Jagraata 4 - a place to capture the memories of ipk3 - Page 90

Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017

Hey Saito, what's the link for your FF? Pls do share. I am also writing one taking the story further after 6th October; trying to fit logic and backdrop as much as feasible.

Here is my FF Adni's Burning Love

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-3/4899054/adni-ff-burning-love-chapter-1-updated

Its still at the beginning and I'm stuck after it like forever

And yes, story has so many missing connections that we do face dead ends at times. I mean, how can one give logic to his pulling such huge idol single-handedly while simultaneously fighting the goons if he had donated his kidney just six months earlier?

Exactly Advay donating kidney doesnt fit with the story at all. I think this track was kind of silly and not at all executed properly. If they wanted to show something like that. They could have shown that Advay skipped food completely like how it happened with Chandni. And being the way Advay is, he doesnot care about anything when he is focused on something, like how they have shown in the earlier episodes.

As Chandni had PTSD after her trauma Advay could also had the same problem but with slight differences as in the way the trauma affected him but they brought the kidney donation track

And even though they brought the track it was then only used for the purpose of blackmailing and nothing else

How can a household having the girls being super protected and guarded all the time, not be aware of Meghu being pregnant and having delivered a child?

I think them not knowing about Meghu's baby because maybe they were not in Allahabad but in Benaras and maybe after Meghu's delievery in about 2-4 months Chandni got kidnapped

Not sure about the timeframe of this track.

All such things were added later and the original beautiful storyline delving deep into Dev's past was lost. I am sure Sameer Dharmadhikari and Mitaali naag were not earlier engaged for such short roles.

I agree looking into the story there was more to it then what's meet the eyes just like Advay but it was never delievered. The murderers were never arrested except for Indrani and the other one who got murdered and according to Indrani herself a lot of people were involved in her plan maybe willingly or not but there were a lot.

How I wish, in some language they bring the original story back.

U stole my words. That's exactly my wish, be it in any language I will definitely watch it as this type of story is my favourite.

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Dev alone couldn't have called his Nani
some one may have helped him

Originally posted by: 2filmy

actually nothing was shown clearly
you have to assume all on your own

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I don't think they showed Dev in the water even in the major flash back episode

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I really understand how difficult it's for you to write the story Saito
u write from your imagination and logical conclusion
whatever you feel