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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Read all the updates in one go, amazing update.
Loved it, continue soon please.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 7

So he just teases her and then becomes serious
I love that he opened up to her and shared his feelings
She understands him better now
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 8

So they are both tired of the relation
Suddenly the relation is suffocating and tiresome
Who is this stranger ?
What is his connection to the story ?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2filmy

Read all the parts at one go
This is so different concept
Something has happened in the past
She is angry with him and had left him
He seems to love her really now
And go to any extent to get her
How did she get that scar ?


I hope you enjoyed reading all the parts together. You will find about the scar in upcoming chapters.

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Wow she kissed him just like that
She pursued him for so long
She was so determined
I admire her dedication
Awesome update



That's chandhni. she follows her emotions. Thank you for liking it.

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Part 5

Chandni was trying so hard to pacify him
But he was so cold towards her
Poor girl even got wet in the rain
Waiting for him for so long
Now what is he planning with Rahul ?
awesome update


It's easier to be loved than to love someone else. In next chapter you will find out advay's plan.

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Part 6

I love how she was so frank with him
She told him what attracted her towards him
I found his rules for her so strange
At least both are being open now
Nice update


Strange in what way? . Thanks

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Chapter 7

So he just teases her and then becomes serious
I love that he opened up to her and shared his feelings
She understands him better now


I enjoyed writing this part.

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Chapter 8

So they are both tired of the relation
Suddenly the relation is suffocating and tiresome
Who is this stranger ?
What is his connection to the story ?


Relationship demands work from both partners otherwise it is just broken piece of glass which keeps on hurting you. To know about stranger you will need to keep reading :)



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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: raji_sudha

Awwe ashley i really missed ur writeups you go girl .I still used to read written in star on aslok


Thank you :) I hope you will enjoy this one too.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: zajedno

I'm not the person who would first come to the man and openly say that I love him. I think it's a better idea to let a man say that. You see what she gets for her confession. Humility and nothing else. Thank you for this. I like. I hope you will continue soon.


Nothing in life is free even love.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: bm11

Glad you started a new one.
You've set the bar rather high with "Written in stars"
It was an interesting piece of work.
There's one thing about your writing, you create... I don;t know how to say it... a kind of an atmosphere which is so rare in ff.
I know you are not in answering mode usually but nevertheless i wish you good luck
with your new work.😉



Thank you I love each and everyone of my work. I don't know if you will like this one but I hope you do. Thanks for your warm wishes. This one is finished in my head, now just putting it on paper
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: hailly

Read all the updates in one go, amazing update.
Loved it, continue soon please.

Thank you :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very interesting and different... loving it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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By strange I means those are weird rules
any way
Relationship demands work from both partners otherwise it is just broken piece of glass which keeps on hurting you.
This is so true

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