ADni OS - The Truth Shall Break You - Part 2

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2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Angels11

Thanks Priya 😳

Oh you are most welcome 😃

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meera

@mira

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

So beautiful...I was imagining this whole scene in mind while reading... Chandini in her big bindi avatar...A grown woman ...Advay in Baruns angst best version...Like the day he witnessed terrace scene in pratham...

I want Chandini to fight Advay tooth and nail ...Never give up...

But when she meets Dev I want her to give up... Like the way you have written ... Give upon everything...Her fight earlier has to be so ferocious that when she gives up , Advay should see what Dev meant to her... And she should never forgive Dev...Even if she forgive Advay...

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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

In the show I want her to heal him with her love
I want her to show him that she never betrayed his trust

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Angels11

@Angels11

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: mira
So beautiful...I was imagining this whole scene in mind while reading... Chandini in her big bindi avatar...A grown woman ...Advay in Baruns angst best version...Like the day he witnessed terrace scene in pratham...
I want Chandini to fight Advay tooth and nail ...Never give up...

But when she meets Dev I want her to give up... Like the way you have written ... Give upon everything...Her fight earlier has to be so ferocious that when she gives up , Advay should see what Dev meant to her... And she should never forgive Dev...Even if she forgive Advay...

That is what I had envisaged Mira. I ve always felt that Chandni will break only when she finds out that Advay is Dev. That will be her downfall. That is why the name of this series is The Truth shall break you!

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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Will this happen in the show too ?
Will she break when she knows he is Dev ?

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Ramya

@The-Heart

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Another mind blowing update 👏👏

Very heart touching, you penned their feelings beautifully

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Such a intense dilgs & emotns...
Ah!love it

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amortentia15

@amortentia15

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Wow angels!! Beautifully written.👍🏼 I love the way you describe the characters and their thought process especially barun's characters in your stories and love the way you use words! the lucidity and vividness in your writing is ⭐️

Thank you for this wonderful writeup