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AdvNi OS - Secret Wala Love

| Prompt: Advay and Chandni are in a secret relationship. |

No revenge concept. Healthy relationship AdvNi.

I'm making this totally on a whim. Not sure if I want to make a series out of this. But it sounds like a good concept. The episode from the other day gave me so much inspiration

P.S.: I have not checked for grammar or spelling.

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"Jiji, we're going to have to move out. So what are you going to miss about this house?" Shikha inquired as she stuff her mouth with food, beside Meghna.

Chandni smiled lightheartedly as she thought about the question. It was a no brainer. "This kitchen." She turned her head to her to younger sisters. They didn't seem amused.

"Wow Jiji, what a line! Just like a TV serial heroine." Meghna got up off the counter and mused, walking to Chandni, "This kitchen.." Imitating her sister, as Meghna placed her hand on Chandni's shoulder as she was washing dishes. Meghna walked back shortly as Chandni called her dumbru.

Shikha remained serious as ever, almost unusually so. Chandni frowned as she asked. "Really, if this house is gone, what are we going to do?"

Chandni walked up to her sisters, they were depressed beyond reason. But Chandni, she had faith. "We won't have to leave this house nor will anyone else in our family have to. That's my promise to you." Chandni promised her sisters as she glowed.

"And how are you going to do that?" Meghna replied, genuinely curious to what Chandni was thinking.

"We don't see him, but he's there. My Bholenath won't let anything happen to us." Chandni reassured her younger sisters. Meghna smiled at the thought. Shikha was not convinced, she frowned. Chandni tapped Shikha's head lightly.

"And what's with the long face?" Chandni giggled as she cheered up Shikha. "Come on, show me that smile. That Allahabadi smile." Shikha refused, still frowning. Chandni poked her repeated in the stomach. "Come on, come on."

"Jiji!" Shikha squealed as they all laughed.

"Alright finish up quickly so I can wash those plates." Shikha and Meghna finished promptly as she spoke, handing the plates to their elder sister.

Chandni took them and washed them quickly. In the mood for some games, she challenged Meghna Shikha to a game. "Megu, catch!" The plate was tossed and crashed onto the floor. Chandni frowned at the failed attempt. "Shiku, this time you have to catch it!" The plate crashed again but made a different noise. Chandni turned around to notice her mother and Advay, who got hurt. Chandni froze.

"Chandni!" Indrani scolded.

"Sorry, Ma." Chandni gulped as she looked down in shame.

"I don't know how she made mistake. This never happened before. It won't happen again." Indrani turned to Advay to assure him. Advay stayed silent as he listened to her.

"I'm so dead." Chandni thought to herself. "Wrong place, wrong time, huh? Sorry Advay..."

"And even if a mistake happened again, so what, it's not like he's living here." Shikha retorted, not tolerate this man's presence or Chandni getting in trouble.

"He's staying here. Advay Singh Raizada has bought this house." The sisters looked shocked. Shikha and Meghna turned to each other. Chandni gazed at Advay, she tilted her head, hoping for a sort of explanation.

"Really?!" Chandni spoke aloud. Not sure if this was really happening.

Advay winced in pain. Indrani looked to him. "Forgive us, because of my daughter you got hurt."

"No, it's alright. Mistakes happen. I'm sure she didn't mean it. The wound isn't that deep either. I'll be fine." Advay assured Indrani as she was slightly embarrassed. Chandni just stared at Advay.

"Chandni," Her mother's voice pulled her out of a trance. "Apply the medicine to his wound." Indrani order her daughter coldly.

"Me? But it's just a small cut." Chandni pretended to refuse. She couldn't act so eager. Indrani was unflinched by her daughter's refusal as Shikha and Meghna looked to each other. Advay raised an eyebrow, almost amused by the answer. "Really, I'll have to punish you for that one later, Chandni." Advay thought to himself, as he tried not to react.

"It's okay, I'll dress it myself." Advay spoke calmly as he turned to leave.

"Stop." Indrani looked to Advay, and then Chandni. "Chandni will dress the wound." Indrani ordered again. Advay and Chandni stare at each other.

Obeying, Advay and Chandni move to another room. The door was closed and locked from the inside. The atmosphere was awkward. Chandni started. "Sorry, I didn't see you." She frowned, asking for forgiveness.

"By the way, who throws plates in the kitchen like that. That too, without looking. Pray tell." Advay leaned his head forward.

"I thought Shiku and Megu would catch it. I didn't think that you'd get hurt." Chandni put down the medicine bottle and cotton balls she found. She cupped Advay's face as she pouted. "I'm sorry." Chandni stared into his eyes, almost tearing up.

Advay melted. He couldn't bring himself to stay mad at her. To tease her. "You are too impossible." Advay thought to himself as he gave her a soft half-smile, holding her waist. "Don't start crying, please. You know I won't be able to bear it." He requested her. Chandni nodded.

