||FF: Written in stars|| Last part Pg 77 - Page 34

Wow awesome ff .

Its time to get healed for chandani.
And Advay's redemption should be powerful.
She needs space and break from him.
Loved the update.
Its such an emotional roller coaster ride.
Continue soon.

Dear Ashleydevlin

You are very talented. Just because of you I got to read this beautiful story. I had read all the chapters in last two days. To start with, I wasn't sure if I will like this story, as it was way different from ipkknd plot. But I didn't stop, not realizing when I got hooked up with it.

It took me 5 hours each day to finish all the chapters.

On day one, I was so much into it that I only stopped reading, when literally my eyes were shutting on me.

I felt for chandni so badly that I had cried many times for her, during reading. It made me so emotional. I wasn't angry at advay too.

There is not even a single thing I would want different, to change or dissatisfied about, in your story. You have brought story to where it feels chandnis sabar has run out. She needed care.

I know you will do perfect justice to story in future chapters as well. But then again, I want advay should know about all the little struggles chandni had to go through during her Delhi stay. "Her purse getting robbed, story behind potato bag, her not having money for lunches. And veer should know about it too. Because he has lived every moment of that incident and he should pay back by knowing about all the difficult times chnndni had been through. Please don't try to fast forward this story, like most films try finish on happy ending. It will be beautiful to see chandni settling in her life. And we can watch her go back into her tiny avatar.

And at the end I would finish by saying:

you are very talented.

eagerly waiting for the next update.

I hope u update tonight
Waiting for it eagerly

I can't wait for the next update

Waiting for ur next update...

This story is super addictive.
Can't wait for the next part.

Hmm so Advay is delegating most of his work
He will shift to Delhi for now
Loved Arnav Advay conversation
Liked how Arnav explained things to her
But Arnav does not know some parts
So he feels it is only guilt for Chandni now
Advay was right it was not just guilt
Advay Veer wants Meghna help too

I loved Advay Veer Meghna talk too
Meghna knew a lot of things in the past
But I doubt Chandni will talk to him so soon
Meghna does not know what happened later
The brother sister bonding is nice here