ADVINI SS - BENAAM RISHTAA Part 4 Uptd Pg 37 (05 Dec)

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BENAAM RISHTAA

Yeh kahaani hai do aise logo ki jo adhure the. Jinhe zaroorat thi toh bas ek saathi ki

(This is the story of two people who were incomplete. Who needed a soulmate to complete each other)

Ek ladka jo hamesha se akela tha...jisse duniya ne taano ke alaawa kuch nahi diya.. Woh gira, utha, ladaa aur khud ki pehchaan banayi...Aasaan raasto par woh kabhi nahi chala kyuki zindagi ne hamesha uske raaho mei kaate bichhaye...Isliye woh bann ek gaya kathor, patthar dil, nirdayi insaan... Jo nafrat karta do aise shabdo se jo shaayad uske iss duniya mei hone ka sabse bada sach hai...

(A boy who had been alone throughout his life...The world gave him nothing except some gut wrenching taunts...He fell, rose, fought and established his own identity...His path was never an easy one as life had always laid thorns in his way...That is why he became ruthless and cold hearted man...Who hates those 2 words which the probably define the bitter truth of his existence)

Ek ladki bholi si...jisse pata nahi ki woh kis baat ki sazaa bhugat rahi hai...aisa kya gunaah kiya tha usne ki uski zindagi maut se kam nahi thi...Kahi naa kahi usne zindagi se samjhauta kar liya tha...Par jab usse aur bardaasht naa hua toh fir woh bas udd gayi...

(An innocent girl...Who has no idea as to for what reason she was serving a punishment...What crime had she committed that her life was no less than death...Somewhere she had learnt to compromise with life...But when she couldn't tolerate anymore she flew away)

Zindagi dono ke liye kathin thi...beimaan thi...naainsaaf thi...

(Life was always full of hardships...dishonest...partial...for both of them)

Fir ek din aaya jab

(And then one day)

Woh dono mile, ek duje ko jaana, hamdard bane, dukh baate, paas aaye, saath rahe, hamsafar bane aur apna ek chhota saa aashiyaana banaaya

(They met, got to know each other, shared their pain amd grief, grew closer, stayed together, became companions and built their own small world)

Fir...

(Then...)

Fir...

(Then...)

Aur firse zindagi ne dhaaye unpe sitam...

(And then life again played a cruel game)

Kuch aisa hua jisse unki zindagi aur unke rishte ke maayne hi badal gaye...

(Something happened that changed the dynamics of their life and meaning of their relationship)

Aaakhir kya hai inka yeh 'BENAAM RISHTAA'

(What is it about their...'NAMELESS RELATION')


Prologue


1 am: Kalighati, NH 28D

The night was eerily silent and darker today since it was an Amavasya. As usual, there were no street lights and the bus carrying 50 odd passengers was passing through the dense woods of Kalighati. There was nothing except the headlights which could help the driver to decipher the way ahead. Also, the road was fairly empty at this time of night.

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1:30 am, ATS Headquarters, Delhi

Officer (panicking) - Tiwari Sir, we have received an emergency call from one our officers stating that a bus has been hijacked near Kalighati forest on NH 28D

Tiwari (in action) - Approximate distance from Delhi

Officer - Roughly 2 hours

Tiwari - Civilians?

Officer - Around 40-50

Tiwari - And hijackers?

Officer - 4

Tiwari (authoritatively) - Send an SOS to Kashyap right away

Officer (following the order) - Sir, shall we inform the nearby local police station about the incident

Tiwari (showing him a hand and saying in a relaxing tone) - No need. He is enough for all of them. Just call up and ask his aide Siddharth Ahuja to reach the place as soon as possible

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2 am: Kalighati, NH 28D

The driver of the bus applied the brakes abruptly as he saw a man standing in the middle of road leaning against his bike.

Driver (looking out of the window and stammering in fear) - Kya chahiye? (What do you want?)

