Quagmire. AdNi OS. (Author's note on page 3)

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2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Please write more
I would love them all

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preetz0110

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

This was simply amazing. Hope its played out like this in the show as well.

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Fa13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

A hug🤗 to you dear for writing such a absolute beautiful OS!

So loved it!

Beautifully u've penned the emotions, poetic lines were used in a perfect way, Advay dialogues & his way of using his trump card..was superb!

I hope in the show it will turn out like this.

Do write more on AdNi if possible!

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mayukatta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

You are kidding right ? Criticism???

This is perfect. Just perfect. I loved reading it.

Your imagination and writing style both are outstanding..

I wish I could write like this... Damn Iam so struck k with my screen play writing style that words like these never come out easily for me.

Keep writing dear👏

It's beautiful in every way😊

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BIackSwan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Wow! Who can tell it's your first attempt cuz I loved it. Do write again as I'm looking forward to your writing 👍🏼

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amortentia15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Amazing!!!! Is OS ko koi gul ke paas bhejo re!!! OM ki deewani you are as creative as omkara Singh oberoi😆😆 loved it

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shibaniana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

WOW.

I have no words.

This... This is the essence of Advay and Chandni.

And the shayris... Mashallah.

Please please keep writing.

And please add me to your pm list.

Thank you so much for writing this. This was amazing.

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Omkideewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Thank you everyone for such amazing replies and comments. I have a number of post restriction hence why i can't reply to every one individually but i will definitely write more in the future thanks to all the encouragement you all have given me.😊

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amortentia15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Omkideewani
Thank you everyone for such amazing replies and comments. I have a number of post restriction hence why i can't reply to every one individually but i will definitely write more in the future thanks to all the encouragement you all have given me.😊

yes please do write more and lots more😊

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2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Omkideewani
Thank you everyone for such amazing replies and comments. I have a number of post restriction hence why i can't reply to every one individually but i will definitely write more in the future thanks to all the encouragement you all have given me.😊

You should definitely write more

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