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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: PSharada



Yes we can comment on Gul's Insta post so hopefully she will read it. But please try not to be negative on condescending. The team already has baggage of attacks from haters, bashers, loonies so let's not add to it. Instead give honest feedback that direction and pace of editing should slow down to allow people to understand the characters and their traits.



Yes yes I know !!
I will try to comment in very decent way but as you know we really really need to inform this to gul
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I saw in the BTS that Shivani is pointing a finger at Barun and he is stepping back when she's in his room. That means from tomorrow itself Chandni will kind of lose a bit of her inhibitions. So yes, she does have anxiety but I think she'll get so angry/emotional over Advay creating havoc in her life that she'll start expressing herself to him like she does to her sisters. She'll basically be herself with him. Till now we've only seen Chandni in a shell when it comes to anyone other than her sisters...even her mom... that's why I find it more hurtful that Chandni will open herself up to Advay and he's ultimately gonna break her trust, destroy her.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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And one thing we have to understand is that this story is actually something that is not linear - I mean that doesn't start from a point and build on from there. Instead we have things happening and then we have this flashes of past coming up. It is really hard to write a non-linear story and maybe the disconnect is happening because of this non-linear fashion of writing the show. Once we have all the past opened up(I have hope on this because Mithali said her cameo is ending in IPK3) the story will move forward in a much better fashion.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I totally agree with you.
They need to show us more about Chandni and what she is feeling about this stranger who has simply popped into her life and is causing such hullabaloo in it. We're only being shown Rabba Ve scenes without actually knowing what might be on her mind because she is neither doing any monologues nor talking to anyone about it. All we know is that she still has post traumatic stress disorder, holds her mother's reputation above all and misses Dev. This is one reason why the takkar scenes aren't having major impact. But from what I see from the new promo, Chandni is showing her sassy side and I am loving it! Signs of resilience finally! 😃 Plus yes, there is no doubt that Barun and Shivani have lovely chemistry as, despite this flaw about Chandu's characterisation, I feel those sparks between them <3 And, Shivani is doing a really good job with Chandni 😳


Honestly speaking, I have no problem with Advay's characterisation. In fact, despite his jerk behaviour and how he is being mean to Chandu, I am still rooting for him because he has been betrayed, and he isn't being a "Arnav Singh Raizada" kind of jerk. Advay has a heart and he is genuinely hurt. What is going to happen next in his life intrigues me. They've shown us a lot about his emotions and strategies so I am able to be empathetic when it concerns him.


Now on the technical side, the first major flaw is DIRECTION and Gul should also tell Harneet to be realistic, give Advay a job, give Chandni solid dialogues while confronting Advay to make their takkars interesting and to pity her show, us and the audience and tell Shivani Shirali to stop experimenting so much and showcasing such a mess in the name of costumes on the show.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: .MyriadOfHues.

I totally agree with you.

They need to show us more about Chandni and what she is feeling about this stranger who has simply popped into her life and is causing such hullabaloo in it. We're only being shown Rabba Ve scenes without actually knowing what might be on her mind because she is neither doing any monologues nor talking to anyone about it. All we know is that she still has post traumatic stress disorder, holds her mother's reputation above all and misses Dev. This is one reason why the takkar scenes aren't having major impact. But from what I see from the new promo, Chandni is showing her sassy side and I am loving it! Signs of resilience finally! 😃 Plus yes, there is no doubt that Barun and Shivani have lovely chemistry as, despite this flaw about Chandu's characterisation, I feel those sparks between them <3 And, Shivani is doing a really good job with Chandni 😳


Honestly speaking, I have no problem with Advay's characterisation. In fact, despite his jerk behaviour and how he is being mean to Chandu, I am still rooting for him because he has been betrayed, and he isn't being a "Arnav Singh Raizada" kind of jerk. Advay has a heart and he is genuinely hurt. What is going to happen next in his life intrigues me. They've shown us a lot about his emotions and strategies so I am able to be empathetic when it concerns him.


Now on the technical side, the first major flaw is DIRECTION and Gul should also tell Harneet to be realistic, give Advay a job, give Chandni solid dialogues while confronting Advay to make their takkars interesting and to pity her show, us and the audience and tell Shivani Shirali to stop experimenting so much and showcasing such a mess in the name of costumes on the show.


@bold:- Totally agree. If there is one thing I would like to see on the show on technical side it would be Shivani Shirali being changed as the costume designer. Her costumes are dragging the show down. And then editing, direction and writing scenes by Harneet. Hopefully since Shivani stopped giving atrocious bell blouses to Chandni in the new promo, I am keeping fingers crossed that Gul is listening to the feedback and is implementing them.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: .Advni.

