Genuine heartfelt thanks to Arshics and Arshi67...For Absolute delight

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Posted: 7 years ago
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You gals may think, I'm gone nuts!
Khushi ki taraha shaayad main bhi baahari duniya ke liye ajeeb hoon!

But I totally and completely believe in one wise moment that Dee had given her Chhote! " Koi baat dil mein aaye agar to bol deni chaahiye".

So 🤗wanted to give a genuine thanks for , perhaps unknowingly yet gifting me with life's best delight! requesting to read on though longish post😳.

Arshics wrote the "musical" Dance of soul;, pure melody of ADNI chemistry put into magical poetry; on 28th. That triggered Arshi67 to share wonderful Iqbal Couplet and Ghalib's reply to him on 29th.

Ghalib is the shayar that you calling any shayar Ghalib will be like Bharatratna Award. Difficult to achieve his kind of level. What you both brought back was my lost love for shaayari and went googling to get some urdu words meanings. That took me to Barun's shayari in tanahaiyaan serial trailer opening shot.

Was so enthralled by the verse once again that I shared the two beautiful stanzas with my hubby during long weekend. Both of us were reminiscing in the beauty that Ghalib has created. I said, it connects with each one of us because we have in our family , where these stanzas are applicable.

My hubby took me to another plateau and said, why do you restrict to individual families? isn't this kind of beauty applicable globally, think of Galilio ! Would he not feel the same about the discoveries he was bringing to the world and world just gave him pain back.

Understanding the "global" ness of the verse, both our eyes moistened up for perhaps everybody who suffers this way in the world.

That moment I realised that it's not over umpteenth number of times that we both share laughter together; but rather a rare yet precious, joint moistening of the eyes over a literature piece... that I am assured once again after 25 years " We both are made for each other".

genuine heartfelt million thanks to you both for directing me to this moment , even though indirectly! And my thanks to all the indirect causes which trail behind your posts.

The verse in reference given below.

aah ko chaahiye; ik umr asar hone tak

kaun jiita hai teri; zulf ke sar hone tak

hamne maana ki taghaaful na karoge lekin

Khaak ho jaenge ham tum ko Khabar hone tak


( A sigh of pain perhaps needs a lifetime to have desired effect;

but who has got that life till you get your tangles sorted out?

I know that you won't ignore me just like that

but; by the time you realise, I might be burnt down into ashes)




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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely post and lovely verses Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The words truly touch your heart
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Some typo errors in the beautiful shaayari corrected in the update.
Priyu, my apology but would you please read just the verse part again, an absolute beauty by Ghalib!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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lovely post.
u all writers are life of this forum. You guys are incredible with words. Realy enjoy reading ur posts.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017

Some typo errors in the beautiful shaayari corrected in the update.

Priyu, my apology but would you please read just the verse part again, an absolute beauty by Ghalib!


Yes Di I read again
And it touches the soul
Such brilliant word play
This is a master piece
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Andr_eana

lovely post.
u all writers are life of this forum. You guys are incredible with words. Realy enjoy reading ur posts.


I agree fully
All the writers write so well
And keep the forum alive
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I like the way you ended up appreciating your Hubby and the sentiments that he shares with you all these years. 👏
I wish he also reads it. 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Neha...
That's beautiful..
Wow. ... It's incredible you share such a beautiful moment with your hubby..
My hubby is ASR pratham kinds..
When I say.. love ... Life.. shayaris...
' What the crap !' would be his reaction.
We don't even en watch romantic movies together...
He will fall asleep in the middle😆

Please clear this doubt.. when you say even after 25 years... You mean you have been married for 25 years...
Damn..I thought you are hyper 20 girl like priya😳😲
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love these lines. Yes it truely touches the heart. a very beautifull shayeri. agreed to all u said.

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