Chandni let go of him, she moved towards the table. Chandni opened the bottle and took a cotton ball. She placed the cotton ball over the open lid and shook it once, allowing the medicine to pour into the ball without dropping it anywhere. Chandni turned to Advay, who was sitting down on a chair.

Chandni bent towards Advay, he smiled at her. Was he even in pain or is he just enjoying me nursing him to health? Chandni dabbed on the wound that rested upon Advay's forehead. She pressed lightly trying to make sure the medicine was working. Advay stared at Chandni, simply mesmerized as a wind blew through her hair. Chandni stopped. She stared into his eyes.

Chandni became lost in them.

The silence broke. "Does it hurt?" Chandni quivered.

"No, after your touch, all the pain just faded." Advay grinned. Chandni raised an eyebrow. This man was truly unbelievable.

"Is now really the best time to be acting like a Bollywood hero?" Chandni grumbled. It sounded so romantic but he was clearly still in pain and it was her fault. She just knew it. And Advay was just pretending to make her feel better. "Where do even you find such cheesy lines?"

"I can't help it. It just comes out so naturally when I'm around you." Advay pulled Chandni into his lap. Chandni blushed by his sudden advance. She was at a loss of breath for a short moment as she stared at the passionate fire in his eyes. Advay grinned as he was an inch away from Chandni's face. The colour of pink crossed her cheeks as they gazed at each other.

"Hiding your pain won't change the fact that it's there, stupid." Chandni tapped Advay's forehead lightly.

Advay winced in pain. Chandni gasped. "Sorry, sorry!" Chandni blew on the wound as she pressed the cotton ball lightly on it again.

Advay stopped Chandni. She was caught staring into his eyes once more. Advay inched closer, taking her lips in his.

Advay had found a missing piece of himself as their lips met. Every time their lips met, fireworks went off at every fibre of her being.

They melted into each other. Their tongues intertwined with an equal fervour. His hands caressed her waist as he drank her in. Chandni's lips were heavenly. She moulded perfectly into arms. Chandni was still far too inexperienced for this. But she would not protest against her teacher, Advay.

Advay yearned for Chandni. It was bad enough that they could rarely meet without anyone finding out, but they could even more rarely find time alone. Like this moment now. They were all fleeting. The passion, the longing and the frustration built up into their kiss.

They broke apart for breath after minutes of kissing. This didn't stop Advay from keeping Chandni wrapped in his arms. His lips ran over her neck. They ran down from behind her ear to the left collar of her neck. Advay left a bite mark. Chandni moaned in rapture. She tightened her grip on his body as she reclaimed his lips. Minutes had passed.

Advay and Chandni moved apart for breath once more. Chandni cupped Advay's face once more. He froze. He yearned more for her affection. Chandni placed her forehead on his. Their eyes closed. A few moments had passed.

"Advay, did you really buy our house? But why?" Chandni whispered. She opened her eyes moving her head away. She placed her arms around Advay's neck.

Advay opened his eyes. His thumb caressed her cheek. "Don't worry, it's all part of the plan."

"Plan?" Chandni inquired. She raised eyebrow at that.

"You'll see, eventually." Advay let off a half-smile as he kissed her on the cheek.

"Fine. Don't tell me. Apply it yourself." Chandni teased, leaving his grip, as she placed the cotton ball in his hands. As Chandni stood up and tried leaving, Advay stood up and grabbed her arm.

"What you doing?" Chandni turned to see she was still in his grip.

"Nothing." Advay pretended like he wasn't holding onto her. As if nothing big was happening. He winked at her, much to her surprise.

Chandni shook her head. "Shameless.." She thought to herself.

"Come on na, let me go. Megu might be wondering why I'm taking so long." Chandni begged.

"Only if you kiss me again." Advay demanded from Chandni, pulling her back into his arms. Chandni sighed. She tippy-toed and left a kiss on his cheek. Advay released her arm.

Chandni ran off with pink cheeks across her face. This man will definitely never change.

Advay laughed shaking his head. "This girl..."


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End.

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-Jesal
Edited by LordLuminous - 8 years ago


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deeps_92 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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cute one jesal...wish things were so easy in show too...
i was hoping he will propose her at end in Advay's way
Edited by deeps_92 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was so cute. Please write more scenes like this!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful story
Good to see no revenge for a change
So they are secret lovers ?
Please continue this if you can
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yooo this was adorable omg! I love the secret lovers trope :') Hope you decide to continue the series! :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love it, write more please :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome loved it so much.
Superb.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it to the core.. Felt so real.. It will be awesome if their scenes get a hidden meaning in your stories..That too of a secret love story..Please continue..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeps_92

cute one jesal...wish things were so easy in show too...

i was hoping he will propose her at end in Advay's way


Thanks and sorry, I had to leave it open ended. I was unsure if the way I wrote the concept was going to be accepted.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovesick23

This was so cute. Please write more scenes like this!


Thank you! I might write more if I get the time. Many seem to like it.

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