Trials Of Fire!! IPKKND3 Untold Saga of Advay Chandni Chp16 to 18

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zajedno

@zajedno

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: LovingAHAA2018

Some thing new meaning? A new post or new story altogether or next chapter of this FF?😃

Family is our best critic... just today my son said, Mumma I have seen your writing since my childhood. Why do you want to write a serial based FF? Instead write independent story. I'll get it published for you." I laughed.

I am wondering what your comment means by that "new".😊. Do share honestly... maybe God is giving me some hints😊

Hahhaah, it means I asked the right question. As for me, it can both. Something new, or the continuation of this. You have a very big talent and I'm sorry if you do not share it with us. He writes very nicely, and what is most interesting, keeps the attention of the reader.

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Anjali

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Dii sarra hi chapter bhut Aacha tha dii

Janam kundali vala part Aacha tha dii

Hayee dev na chandni ko kaisa convince kiya London ka liya ☺️

Aur last part bhi bhut Aacha laga dii 👍🏼

Overall sarra ka saara chapter👏 🤗

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

I just loved how sweetly she is calling out to him even in her sleep

She is so accustomed to him now that it is so normal for her

I just can understand her slow actions here

Slowly opening eyes slightly then wide then total awake and then panic

Poor girl must have been so scared to not see him in bed

I also wake up from a deep sleep just like her

But then my bed is almost full of books and notes though

I jolt awake when I see the clock and realize that I am late

What a description of their night together

Their passions is always so amazing and awesome

Their love making always makes me mesmerized

How sweet and caring of Dev to make her lie on the bed

and cover her with the quilt when he is absent from there

He is so thoughtful in all his actions always

I can understand her fear when she did not find him with her

So many things had happened in the past between them

So he knew she could wake up at night and search for him

So he had already put that note for her to find

Wow so he kept another note to as he knows her too well

He knows she would not go to sleep seeing the 1st note

She goes to find him first in the study and then the terrace

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Neha

@Loving2Missing2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Anjali8080
Dii sarra hi chapter bhut Aacha tha dii
Janam kundali vala part Aacha tha dii
Hayee dev na chandni ko kaisa convince kiya London ka liya ☺️
Aur last part bhi bhut Aacha laga dii 👍🏼
Overall sarra ka saara chapter👏 🤗

Thank you, Anjali

Mujhe bahot achchha lagata hai jab koi kahata hai ki koi part achchha laga... Nahi to meri mehanat ka koi faayada hi nahi na...

Aise hi humesha bataya karo ki kounsa part har chapter mein achchha laga.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: LovingAHAA2018

Hey Priyu! The whole story is for you because you stop me from letting go 😆

Vaise Munda white mein khatarnaak hai na! Kuchh kuchh hota hai, sab nahi samjhenge😉

And how's my description for Munda in white?😳

Oh thank you Di😆

Haan Munda is too risky in white

Your description of him in white is classic

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Anjali

@Anjali8080

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: LovingAHAA2018

Thank you, Anjali

Mujhe bahot achchha lagata hai jab koi kahata hai ki koi part achchha laga... Nahi to meri mehanat ka koi faayada hi nahi na...

Aise hi humesha bataya karo ki kounsa part har chapter mein achchha laga.

Jii dii

Main comments karugi dii 😛

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

I know he has changed a lot from his childhood in his looks

She must be proud now that he is her hubby and only hers

She knew he went to the terrace as she must have remembered what Adi had told long back

That he makes his business calls on the terrace mainly

She was just mesmerized by his voice and his face now

He instinctively felt her presence and turned to her

I am sure he was happy to see her there then

I loved the description you gave her of her and the back ground

It is as if she blended with the back ground and still stood out

He is remembering their moments together now

Her whole presence intoxicates him and

I think she is curious to know more about him

She feels she still does not know many things about him yet

True belonging is when you totally give up the control of your life

To some one whom you love and cherish with all your heart and soul

Oh so she misunderstands him that he does not want to include her in his business part

She is forming conclusions in too much of a hurry here

The previous incidents he thought were different as they had other reasons

Both the times it was not that he wanted to exclude her from the topic

I am sure he will share each and everything with her in time

But for now she needs to have some patience and understanding

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

I think every one needs their own space at times irrespective of it being a guy or a girl

At times when two people are talking one should not intervene before they finish

She is right she should not think about these right now

When the right time comes she will know everything herself

Good that for now she is focusing on the task at hand and leaving the rest for another time

I knew this is a surprise from him and he did not want her to hear it

She was just fearing needlessly uselessly later she will know it well

He wanted to see her happy surprised smile so he kept it a secret for now

I loved how they are having tea now in the morning breeze with no one else now

This is just their private moment in such a beautiful surrounding and background

Both wrapped in a single shawl how romantic the atmosphere is now

Oh that incident is so cute how he has been saving her always right from the start

I know he felt so happy that she remembers such an old incident

I am sure if the teacher had beaten her Dev would have done something really violent

Of course she would not let any harm come to him at all she would always face it first

Poor Dev he was just setting in the mood but bam she remembers her duties now

I am sure he will get what he wants later as he is the ASR and he never loses

Wow he gave her such a beautiful surprise but she has the total opposite reaction

May be she does not trust him enough still that she thinks of ll his girl friends there

So now she is making up all sorts of excuses to not go to London

I love Dev for asking her the exact reason so directly

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Neha

@Loving2Missing2

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: 2filmy
I know he has changed a lot from his childhood in his looks
The description of barun has come well , isn't it so Priyu! I just thought, if Barun read this about him he would blush and just say thank you... but that cute blushing Barun would look so lovable

She must be proud now that he is her hubby and only hers
She knew he went to the terrace as she must have remembered what Adi had told long back
That he makes his business calls on the terrace mainly
She was just mesmerized by his voice and his face now
He instinctively felt her presence and turned to her
I am sure he was happy to see her there then
I loved the description you gave her of her and the back ground

Sorry to say, but I am too much Biased about every description I put for Barun...😆 That's the ebst I feel... I love the way he speaks his English dialogues... in IPK1 they were so prominent, in IPK3 it was much lesser

But yes! She's very beautiful too. N I have put the description from barun's eyes expressions... he would look with such dreamy look and so much love, any woman standing in front of him will feel beautiful.

It is as if she blended with the back ground and still stood out
He is remembering their moments together now
Her whole presence intoxicates him and
I think she is curious to know more about him
She feels she still does not know many things about him yet
True belonging is when you totally give up the control of your life
To some one whom you love and cherish with all your heart and soul

So beautifully said, Priyu. I agree completely!

Oh so she misunderstands him that he does not want to include her in his business part
She is forming conclusions in too much of a hurry here
The previous incidents he thought were different as they had other reasons
Both the times it was not that he wanted to exclude her from the topic

It's a natural worry/ complaint every married woman has... or maybe it comes from my own experience...yet, generally men don't share their work life with their spouses whereas women do it easily.

I am sure he will share each and everything with her in time
But for now she needs to have some patience and understanding
Yes! and she does tell her own self that.