I saw in the BTS that Shivani is pointing a finger at Barun and he is stepping back when she's in his room. That means from tomorrow itself Chandni will kind of lose a bit of her inhibitions. So yes, she does have anxiety but I think she'll get so angry/emotional over Advay creating havoc in her life that she'll start expressing herself to him like she does to her sisters. She'll basically be herself with him. Till now we've only seen Chandni in a shell when it comes to anyone other than her sisters...even her mom... that's why I find it more hurtful that Chandni will open herself up to Advay and he's ultimately gonna break her trust, destroy her.


Ah. This is very true! Poor Chandu got a big storm coming her way :(
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: .MyriadOfHues.

I totally agree with you.

They need to show us more about Chandni and what she is feeling about this stranger who has simply popped into her life and is causing such hullabaloo in it. We're only being shown Rabba Ve scenes without actually knowing what might be on her mind because she is neither doing any monologues nor talking to anyone about it. All we know is that she still has post traumatic stress disorder, holds her mother's reputation above all and misses Dev. This is one reason why the takkar scenes aren't having major impact. But from what I see from the new promo, Chandni is showing her sassy side and I am loving it! Signs of resilience finally! 😃 Plus yes, there is no doubt that Barun and Shivani have lovely chemistry as, despite this flaw about Chandu's characterisation, I feel those sparks between them <3 And, Shivani is doing a really good job with Chandni 😳


Honestly speaking, I have no problem with Advay's characterisation. In fact, despite his jerk behaviour and how he is being mean to Chandu, I am still rooting for him because he has been betrayed, and he isn't being a "Arnav Singh Raizada" kind of jerk. Advay has a heart and he is genuinely hurt. What is going to happen next in his life intrigues me. They've shown us a lot about his emotions and strategies so I am able to be empathetic when it concerns him.


Now on the technical side, the first major flaw is DIRECTION and Gul should also tell Harneet to be realistic, give Advay a job, give Chandni solid dialogues while confronting Advay to make their takkars interesting and to pity her show, us and the audience and tell Shivani Shirali to stop experimenting so much and showcasing such a mess in the name of costumes on the show.


EXACTLY! And this is my major issue with playing 'rabba ve' - no matter how much I love the AdNi scenes, we are not desperate for 'rabba ve' moments yet, why not spend time now showing their confrontations and giving us a glimpse of Chandni's thoughts? She has the expressions, like I can see her scared and confused but her THOUGHTS about this dude are never put across to us as an audience, and in the next scene she's completely back to normal like a guy didn't just try to threaten her lol. And now, it looks like we are gonna go from not knowing what's on her mind, to her showing tashan to Advay 😆 Chalo, a sassy Chandu is definitely welcome, tho I just hope they show a realistic, unhurried transition of her from now to Miss Sassypants.


I actually really enjoy Chandni-Indrani scenes, that's one aspect of Chandni which shines through as you said - she loves and respects her mother and holds her above all.

Tbh with you I used to be so confused about how a grown man could hold an 8 year old's words accountable for his parents death. But seriously - if I was in his place, I'd seriously murder everyone involved in my parent's murder and happily go to jail. Not even joking. So I totally get him. Again, it's just the execution of his scenes I have a problem with and that is completely on the director/editor etc. IMO.

YES YES! To everything you said, especially the last paragraph! 😆 Aur director say yaad aya, I wish we had gotten Lalit Mohan on board 😔 Think he was one of the QH directors and that is like my favorite hindi serial ever, well at least the first season of it was lol. No offence to this Aman guy, but he's just not cutting it :|
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello nandini... You don't have to clarify abt previous season...
all fans here agree to whatever u have mentioned!
Direction and editing is lagging...
When show started I was skeptical about shivani because of negativity...I decided to give her one full month before judging her as she is new... I thought of ignoring her shortcoming for a month... But the girl won my heart in first Epsiode
Now I am giving same time to director and editor...they might Be new... Let them learn and do... If we can notice technical glitches then sure SP and Gul would...They will do something... Let's wait for sometime
And yes I badly want to see chandu point of view! More than anything I am interested in story... Costume, editing and direction I can ignore... But story is important to me
I want chandus pov on advay
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeps_92

Hello nandini... You don't have to clarify abt previous season...
all fans here agree to whatever u have mentioned!
Direction and editing is lagging...
When show started I was skeptical about shivani because of negativity...I decided to give her one full month before judging her as she is new... I thought of ignoring her shortcoming for a month... But the girl won my heart in first Epsiode
Now I am giving same time to director and editor...they might Be new... Let them learn and do... If we can notice technical glitches then sure SP and Gul would...They will do something... Let's wait for sometime
And yes I badly want to see chandu point of view! More than anything I am interested in story... Costume, editing and direction I can ignore... But story is important to me
I want chandus pov on advay


Haha that clarification was the just for the benefit of those who like derailing from the main issues.


Everything you said echoes my thoughts. Guess it is best to give them more time. If amateurs like myself can notice issues, surely those professionals will lol.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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They have just released the new promo
Let us be a bit patient and wait for this track
I am sure the CVs will do justice to the track
Editing has been better than the last week
We need more insight into Chandu thoughts

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