Man (in a raised voice) - Bike ka tyre puncture ho gaya hai. Lift chahiye (My bike' tyre is punctured. I need a lift)

The driver looked behind a man who stood pointing a gun at him and asked for his permission. The goon nodded and the driver removing his hand out of the window signalled the man to come in. When the man moved inside the bus, he gazed back as he heard someone lock the door. When he again turned his face to find a seat for himself, one of the hijackers placed the gun right on his forehead

Goon 1 (loading his gun) - Haath upar (Hands up)

The man did as he was ordered and suddenly shoved his hand off. Bending down, he took out a knife from his socks and stabbed the man right in his heart. Taking his loaded gun, he killed the other goon standing near the driver's cabin. Hearing the screams and gunshots of the 2 men, the other 2 goons who were at the farthest end of the bus came forward and fired shots towards the man who killed their accomplice. The man ducked his head down and dodged the bullets that hit the window panes breaking it into pieces. The pieces shattered and pierced through some of the passengers hurting them. The man kicked one of the goon right below his knee with such a force that he shouted and cried holding his leg in pain. As a result, the goon dropped his gun and the man caught it. Standing up, he gave a hard punch on the goon's nose making it bleed and in no time the hijacker fell on the floor unconscious. He pulled the trigger of the pistol and emptied 4 consecutive bullets right in the last hijacker's forehead. The remaining 2 bullets were discharged on both legs of the attacker who fainted. He showed his identity card to the commuters who heaved a sigh a relief and thanked him

Man (in a loud voice) - Bus ko jald se jald khaali keejiye. Aapko sahi salaamat ghar pohchaana ab hamaari zimmedaari hai (Get out the bus. It is our duty to make you reach your home safely)

The travellers emptied the bus one by one and the man scanned inside the bus for one last time. He was about to exit when his eyes caught sight of a familiar piece of fabric. Taking out his service revolver, he cautiously stepped near the backseat of the bus. When he reached, he saw some movements beneath the leather jacket. Fisting the jacket in his palms, he removed it swiftly and at the same time kept his gun on the person's forehead whose head was down and was shaking like a leaf.

Man (sternly) - Idhar dekh. Palat (Look up)

When the girl looked up, he immediately pulled away his gun as he stared at her stunned

Man (exclaiming in shock) - Tu? (You)

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Note: The Advay in this story will be a total desi man. Hot, rugged, rude, masculine, beardo and dons a moustache. I promise to make you fall in love with this Advay.

The dialogues will be in Hindi so as to give it a real and natural touch. But I will give translation in English as well

Love yaa,
Nazia😊

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OMG I almost fainted reading this
u r better than the best dear
so here he is a cop or some high up person
he does duty like this
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loved the way u gave the intro
loved the way he defeated the hijackers
I am already impressed and head over heels in love with this Advay
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Originally posted by: 2filmy

OMG I almost fainted reading this
u r better than the best dear
so here he is a cop or some high up person
he does duty like this

Thanks priyuuu...yes he is a high rank cop along with another hidden entity... 😉
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Originally posted by: 2filmy

loved the way u gave the intro
loved the way he defeated the hijackers
I am already impressed and head over heels in love with this Advay

Priyuuu...this story is really close to my heart...something which I longed to write...trust me you will love this Advay like anything...The initial parts will be strictly 18+ exploring their relationship...But I know you all will hate me when the painful part of it will start... 😆
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Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani

Thanks priyuuu...yes he is a high rank cop along with another hidden entity... 😉


no one can really resist falling for him
I cannot wait to read more
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Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani

Priyuuu...this story is really close to my heart...something which I longed to write...trust me you will love this Advay like anything...The initial parts will be strictly 18+ exploring their relationship...But I know you all will hate me when the painful part of it will start... 😆


I already love him Nazia
I want to know more about him
I will never hate u for anything
I may cry at those parts though
I assume this will be a passionate love story
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Originally posted by: 2filmy


no one can really resist falling for him
I cannot wait to read more

He will redefine what love is 😳
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Originally posted by: 2filmy


I already love him Nazia
I want to know more about him
I will never hate u for anything
I may cry at those parts though
I assume this will be a passionate love story

Aww my bae...Yes it is an intense and passionate love story...As much as you will love him...you will also cry for what all he had gone through in his life..Similarly for Chandini...

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