahi hai..meri baat ghor se sun..aaj astha ki shaadi ho rahi hai...

Shlok got extremely shocked and heartbroken...''kya????astha ki shadi...dada wo kisi aur se shaadi kaisey kar sakti hai''...

Varad:shayed tu bhool gaya hai shlok ke tu ussey divorce de chuka hai ...ab wo teri patni nahi hai...

Shlok:lekin divorce tu uss ne hi manga tha na...

Varad:uss ne divorce manga aur tu ne aik baar bhi inkaar nahi kiya ...na hi ussey rokha...tu woh kya ab sari zingadi terey liye intezaar karti ...jab ke woh janti hai keh tu kabhi apney dil ki baat ussey nahi bataye ga...he shouted again...agar aaj uss ki shaadi ho rahi hai tu iss ki wajah sirf tu hai... sab teri hi ghalti hai...tuney in do months me aik baar bhi uss ke barey main pochna ya janna zaroori nahi samjha shlok...tujhe pata bhi hai astha pregnant hai...

This came as a big surprise for shlok...

Shlok:kyaaa????yeh sab kab hua dada????...astha...astha pregnant hai aur kisi ne mujhe bataya bhi nahi...kyun???...

Varad:tu kisi se baat karta tu tujhe maloom hota na shlok lekin tuuu ...khair main yahan tujh se behass karney nahi aaya...bulkey tujhe yeh bataney aaya hoon ke astha yeh shaadi apni khushi se nahi kar rahi...sirf apney aayi baba ki izzat ki khatir kar rahi hai...

After coming to know about her pregnancy...once again thought of that night pained him and pricked all his senses really hard...a strange feeling occupied his whole existence...like he comitted greatest mistake...greatest sin by giving her divorce...

Shlok:dada kitna time hogaya iss baat ko???...he said with guilt on his face...

Varad:One month ...lekin abhi bhi dher nahi hui shlok ...tu ja kar rokh le iss shadi ko aur ussey wapis le aa...astha tujh se bohat pyaar karti hai shlok...tu janta haina yeh ...tu boley ga tu wo zaroor wapis aa jayegi...

Shlok:Dada ...aap jantey hain ke main pyaar main nahi manta...

Varad:shlok tu kisey bewakoof bana raha hai...mujhe ya khud ko???...kyun pyaar se bhaag raha hai shlok...tu ne bhi tu swati se pyaar kiya tha na...itna pyaar ke uss ke dhokey ke bawajood tu ussey bhula nahi paya...aur aaj tujhe yeh ehsaas bhi nahi ho raha ke tu apni zindagi main kya kho raha ...atleast apney bachey ke barey main tu soch...

Shlok:uss ne yeh baat mujhe khud kyun nahi boli..he was heartbroken that why astha didn't inform him about her pregnancy..but yeah not her fault...lardhkion ki fitrat hoti hi aisi hai ...baatein chupana...

Varad:Ab tu apni soch badal de shlok...apni past ki aik bhurey experience ke liye tera astha ko saza dena theek nahi...agar tujhe uss me koi interest nahi tha tu kyun uss masoom lardhki ki zindagi barbaad ki tu ne bol...kehta hai pyaar nahi karta astha se...aur wo jo nani si jaan uss ki khook mein pal rahi hai...kya ussey iss duniya me laney ki wajah tu nahi hai shlok...jawab de ...ya woh sab bhi teri nafrat aur revenge ka part tha...sach tu yeh hai ke swati ne nahi astha ne tujh se sacha pyaar kiya hai shlok...par afsoos ke tu ne apney dil tak aaney waley har raastey ko bandh kar rakha hai...wohi astha jis se tu beghair wajah ke nafrat karta hai...ye jantey huye ke tu ussey kabhi pyaar nahi dega...swati ki yaadoon se kabhi agey nahi bardh paaye ga...phir bhi uss ne tujh jaisey insaan se pyaar kiya...tujhe terey past ke saath accept kiya...aur aik tu hai...sach me main ne tujh jaisa badnaseeb insaan nahi dekha...jo apna sab kuch khud barbaad kar raha hai...

