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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: 2filmy
I didn't understand one thing though
do they plan to bring Chandni here somehow
else what did they mean by take her in their inner circle

They plan to make sure that Chandhini and her family are not ostracized from the society after this incidence. Slowly they will get involved with more families who are related to military through business deals.

I am planning to write from chandhini's point of view soon. There are so many characters in this story, I just finished sandeep love story in my head🤔, and obviously advay and chandhini have passed certain stages too, now I need to write it all down but my hand is hurting.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#102

hmm that's a good step they are taking
this will really help Chandni and her family
I just hope Advay doesn't have any new competitor
I want Chandni to be only for Advay
if u r tired u can update tomorrow no hurry for today

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#103

would love to read Chandni point of view
Sandeep love story will be interesting
I wish Advay and the others stay friends for life

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Frey

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Posted: 7 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.

Hi dear,

Thank you for your compliments :). Here is a link for other version of written in stars but its really different post marriage and its bit more intense in term of angst. Written in stars

Read it all in one go last night! I really liked it...However, I think I am more partial to Advay then to Shlok. Maybe because you showed Advays side as well in the current story which made me understand their POV's. I also liked how you extended the story more in the original version...bring Prof. Sen back and everything. However, I absolutely hated Varad...he didnt apologize till the end as far as I remember.

Overall, lovely story!

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#105

I also hope this act of Advay doesn't harm his or his friends careers else it will leave a bad taste

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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Frey

Read it all in one go last night! I really liked it...However, I think I am more partial to Advay then to Shlok. Maybe because you showed Advays side as well in the current story which made me understand their POV's. I also liked how you extended the story more in the original version...bring Prof. Sen back and everything. However, I absolutely hated Varad...he didnt apologize till the end as far as I remember.

Overall, lovely story!

Shlok was bit more harsher than Advay. When I wrote that story I believed some words or actions break a relationship forever but now through more life experiences I have learn that some bonds can never be broken. Veer and chandhini relationship is something very sweet. No varad never apologized. He was harsher than veer

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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: 2filmy
I also hope this act of Advay doesn't harm his or his friends careers else it will leave a bad taste

No Priya, he saved them all. You will know bit more as story progress but he will now move toward a path which is very prestigious but lonely.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#108

oh I feel so bad for him
he is always so lonely from the start
I didn't want him to be lonely any more
but I guess this is the price he had to pay to get Chandni
nothing in life comes free there a price for everything

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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: 2filmy
oh I feel so bad for him
he is always so lonely from the start
I didn't want him to be lonely any more
but I guess this is the price he had to pay to get Chandni
nothing in life comes free there a price for everything

Yes, life is harsh. I am bit surprised that everyone is okay with kidnapping. I was scared of even writing it.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#110

I think the fact that she was totally unharmed and just left at her backyard sort of reduced the shock factor
also we all know this is a slightly dark story

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