ADVINI SS - BENAAM RISHTAA Part 4 Uptd Pg 37 (05 Dec) - Page 21

Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani

Enjoy...baby...want ur detailed comments... 😉

haha of course I will give my detailed comments soon

Amazing update finally after so many days i m reading ur story

Beautiful, Awesome, Mindblowing, Sweet your update is,👏❤️😳have been eagerly waiting for ages for your update, keep writing,in love with your Advay/Dev and Chandni just like Barun and Shivani as Advay /Dev -Chandni in the show ❤️ 👍🏼

uff the dinner scene was so sweet
she cooked for him
I think someone cooked for him by own for the first time
I love the slight hand brushing and the stare
he broke the stare first and had to clear his throat to bring her back from her dream Land
this hints that she will fall from him and get involved first and he will be a bit hesitant
she wanted to know how the food was so she was staring at him expectantly
the way he ate was so clear that he loved it
he was so lost in the foot that he didn't notice before
but then I loved the way he complimented her
and she blushed hearing it how sweet

loved it. they trust and respect each other so much. waiting eagerly to see how their relationship progress in future. thank you so much for giving us the much waited chapter.

I am simply amazed at the care and concern they have for each other
he is concerned about her wounds healing so wanted her to sleep comfortably in the bed
she was worried he won't fit in the sofa as it's too small for him
but he didn't want any discussion on this
I loved the way he decided for both of them though his manner was a bit too strong
it was just like they are a married couple and he is taking a decision on their behalf
poor Chandni got a bit apprehensive of his reaction
but she decided to do as he said without any further argument

ohhh finally busy schedule khatm kya nazia...well coming to the story diwali me biryani wow...I thought noodles to ni banaya 😆 😆 chalo kuch Alag khane mila rest of the part was beautiful she cares he cares...same same and The Rajasthani accent 😛 is something else..well done and thanks love yaaa

OMG Nazia!! That has to be the sweetest and purest update I have read so far!! DevNi bring tears in my eyes with their cuteness!! Gosh loved them so much.. This is by far the best ff I have read.❤️

Wow awesome update waiting for next thanks for pm

both of them are so adjusting
he has half his body out of the sofa while sleeping
she falls down from the bed at night and he has to pick her up and place her back in the bed
she decided to ask him to sleep on bed from now
aww I just love this sweet couple so much
she prepares food for him in the morning
so that he can eat and leave well fed
she also packs him a tiffin for him for lunch
so that he doesn't have to eat out
how caring and thoughtful of her
she loves to drool on him when he dresses up to leave
she loves it when he twirls his moustache
uff I am fanning myself in this scene
she understood that he had a back problem sleeping that way at nights
she made him good by and he kissed her on her forehead and she blushed and her heart raced