Shlok was more surprised to know that... astha also knew about swati...slowly all his tangled thoughts got cleared that why after valentine's day... astha never fought with him inspite the fact that he instigated her a lot to fight...he remembered how he ignored his mistakes...his anger and cared for him endlessly...his heart was slowly melting for her ...

It was first time he was not understanding what he exactly wants...he was feeling like today he will lose a important part of him...he was feeling jealous that someone else will own her astha's life ...this was not acceptable for him...

Varad:ab kya soch raha tu shlok... jaldi ja kar rhok de uss shadi ko...arey astha umeed ki woh kiran jo jiss jagah bhi jaye gi...uss jagah ko roshni se bar de gi...agar koi akela rahey ga tu woh sirf tu hoga...aaj jis se uss ki shaadi ho rahi ...main ne itna acha insaan nahi dekha...jo astha ke saath saath terey bachey ko bhi apna raha hai ...strange but really sad ke terey hotey huye tera bacha kisi aur ke naam ke saath bada hoga...zara soch tu sahi...tu kavya se kitna pyaar karta haina ...aur woh tu tera apna khoon hai shlok ..tu uss ke saath aisa kaisey kar sakta hai ...agar aaj tu ne astha ke liye apni feelings ko nahi samjha na...tu tujh main aur swati main koi farq nahi hai...uss ne tujhe dhoka diya...ussi tarah tu astha aur apney app ko dhoka de raha hai...ussey khud se door kar ke ...jab ke main janta hoon ke tu bhi uss se pyaar karta hai...

Varad was right he was really desiring for her..craving for her since she left him...all those walls of hatred which took years time to build just melted in few seconds...his heart was shouting inside that she only belongs to him... she is only his wife...mrs. astha shlok agnihotri...no divorce matters for him...

Shlok hugged varad and said in a very depressing tone...dada i cann't tolerate her with any other man...i will not allow anyone to take her away from me...this time i will not let that happen to me again...dada main kya karoon...ke woh meri zindagi main wapis aa jaye???...main ab aur tanha nahi rehna chahta main swati ki yaadoon se agey bardhna chahta hoon...meri zindagi ko astha ki aadat si hogayi hai...jab tak uss par khussa nahi karta dada...mera din nahi guzarta..a painful smile appeared on his face...dada uss ke bina main ne yeh 2 months aik azab ki tarah katey hain..ab main aur uss ke bina nahi reh sakta...

Varad :bol de shlok jo kuch bhi terey dil main hai...aaj bol de merey bhai...

Shlok:dada...main astha aur apney bachey dono ko apni zindagi main lana chata hoon...main astha ko apni har feeling batana chahta hoon... he poured out all his feelings infront of his brother...😭

Varad:ja shlok astha zaroor tera intezaar kar rahi hogi...mai janta hoon woh ab bhi tujhe chahti hai...woh zaroor tujhe maaf kar de gi...ye le mandir ka pata aur jaldi ja...iss se pehley ke bohat dher hojaye...ja bata de ussey ke woh teri kaun hai...

Sorry for mistakes...

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: niki795
hi meerab

hi di ...😛

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: niki795
how are you

fine...and aap kaisey ho???neha kaisi hai???😛

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theezy-lovely

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

absolutely awesome...

loved it...

thnx 4 the pm dear...

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: theezy-lovely
absolutely awesome...
loved it...
thnx 4 the pm dear...

thank you sooo much sweety...😛

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA
nice update

thanks dear...😛

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: mayabharathi
love your update

thanks dear...😛

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537048

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

dat was such an awesome update
loved it
the way varad scold shlok was really necessary
nd finally he realises dat he needs her in his life
do update soon

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