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This is my first attempt and i am really nervous for comments and likes..
So here you go..!

Aastha hummed away as she checked on the design's around the hall . She held a list in her hand's and gave a quick look to it .

Lightning - Check

Flower's - Check

Food - Check

Dance Floor - Check

Stage - Check

She chirped happily as finally all her work of 3 weeks paid off and the hall looked quite perfect . Since she had designed the big jubilee for Shlok , she had received one more contract of a celebration of some big business tycoon , she was more then happy to accept it .</font>

Gauri jumped in, munching on her chocolate , she looked around the beautiful decorated hall.

'Wow Aastha , hall is quite beautiful and gloomy' She happily praised.

Aastha smied widely 'You know I am so happy to fulfill this contract , as much as I hated to do the Shlok's one , his Hitler mother use to interfere in every design I made , and that Khadoos use to spoil it more , what a confusing family . One side a hitler mother and Khadoos Son'.

Gauri laughed away 'Ive heard , Shlok is joining in the party too'

The list slipped off Aastha's hand , she had been trying her best to avoid any quarrel between her and Shlok , and kept it on professional bases in office , she never dared to visit his house because of the Hitler , but now how will she face him?

'Oh God ! Gauri you...how can you be sure?'

'Check the list of invitation's' She replied.</font>

Aastha immediately checked the list and her face surrounded with tension .

'Nooo' she shouted .

Gauri laughed 'You are scared of him',

Aastha immediately turned her face towards her 'Me..and scared from him? Joke of the year' she hesitated.

'You are...!'

'I am not !'

'Yes'

'No'

'Ok so , how can you prove it?'

Aastha went deep into her thought's when she heard the manager calling her , he informed Aastha that the birthday boy wants Shlok to join the event and she had to deliver the invitation specially on his house , plus the birthday boy has demanded all the joiner's should have a date with them as a special dance is organized to set up the mood of the party.

Aastha gulped , Shlok is joining and she had to provide the pass , right now she asked one of the helper's too add the date bit in the invitation card .

'My god ! Aastha look at your face , Shlok's name seems to sweat you off' Gauri laughed.

'No, and I will prove it to you that I am not scared from him' A sudden confidence took over her.

'How?' Gauri mocked.

'Even I would need a date in the party right , so I promise you that in 2 day's, I'll make sure Shlok join's me on this party as my date'


Ok temme how's it , bakwas , bekaar ?

I will complete after some response,...!<


<font color="#990000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">P.S - Meghu , i didn't want to disturb you so , i posted khud hi,!</font>




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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am taking a break from making any posts now..lets see how much I stick to it 😆 nice work babes..u r better writer than me...ashlok as dates and here I tht birthday boy would ask astha as a date and shlok also being there...so much cornering and fireworjs and possesivenes..lol..nevertheless this is also int...lets see the story follows..but jealosyvtadka would have been so cool...lol..I am waiting for further update 😆 😛
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thanx...but my gutter thread has done wonders...all posts turn into gutter no time...I just love this forum and openness...wow...missed chattingbtonu though... 😃 ebp rocks
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

I am taking a break from making any posts now..lets see how much I stick to it 😆 nice work babes..u r better writer than me...ashlok as dates and here I tht birthday boy would ask astha as a date and shlok also being there...so much cornering and fireworjs and possesivenes..lol..nevertheless this is also int...lets see the story follows..but jealosyvtadka would have been so cool...lol..I am waiting for further update 😆 😛

I had planned something like that , behn agey ke parts to ane de..i am so nervous...!
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

thanx...but my gutter thread has done wonders...all posts turn into gutter no time...I just love this forum and openness...wow...missed chattingbtonu though... 😃 ebp rocks

gOT SPecial gutter thread?😉
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Originally posted by: -Babelicious-

I had planned something like that , behn agey ke parts to ane de..i am so nervous...!

y nervous...if u enjoy ur work everyone else will enjoy too..lits good..
I am liking it..waiting for new updates
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Nice start!!! Astha is bold and beautiful!!!!


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Ayesha its awesome do cont...
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Awesomeee staaart Yaaar
Caaant wait fooor next paaart :)

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