This is my first FF on Adni
This FF is based on the dark intense love story which was never delievered or completely ruined by the makers
Hope u all will like it
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Chapter 1
The sun was warm. On a bright day, people were seen everywhere in the city of Allahabad with some who seemed dressed as what seems to be for an occasion. There stood a group of men having a conversion between them.
Man A- today is a very big day
Man B- yeah a big day
Man C - what big day
Man A - don't you know
Man C - no
MAN B- looks like you have not been here long in this city
Man A- I will tell you, there is a big puja in the shiv Mandir
Men C- oh ok what special about this puja
Man B - the special thing about this puja is that it is held once every 16 years
Man C- why 16 years, is there a reason
Man A and B look at each other and then Man A says "well we don't know the reason but since it is a big puja so everyone is looking forward to it"
Man C -okay
Man B - why are we talking about this puja and stuff let's talk about something else
A little far yet next to them stood a person hearing their conversation. He then leaves the place and goes to a deserted area and takes out his cell phone and dials a number
In a house somewhere a room is shown where Advay is standing in a dark room in front of a picture. His phone rings
Advay - hello
Caller - hello sir
Advay oh, tell me
Caller says something muted
Advay - okay keep an eye on everything there
Caller - yes sir
Advay - I'm coming over there
Advay ends the call and comes closer to a side wall and drops a curtain on a picture and says "I'm coming to burn u with me
A mansion is seen and a balcony of the second floor is shown, Chandni is seen standing next to a pillar, watching a beautiful chandelier, shining its lights on the living area. She says "I make sure the chandelier stands 12 feet above the ground every time, just like you told me Dev. Where are you Dev, I miss you
She then goes to the other side of the balcony that has a view of a beautiful garden. Shilpa comes to her and says "Jiji the Maha Aarti will start soon. Hearing this, Chandni gets tensed.
Cut to the temple, where the priest and some people have started preparing for the Maha Aarti. The priests are checking the elements required for the Aarti and the people were busy decorating the temple with flowers and were coloring the route for the Maha Aarti.
Indrani is seen entering the temple and the people decorating the temple welcome her with (high) respect. Indrani goes to the priest. The priest welcomes her and Indrani asks about the preparation for the Maha Aarti. The priest says "Everything is ready, there is the special flowers that is left which will arrive soon
Back at the mansion, Chandni goes to a room and sees her father trying to select a shawl for his suit (sorry don't know the name of it in hindi). She goes to him and selects the green shawl for him. He looks at her and she forwards him the shawl and he takes it. She then gives him some paper book for the Puja and also she makes him wear his shoes and all the while he keeps looking at her. Chandni says "You like to sit at ghat and see sunset, you have sugar, and eat laddoos by hiding, I know you wrote two love letters. He says "You know a lot about me, who are you. Chandni says "I'm your daughter Chandni.
Chandni then calls Shilpa. Shilpa then comes and Chandni tells her to tell the driver to take her father to the temple. Shilpa leaves and Chandni takes her father to the living room. Then Shilpa comes and escorts Chandni's father to the car.
Chandni goes back to the balcony and sits on a chair and sees the flower garden admiring its beauty. Mamaji comes and says "you have sent your father. When will you go? Chandni sees him and gets tensed.
A car is seen moving on the route leading to the Mandir. Advay is seen in the car watching the road looking sad and lost. He says "This city has changed a lot since the last time I was here.
Just then the car stops at the Mandir's entrance. Advay gets down the car and tells the driver "You know where to stop, right? The driver says "Yes sir. Advay says "Good. The car leaves and Advay makes his way to the Mandir. Advay says "This city destroyed my life, took my parents away, my name, everything. Advay enters the Mandir and looks around and he seems like he is reliving his past as his eyes are filled with sadness. He says, "But now, I'm back to make them pay for what happened 16 years back. My life was burned 16 years ago, but now I won't burn alone, but you'll burn with me too, Chandni Yash Narayan Vashisth. Welcome to Hell Chandni.
Far away from Advay, Shakun is seen looking at a temple door which is closed, she says "Big sis, your fate is so strong and I can't wait to get it in my hands. Once I get it, then you won't be able to order us around like idiots. Kajal is seen coming to her saying "What are you saying, Shakun. Shakun says "I was wondering if this door will open this time. Kajal says "What does your stars say? Shakun says "The stars say that when the time is right, the doors will open. Kajal laugh and says "Lip-stick ki kasam, this door won't open like that, Chandni should come here to get the door open Shakun says "How will Chandni come here as she haven't stepped out of the house for a long time. Kajal says "Yes, she was only at home, and she always says she's afraid to get out of home. Shakun says "Of course she'll be afraid as she can't see people questioning her.
Just then Indrani comes and looks at both of them sharply. Indrani says "These 3 days are very important, as this day comes once every 16 years. Shakun says "Will the door open this time? Indrani says "Yes it should open this time as we can't afford to make any mistake. Last time we made a mistake and the door was not opened but this time there won't be any chance for it. Kajal looks at Shakun and Shakun says "Do you think Chandni will come? Indrani says "Yes she will come, she has to come cause if Chandni won't come then our reality will get exposed, so Chandni has to come at any cost.
Back at the mansion. Chandni is tensed and holds a side of her saree tightly. Mamaji comes and sits on a chair next to her. He says "Chandni, when will you go to the Mandir? Chandni looks at him teary eyes and says "Mamaji, you know I can't go, Mamaji says "I know, but you have to go, as it is important. Chandni starts crying and says "I'm afraid, I just can't go. Mamaji says "But my dear, you should go, cause if you don't go then problem will fall on your father. Chandni says "On father. Mamaji says "Yes, for your father's sake you should go.
In the Mandir two people are seen walking tensed, the priest notices them and calls them to him. They come to him; the priest asks them "What's the matter, what happened? One of the two men says something to the priest (Muted). The priest gets shocked.
TBC
Note:
I hope you will like it, as it is same as the series, I only made some slight changes, and of course I have omitted the Murti falling scene.
I would like u guys to suggest me how to make Advay, Veer meet the first time, (AS the Murti falling scene is omitted) or should I make them meet way later in the series.
I would like to know if u would like me to go slowly episode by episode or to jump forward at some point. or you want me to change my story completely.