new ff-pyaar jo kabhi na mitthe.[updated;name changed]

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latha_555

@latha_555

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

nice update, i like that he saw her bleeding and decided to help her up...also like that he didnt like the word killing or dying:)

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vial

@vial

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

so,here it goes.

2nd chapter-what is this??

shlok heaved a sigh as he saw her openeing her eyes a bit.he didn't really expect that,to tell the truth.he had even given her mouth to mouth resurrection[very sure that she would never find out].

as aastha opened her eyes she met with the narrowing chocolaty brown gaze.for a moment she was totally lost in there.but at the next aastha kirloskar was up.

"what r u- a demon?how could u do that to me?you wretch"

"aastha, i know, i'm srry..."

"oh really u were srry ,u..."

she couldn't complete her words as her lips were sucked by shlok's.she was startled,amazed beyond words.is this,is this really happening???

now that was totally absurd,i know.so i'll just leave it up to u and wud be back after a few hours.bye.

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Read both parts really very nice...
Loved it...
Continue soon

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

really nice dear but i have request to u

hop u dont mind

please decrease your font size little bit because it is so large to read on screen

and also give little big update because it is so cute to read😊

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vial

@vial

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: roshanii
really nice dear but i have request to u
hop u dont mind
please decrease your font size little bit because it is so large to read on screen
and also give little big update because it is so cute to read😊

thanks,i wud keep that in mind.👏

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vial

@vial

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

ok so here the remaining of 2nd chapter.

shlok himself didn't know what was happening.he just knew that he got a piece of himself back when aastha opened her eyes.and so for him his reactions weren't a bit unnatural.

but not so with aastha.after they had stopped all those "kissy-mushy "thing she found it a little difficult to start talking withh shlok.and so they walked as if they were total strangers.

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as the truck stopped by,shlok got off speedily.he heaved a big sigh of relief.he hadn't expected that truck to come by their way.he had rushed to get a lift.aastha found it a difficult to keep up with him.all the way,tehy had been staring at each other secretly.ah!shlok chuckled at the thought.he turned back to see aastha rooted at the back of the truck,looking confused.he smiled and went up to her and carried her to the ground.[all these with continuos staring at each other.thank god they didn't tripped and falled.]

aastha was eating her rasgula and was feeding shlok at the same timetoo.he had burned his fingers at the first touch.silly,she thought.but the truth was that both of them were actually enjoying all this.i mean who would have thought all this would happen??

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"what is this shlok??",aastha screamed at the top of her voice,holding out the newspaper infront of shlok,tears welling up in her eyes.

phew!!that was a lot,i'm srry i couldn't fill in the romantic details but i promise u that more of this is to come just wait a nd watch!!haah😆