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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Wow she got some one whom she could confide him
I like this Abhijeet already
He heard her out and made her feel better
At times random strangers can provide you solace
Just by hearing out all your pain
Beautiful update

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Sometimes, the best conversations are the silent conversations... Having to sit next to your friend who understands you, Say nothing at all, and yet feel very light when you leave. You brought it out very subtly and beautifully, at the crucial turning point of the story.

Seek, and you shall receive... Abhijeet and Chandni both needed someone to share their pain and yet keep it secretively. Both have lent a shoulder to the other person to cry. Just goes to show that good friendship need not be of the same gender.

Ok... Enough with the goodies. Now for the complaint part. It's a very very short update, my friend. Next time, please post a longer chapter ok ?

Edited by rajatshweta - 8 years ago

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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Rahul and Anita should be punched
Who behaves like that ?
So he is still angry with her
And he cannot be with any one else
Nice update

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Sometimes we don't understand the value of the person we have, until we lose them.

So, the girl that Advay got infatuated with, turns out to be a passing cloud very soon.

And he starts recognising the missing pieces in the jigsaw puzzle of his life.

The sudden presence of Chandni at the Bar stirs up the hidden emotions in him - which he is still not yet completely aware of. So, he allows his friends to handle the situation. Careless move. Which he is gonna regret later.

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Loveena

@lovesick23

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Oh god why???? I'm sure she was not even waiting for him. Why humiliate her like that when she stopped following him now? 😭

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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

I feel so bad for Chandni now
She did not deserve this treatment at all

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

This is beautiful. Please update soon.

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Shreya

@Shivay_ki_loves

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

God this is the best story of advini that I have read so far . Read all the chapters in one go that also in b/with the lectures. Imagine I was so hooked. U just can't let it hang like this .please please give me a long very long update at least two chapters. Please be a regular updater or else I'll suffocate out of curiosity.

I wanna read more and more. Update soon dear

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Shivay_ki_loves
God this is the best story of advini that I have read so far . Read all the chapters in one go that also in b/with the lectures. Imagine I was so hooked. U just can't let it hang like this .please please give me a long very long update at least two chapters. Please be a regular updater or else I'll suffocate out of curiosity.
I wanna read more and more. Update soon dear

I suggest you read the other story "Written in the Stars" too, in this Forum. ANOTHER great work by Ashley.

@Ashley - you should give a Master link of your previous work below each Chapter for new readers' benefit.