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Joyness

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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Ash read all the parts ..loved it... waiting for the next update

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

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is there any chance Advay may be felicitated for helping to take down the terrorists and this will be shown on TV and Chandni will see it
this may help her to see his good side too

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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#83

@Priya I have just come online. I am checking the posts, after that I will try to write next chapter. So, keep an eye out for one chapter tonight :)

Thanks to chipper treat, aqqo1, Asrkimoonlight,Joyness, and Frey for your comments :)

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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Frey
Ash, you've created a huge fan in me. I just have to look at the authors name now and if it's anything written by you, I know I'm gonna enjoy it. I've finished reading all your fan fictions...would love to read the old version of Written in Stars but dont know where to find it. This story is turning out to be amazing as well. Good job!

Hi dear,

Thank you for your compliments :). Here is a link for other version of written in stars but its really different post marriage and its bit more intense in term of angst. Written in stars

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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: 2filmy
is there any chance Advay may be felicitated for helping to take down the terrorists and this will be shown on TV and Chandni will see it
this may help her to see his good side too

You need to read it to know😈😆

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#86

ok Ash will wait for the update : )

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mahin

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Posted: 7 years ago

#87

light hearted, much breezier chapter. story is getting interesting day by day. thank you hun for the chapters.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#88

hmm so that person looked at Sandeep for some time
also he had understood that some one else was the master mind not Sandeep
I wonder why Advay didn't speak right at the start
why did he keep quiet and wait to be asked
but I loved his answers
they were so clear concise and calculative
I appreciate his thought process and reasoning
I am happy he didn't fall in trouble for the metal he was carrying

Edited by 2filmy - 7 years ago

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

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loved the second update
seems Advay had blended well in this group
I really dislike this idea of these guys going to the brothel
but anyway to each his own
Advay is disinterested as he is interested only in one girl Chandni
I love how he explained his love to them
and he loved his and Sandeep little joke at the end
and eww a farting competition what a thought
I really love the bonding this group has

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hailly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#90

Awesome update as usual. Loved it.

Continue soon please.

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